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Reviews for When Joker Met Harley

By : MarianTheBlackadder
  • From heather360 on October 02, 2008
    WOW! That chapter 8 was the cliff hanger of a lifetime. BRILLIANT story. The Jokers speach is so realistic, I found myself smacking my husband in the arm and saying " Listen to this! " more than once. I love that your working with real characters, and breathing a great deal of there authentic personality into them. I can not wait for more! Newly, but now ever faithful. heather
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  • From Ichizeo on September 25, 2008
    I'm not too sure what I think about this story. There were points of repetition and error... but my main concern is shoving two very different characters together. The problem I have with a lot of TDK Joker fics that try to include Harley Quinn is that there's little to no change in her character from the Animated Series. You're good at writing for the animated Harley, but I don't see how she fits with Nolan and Ledger's Joker. She needs a bit of change in personality, not just background, ya know? She needs a dark personality here and you made her almost childish. The Joker also needs a little bit more depth. He really comes off as Harley's tool in the first couple of chapters when it should be the other way around. Considering he never cared for her *too* much in the first place, I have difficulty believing him to be the jealous type. ESPECIALLY since this is the Ledger version.

    It also seems you didn't do a whole lot of research and it shows in the way you misspelled Arkham as "Arkem" and "Arkum" (you used both multiple times). I think you messed up a few character names as well (like Lucius). For some reason, this really bothered me. There was also some misinterpretation of Arkham's setting. You treated it like a normal mental ward and seemed to forget that this is the place where Batman's most vicious criminals get sent to. I don't think there's any room for security flaws.

    All in all, it's an okay story... but as a Batman story, it misses the boat. Sorry. Don't let the words get to you. I just think you should research more past Nolan's Batman series. Good luck in the future!
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  • From MarianTheBlackadder on September 24, 2008
    Na, it's cool. I really don't mind constructive criticism :)

    I know my spelling and grammer are absolutely horrid. The trouble comes from typing 90+ words a minute and typing as the thoughts come rather then taking the time to go back and fix spelling and gramatical errors :(

    I know I desperately need a beta to go through all of my stories and make corrections. If anyone feels like they are up to the tedious task, please let me know ;)

    Oceans of Love, ~Marian The Blackadder~
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  • From oliversangel on September 24, 2008
    This is a very good story. I enjoy their twisted relationship very much, and I am amazed at how well that you capture the tone and the dialogue. I only have one minor complaint. I hope it doesn't offend you, and I am not trying to be mean, but there are some minor spelling and grammar errors, which are distracting while reading. I know that some people feel that Beta's will make fun of them behind their backs, or will butcher their stories, but if you like, I can look over your stories, for spelling, if you want. Please don't be upset. I am just offering, because this is a fantastic story, otherwise!! If you are interested, let me know!! dncs_angel@yahoo.com
    I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Thank you for sharing your story with us!! XXOO
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  • From ccangell3 on September 24, 2008
    VERY COOL!!! So the Joker actually does have feelings for her, go get'em J!!!!

    Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From JayGrrl on September 20, 2008
    Oooh, Crane that bastard! >.o

    Love it! More please :3
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  • From RiamtheWanderer on September 18, 2008
    Another great chapter that was even more interesting then the last!
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  • From Raynee on September 17, 2008
    poor Harley, can't wait for the Crane x Joker showdown
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  • From ccangell3 on September 15, 2008
    And the plot thickens!!! Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From Raynee on September 15, 2008
    Save her Mista J!!
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  • From RiamtheWanderer on September 15, 2008
    Wow, a new twist. I suspected there was something between Harley and Crane, but this is much different. Still loving it!
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  • From Lulu on September 15, 2008
    Just wanted to say, I really love your storytelling - This plot is great. Looking forward to more!!
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  • From RiamtheWanderer on September 10, 2008
    Glad to see you didn't end this. Waiting to read more about Crane and Harley. Keep up the wonderful work.
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  • From Raynee on September 10, 2008
    Glad to have this back. I want Joker to find Harley and take care of crane, now!
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  • From ccangell3 on September 10, 2008
    Nice!!! Glad to see your back and can't wait to see what Crane/Scarecrow has in store. Also, I have to wonder will there be a point where Joker will try to find her??? MMMMM.

    Hurry back with more!!!
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