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By : Firesblood
  • From DeathGodDist on November 08, 2008
    Very nice! Short, but yet quite sweet :)

    It is indeed very complicated. Who can say for sure how Nix is really feeling. I'd imagine she must be at least somewhat traumatized from what has happened to her lately that she's not thinking too clearly. "Teddy" clearly wants her, but I'm more curious about Blade, does he truly just want to be a sort of "father figure" to her, or something else?

    I can't wait to see what you'll do next. Keep it up! :)
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  • From Vyper on November 04, 2008
    This is a great story and I really like it. I kind of hope both Teddy and Blade take her. It would only be fair although it would be hard for either of them to share. I doubt though after what they saw they would have been too worried about it.
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  • From AllSpark on November 04, 2008
    Nice chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2008
    I still looooooooove this story. I wanted nix 2 b w blade. Pleeeeeeeeese update soon. Don't make me beg! (getting down on knees, clasping hands 2gether). Pleeeeeeeeeeeese!
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  • From Divinatwila on November 04, 2008
    I'm back. With more to say than last time. What I like about this story is that your main character is so incredibly colorful. I went colorblind reading about her! Really cool Yautja. That is probably how they would act in these situations. I like Teddy. He's funny. Blade is also a card. She ends up with the former huh? Keep up the good work.
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  • From Lavonne on October 19, 2008
    I've just run across your story and I have to say... I love it. I really like the detail and depth that you went into to draw us into Nix, Blade, and 'Teddy's' world. You make me see and feel the pain and sorrow of the death of her family... to the suidcidal moments with the Xeno's. I wanted to cry alongside Sam as she was wrenched from his arms to be brought back to the land of the living. I love the small touch of adding Lex to the story line, she was always one of my favorites. And the unexpectedness of being a chosen of Paya was brilliant. I've only seen it used in 2 other stories and your draw on it was quite inspiring. I cannot wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Poor Teddy *smirk* Perhaps once she begins to deal better with the loss of her loved ones she might see more in him... Of course she acts differently around Blade, so far he doesn't have her all hot and bothered. ^_^. Until then.. I shall keep an eye on your blog for new updates.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2008
    I loooooooove ur story! I wanted nix 2 end up w blade instead of teddy. Please update soon or I will go insane!!! Keep writing.....now!
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on October 07, 2008
    Ack! Such a tease! You had me on the edge of my seat with that whole scene between Nix and Li'ct-ha. You truly had me thinking that they were going to do something naughty. But, sadly, Li-ch-ha decided against anything, and even goes so far as to say he's giving up in his explanation to Blade. Poor guy :(

    My things are definitely getting complicated. More jealousy toward Blade and now they're getting into a new clan. Complicated yes, but oh so very interesting. :D

    Keep up the wonderful work. I can't wait for more! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2008
    Omg!!!!!! This story is seriously great! I love it! U hafta write the nxt chapters asap or ill go nuts! Ur a really good writer! Keep up the good work! Xoxoxo
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  • From DeathGodDist on September 27, 2008
    Yet again, I am completely enthralled with this story. I don't think there is much I can say anymore except that I will be eagerly awaiting for the next one. :)
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  • From superchad on September 26, 2008
    One word my friend, incredible.
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  • From Divinatwila on September 24, 2008
    This one seems very good. I like how you know your stuff. Keep up the good work.
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  • From sagikamikazi on September 12, 2008
    Really enjoying this, please don't make me beg for more...Cause I will if I have to!
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  • From DeathGodDist on September 08, 2008
    That was a most impressive near-death experience you portrayed, and definitely touching and heart-breaking as well. The way you are so detailed with everything just makes your story truly come alive. I'm really in awe of how you are able to do that seemingly so easily. Anyways, I loved it of course and again cannot wait to see where things will go from here. Nice to see good ol Lex in this one too. :)
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  • From Keen on September 07, 2008
    That was neat the way you made her 'wake up' at the end. Creative writing indeed, I likes.

    Also, thumbs up for keeping Alexa alive!
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