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Reviews for Nightmares and Futures *COMPLETE*

By : slygriff21
  • From slygriff21 on June 23, 2008
    Archfiend,

    You're right about the story. I belong to a group on yahoo that could help me do a better job of writing, especially my Star Wars fic. I'm new to writing in this fandom, although I'm a huge fan. I plan on talking to the members and get a better persepective. Once I have the info needed, I will be updating and improving this story, as well as my other Star Wars fics.

    I appreciate your honesty.

    Tiffany
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  • From Archfiend on June 21, 2008
    Not bad written, yet still strangely unsatisfactory. I mean ther are 6 chapters where luke has to fight his nightmares and in barely a chapter they have unearthed hidden recors, defeated a dark Jedi Master, and the newly reborn Palpatine. Pleae far too rushed that was should have been longer and more exciting. i mean it`s so sad to see a good story dragged down into mediocrity because there is no real climax, and the important chapters seem to be rashly written
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 07, 2008
    Good. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2008
    Loved it, it is really sad though. Please get the next chapter up soon.
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  • From ANON - jala on June 04, 2008
    a great story! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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