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Reviews for A Union of Convenience II

By : Keen
  • From Firesblood on October 17, 2008
    Wonderful! Thank you so much for the update. It was just the thing I've needed today. I very much look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kittyZ on October 17, 2008
    Woohooo back again.
    Loving it.
    KittyZ
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on October 16, 2008
    LMAO!! Hit him again! LOL. Gotta love it. So long apart and still the same old relationship. Great work. That was quite a long chapter and well worth the wait. Can't wait to see what's next. Keep up the great work. :D
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  • From DasGrauen on October 16, 2008
    *joins Amentet on the knees and look with big puppy eye while begging for more Please PLease Please!!!!! I want to know what happens next this reunion was awesome. Isis hit him more! He needs that!
    (and before I forget: I want to see Kai die painfully)
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  • From Amentet on September 26, 2008
    PLEASE UPDATE THIS!!! PLEASE??? *gets down on her knees and begs* I'm dying here!!! Pretty, pretty please with a big cherry on top? I absolutely LOVED the first story...I can't tell you how excited I am to read the sequel. I love your writing style and your characters are very real and believable. Keep up the great work and PLEASE update again soon!

    ~Amentet
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on August 07, 2008
    I guess things will change for Alshir once Isis is back in his sights. He just doesn't care about being Elder. He became one to protect her.
    Drowning himself in females trying to fill the void Isis left isn't working. They both need to stop fronting like they don't need each other.
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  • From DeathGodDist on August 03, 2008
    Hah, now this is a great start to a sequel.

    Isis has made a new life for herself, but for what purpose? The hunters trailing her imply that she has fled before, so is she just going from place to place setting up new identities for herself each time? I wonder what her goals are.

    And Ali'shir, man how he has fallen, a prisoner of his own desires and a pretty sorry elder to boot. He definitely needs an ass kicking to get himself back on top of things again.

    Anyway, this is getting good already, I'll be reading this one through and through. :)
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  • From XXallthatjazzxX on August 03, 2008
    Oh mah goodness.
    Ali'shir is a /mess/
    MESS I tell you.
    Apparently not fit at the moment to be a Lead Elder. >>
    I feel bad for him.. kinda.. sorta..
    And LOL '/Jane/' still kicks some ass I see :3333 and apparently still waits for something(*cough*one*cough*)
    Eeeeppp! Good start to the sequel! Can't wait for your next update!!
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  • From ANON - ashesxx2xxashes on August 02, 2008
    Awesome!!! September can't get here fast enough.

    ashesxx2xxashes
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  • From midnighteyes on August 02, 2008
    I am finally caught up!! And all i can say is WoW!!!! you done it again... have me hooked!!!!
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  • From kooritenshi on August 01, 2008
    I'm so glad you're making a sequal! I loved the original story! Isis is my hero! She's so realistic and amazing and so is Ali'shir! Anyways, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

    Thanks so much,
    eyexheartxreita
    AKA. Koori
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on July 31, 2008
    Great start Keenstuff.

    I see Ali'shir hasn't pulled himself together as Lead Elder yet. It'll be very interesting to see what happens when Rath'ol and Hay'un meet up with Isis. I can see a serious 'yautja butt kickin' session happening. lol Much to the Yautja's suprise too. XD And I wonder if that was what was on the message. That someone had finally found Isis.

    Next chapter please, when you are able
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  • From ANON - nova_myth on July 31, 2008
    Hm, I believe I know who Jane really is... eh??
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on July 31, 2008
    Ooooyeah! Sequel is drawing me in big time. I love the way you write. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on July 30, 2008
    OOOOO! I am titillated by the prospect of this new thrill ride. I simple cannot wait to see all the twists and turns this one is going to take. Very nicely started. And from what I have seen so far, it will be a match to the first. So, don't worry, the sequel will be just fine!

    Oh, I did find one little hang-up. In the very beginning. You have the mother named as Maria and then it changes to Marca. So, I'm guessing that the first one is the mistake. Other than that, it was awesomeness on a stick!!!
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