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Reviews for A Union of Convenience II

By : Keen
  • From ANON - chancelor22 on December 19, 2008
    Damn, another chapter means that I have to write another review. You know...I'm thinking I'm just gonna copy and paste. LOL Just kidding! And you suck! Making me think that Ali had died...again. The suspense was wonderful and I almost teared up as I was reading it. And then...'you dirty faker!' That was just too good. Also...I would offer to beta for you, but I really don't have time with work and all. But I do so love your writing and can't wait to see more of it. Take care, girlie! :D
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  • From ANON - Bee on December 14, 2008
    Whoa, like seriously I am really confused but in a good way. I like the fact that I am not sure quite what is happening yet, but that every chapter opens up a new clue. So Isis left Ali, she started a new life on earth, there is something strange happening on earth and I think maybe those body guards work for the son of Douglass and that the son wants to meet Isis since he took up his father's work. But this is all guessing on my part! haha. I love this story and I love Isis so I am so happy you are writing this sequel!!
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  • From LadyAnubis on December 07, 2008
    Heya, total newbie to predaphile stuff, and the first thing I found was yours - I have to say its the best thing I've written in this section :D. Fabulous, please continue!
    Xxx
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  • From Amentet on December 01, 2008
    I am so ecstatic! I loved this chapter. Lots of excitement and wonderful descriptions. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next one. If I haven't already said it before, I'll say it now: You are a very talented writer. PLEASE update again soon. Please?

    ~Amentet
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  • From ANON - midnighteyes on November 27, 2008
    I am very happy for thanksgiving.. I haven't even read it yet and i'm doing the happy dance!!!! Thanks for the gift of a chapter.. Thank you... Thank you.... Thank you !!!
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on November 27, 2008
    you know...the twists and turns in this fic are just astounding. I really have no idea what to expect or who/what we might get to see next. And as always, don't worry about how long it takes to update so long as you do. We will wait for however long it takes. I love these characters and what they are doing/going through. It's like chocolate!! Keep up the great work. Have a Happy Thanksgiving!! :D
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on November 27, 2008
    Thanks. I have a feeling Ali might kidnap her, but we'll see. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2008
    I loved ur story! I didn't like the 1st ending in the 1st story. I didn't want her 2 die. I was interested 2 know more about ali'shir's family and how a yautja female got with a human male and had 2 kids.(a prequal type story perhaps?) please update asap. Have isis and ali'shir get back 2gether now!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jennie on November 02, 2008
    I see what you're doing. You're ... not putting up a new chapter .___.
    I'm excited as it is, that my favorite Predator-story has a sequel, but I can't be the only one sitting and yanking my hair when there's no new chapter?
    Except me being extremely impatient, I'm glad to see someone writing so well, and taking their time on writing something good :)
    And as many have said before me... Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Wranch on October 21, 2008
    It's great to see the sequel! And it feels like the plot's more complicated than the last one, with both humans and predators authority generating troubles for them, I can't wait to read the next chapter=]
    Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Amentet on October 20, 2008
    You have officially made my day!!! I was actually giddy with excitement when I saw that you updated. I can't even begin to tell you how eager I am for the next chapter. I'm loving it!!! Please update again soon! Please? Please? Please? *puppy dog eyes*

    ~Amentet
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  • From DeathGodDist on October 20, 2008
    Hah! First time they see eachother in who knows how long and all she wants to do is bash him in the head. I guess some things never change :D

    I'm glad to see you finally continue on with this one Keen. I'm definitely looking forward to finding out what exactly is going on and what led up to this current situation from the time when they parted.

    So entertaining, and such a treat to read. Cannot wait for more. :)
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  • From midnighteyes on October 19, 2008
    OMG!! So glad to see an update!! I thought the worest... But i am happy now!! Thank you so much for continue this story. Bravo! Bravo!

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  • From ANON - Bee on October 19, 2008
    Hi Keen. Yes I am so glad I am able to review again. Before we could review freely, then we had to log in, and now we can review freely again. First of all I love this story, the first one and the now this sequel. However, I am so lost as to what is happening, Isis obviously left Ali and started a new life with humans. Now he is back and I am wondering if he was part of those hunters but probably not because they were going to hurt her. hmm...very interesting. I love your stories. I think maybe you re-edited the first part so I am going to read that again, just in case I am missing something for this new sequel.
    I love love Isis and I am so glad she is back. I hope Ali is there to take her back because he has been laying with all this other women when he clearly is still in love Isis.
    I can't wait until the next chapter. Have I mentioned how much I love this story? haha.
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  • From ANON - Tiki on October 18, 2008
    I have been waiting for this update! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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