Click Here!

Reviews for The Tracker

By : Firesblood
  • From Keen on June 18, 2008
    I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of this. The first chapter was just so heart wrenching and did an excellent job of laying down the foundation for Nix as a character. I love how you weave her mourning and pain into the present, be it through the things she wears, how she thinks or the memories that come to her as she meditates. It’s wonderfully subtle. Not so overbearing that the story becomes about a woman and her painful past, but a woman who happens to have a painful past. That totally impressed me. Plus, she’s a strong woman with a ‘kick-ass’ attitude. My personal favourite. Which explains why I was sad to read Alexa got knocked off, I wonder what the back story on that is, if any. In any event, good deal and please keep going!
    Report Review

  • From midnighteyes on June 18, 2008
    Really good so far... I'm glad i found this story... Keep up the good work!!!
    Report Review

  • From aquamum on June 18, 2008
    I'm enjoying your story.......will you post often?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kami_no_yami on June 17, 2008
    This looks like a very promising story!! I love your writing style. I hope you won't abandon this story before it's completion like so many other great stories. It's always so disappointing when that happens but understanding as life has a tendency to happen. Sadly this is also the only other than Fanfiction.net that I have found any Predator fanfiction. Well good luck with your story. You're absolutely fabulous!!

    Ja ne! ^.~
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chancelor22 on June 16, 2008
    Yet another addition to what promises to be a fantastic story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!!
    Report Review

  • From DeathGodDist on June 15, 2008
    Hey, that was a very well written opening to a story. Very nice!

    A great introduction to new characters is always something that I enjoy. I do hope you will continue with this, because I do look forward to future development.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kae'She on June 14, 2008
    oh la la haa haa kidding i like the idea for your story oh please allow me to introduce myself i am Kae'She a writer myself when i started writing these kinda stories i was just like you so if you need help please turn to me by the way my story im still working on now is at fanfiction.net look under aliens/predator the name of my story is called temple warrior but to warn you its a scar/Lex coupling with a twist
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chancelor22 on June 12, 2008
    OOO!! You have my interest piqued!! Very well written introduction. I am very interested to see more. And to learn more about these characters. I am just hoping that this story line is not done in the usual predictable way. I do love to read new and different things...
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!