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Reviews for Jareth's Heir

By : TristramKnight
  • From ANON - bailey on October 07, 2015
    i need to know how th story ends!! please finish it!!!
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  • From ANON - amore1993 on August 03, 2012
    please update!
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  • From xforgetmenot on May 18, 2012
    Dear God, this story is pure genius! You must update soon! I look forward to it! :D
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  • From knichols88 on March 05, 2012
    Really good! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From DarkFire on October 17, 2011
    Such a pity if you don't continue this story.
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  • From lillyput93 on September 19, 2011
    please please write more!!!! I have to know how it ends!!!
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  • From eldachan on November 07, 2009
    I really enjoy your story!
    I love how you keep the characters believable.
    Please update soon!

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2009
    Hello,
    Will you be updating this story? I have it saved on my comp and check it daily but if you have no plans on continuing with it I'm going to delete it from my comp to save me some space. I do hope you do add to it because it's a great story but if you can't... well then that's just the way it is. Please let me know either way.
    Many thanks!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2008
    That is just out and out cruel!! You're as demonic as Jareth. Update soon, please!!!
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  • From cukid9 on December 05, 2008
    I almost didn't read this because I saw you had only two chapters and hadn't updated in awhile. I'm glad I did, though. This is an interesting twist on the usual fanfic. You've given Sarah a whole new set of problems (I like that she's raising Toby on her own. I think it will make her a little tougher). I like how it was Toby who wished them away, and how he wants to stay in the Underground - and is wondering how he can get his sister to want the same. I can imagine Toby coming up with all kinds of schemes to convince Sarah to stay.

    On the down side, though, it sort of kills me that you introduced Jareth into the story and then haven't updated in so long! The only other critique I have about this is, in the beginning right after we learn about the parents' death, I got a little confused that the next paragraph was a time jump. A small symbol between those two paragraphs, or an extra couple of spaces, would make that clearer.

    I hope you haven't abandoned this story entirely. It's always so disheartening to read something as well-written and as intriguing as this story only to have it discontinued (although, I do understand how real life can forestall the urge or ability to write). I'll keep my eye out and will eagerly read a new chapter when you have the chance to update!

    ~cu-kid
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  • From Icklekins on September 02, 2008
    I really like the story so far, and I can't wait to read where you're going with this. Do keep updating!
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  • From Eilonwy on August 19, 2008
    this story is so creative i adore it
    the way you have brought sarah and toby back to the labyrinth is pure genious
    please post the newest chapter as soon as you can

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