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Reviews for Unattainable

By : SlashGurl
  • From on March 07, 2009
    Wow, I wonder why I haven't read this story before?
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  • From pontaloon on December 27, 2008
    this is really well written! the run-on sentences get a little annoying and you lose the point of the sentence, but other than that i really like how you developed the plot! the first chapter could have been split up into a few more paragraphs too btw ^^
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  • From MiloVentimigliaLover17 on June 27, 2008
    This is pretty good. I'm excited to read more.
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  • From iloveMP2yea on June 15, 2008
    Have you ever wanted to stab a baby because something has a wonderful plot that could have went someplace, but aforementioned plot is killt by a fast writing style? I had one of those moments. The characters could have been painted better, and you know it. The chapters are amazingly brief and show little plot development. I mean, I wanted a really good read, and whilst it was a fun (and terribly-written) masturbation scene, it just didn't do it for me. I love the potential this plot shows; however, I would also enjoy it if you showed some EFFORT.

    ~Bradly~

    P.S. – Your grammar is amazing: I think this is the first time I am not complaining about incorrect usage!
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  • From OnTiVeRoS on June 13, 2008
    Its great, I love The Covenant fanfics, and this one looks great. Please keep putting more on.
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