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Reviews for A Union of Convenience II

By : Keen
  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on May 20, 2009
    Thank you for the B'Day wishes and the tease. I'd like to see Isis tie him up and tease the crap out of him only day HEHE.

    I hope Ali'shir finds out who killed Heron, Bahdri and all. Could be closer to home than what he would like? Like former mate and son maybe! I know we will find out.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 13, 2009
    Yay. it's back...but it's not updated... oh well. i'm just glad to see it's back! see ya next update.
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on April 18, 2009
    I like about cried when this disappeared from the site the other day. I grieved the loss of these two dynamic characters you created. Pitiful...yeah I know. This is a great story.
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  • From ANON - Wranch on April 15, 2009

    Great to see them finally work things out, I mean, they always care about their faces and everything, and it's kind of tense when Ali lost control.
    I like the last paragraph especially, that's such a commitment, and they're home with each other again.
    Looking forward to reading what happens next =)
    (more nerdism?)

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  • From ANON - Bee on April 05, 2009
    That was intensely beautiful. I am really glad Ali and Isis made up and that she chose to stay with him. They belong together. I can't wait for the next chapter and reading what you have in store for her new life as the Lead Elder's mate. Yes, I am definitely keeping the hope alive that Isis is pregnant. How exciting would that be?? lol. Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on April 05, 2009
    Ooh Goody. I like drama with these two, but I love the tenderness they share, too. I love these characters and of course the story itself.
    You have a way of making readers care enough about them to keep coming back to read more and more. Of course when there is great writing the reader doesn't want the story to end. Just tell me there will be other stories to look forward to as well.
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  • From ANON - Tet on April 01, 2009
    I LOVE the email alert! I was so excited when I saw it! I couldn't click the link fast enough, lol. Excellent chapter as always. Its good to see those two finally coming to some sort of understanding. Its about time!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2009
    Yay! Great chapter! Now that your done with The Akeh you can focus on this story more lol. Im a little confused on something though.....does Isis have hair on her head or not. You mention her neatly shorn head and then Ali'shir brushes her hair out of her face. Other than that were good and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - chanclor22 on March 16, 2009
    Gotta love the keensta! Even though i'm not one hundred percent sure that i know what's going on... But anyhoo, i still love it and will continue to read it. And can't wait to do so! Keep up the great work. And to everyone out there who's being an ass...stop it! LOLZ
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on March 01, 2009
    A Bit of a nailbitter, but awesome. Isis offered a hand instead of a deserved punch to Sumar's jaw? Followed up by girl fight! Isis got her male. Loved it.
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  • From ANON - Wranch on February 26, 2009
    New Chapter!
    Finally the Ro'al, I like the way he thinks, that Ali would be someone else's problem if he just leaves
    It would be lovely to see Ali's (whatever lies ahead of him, it has to be trouble right?)trouble coming back on himXD and I was expecting to see maybe Isis would just rush in and disturb him when he was slashing Ali, that would complicate a lot of things but great that she didn't, cause I enjoyed the later scene where she and Ali argued like they were on Ge'tan, some humor in between the bloody mess of Ali being slashed is brilliant, and frankly I could never get enough of the others recction
    (that scene about how the others first witness their argument, that Ali said she wouldn't shut up and everything about ear damage or what, that I remember)
    Q'sim is my favourite in this chapter, I LOVE nerds, or "squint", he reminds me of Zack///
    and I love Na'rum's timingXD there's always something about bad timing, it is a form of art, really

    oh and I left my email in case you are going to send mails for update, I wouldn't want to miss your story =)
    Thanks!
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  • From Golandre on February 25, 2009
    Totally loved the new chapter, can't wait for the next one! I really like how your stories go somewhere. But I was wondering did he ever get even with Kai and his son?
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  • From ANON - Bee on February 25, 2009
    Thank you! Thank you! I really missed reading about Alishir and Isis' fighting and temper tantrums to their sudden mood for love making! I hope that they clear this misunderstanding between them. Because it's obvious that Alishir wants her as his mate but she is too scared to get hurt and doesn't know if he really wants her. You know what would be funny? Throwing a surprise pregnancy, haha, that would totally mix things up for them. I bet Alishir wouldn't let her out of his sight if that happened!! I love Isis. You truly created an exceptional female character with her. She is strong and kind. I really liked how she handled Sumar with understanding. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I look forward to reading more about this two wonderful characters.
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  • From ANON - Bee on February 25, 2009
    Wow this was wonderful. I love Isis and Alishir and honestly to read this chapter of them being reunited was so beautiful.
    FAVORITE LINE:
    She had spent so many days, months, years even, willing away the want she had for him, so that if the day ever did come where he realised what an ass he had been and came back to claim her, she would have the strength to say no. But it seemed as if it were all for nought as his hands travelled the curves of her breasts, down her belly to her hips.
    God I really hope she chooses Alishir and maybe we can expect little babies in the future??? hehe a girl can hope, can't she?
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  • From midnighteyes on February 24, 2009
    Damn another great chapter.. I caught this one quick.. (lol) I was watching for it.. If you get on the email notice, defiently let me know.. I defiently don't want to miss you story.. Thanks again for the lovely chapter..
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