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By : BlueBastard
  • From nekogirl1 on June 10, 2008
    Hmmm,pretty interesting so far. I like the interaction between the two, can't wait to see a lil closer interaction *wink wink,nuge nudge*
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  • From alleycat88 on June 01, 2008
    That was rather interesting. What did Darth Maul do?! Or was it Obi-Wan who did it?! AH! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ChaosProphet on May 31, 2008
    oooooooh and the plot thickens!!!! i like how obi-wan's physical contact with maul eases whatever is causing the sith's suffering and conveys both pain and arousal to both, but both men are refusing to let go of their hate easily. good job on emphasizing the inequality between the two in terms of their experience (sith master vs jedi knight), and yet maul is not invincible and obi-wan is not a pushover. the conflict between the two feels like an essential part of the character interaction AND the sexual tension between them. cant wait for chapter 3!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aureawolf on May 23, 2008
    Awesome start! I LOVE Obi/Maul, but its such a rare pairing to come across, and I've never seen it handled this way. I really hope you continue to update this fic. ^_^ Let me know if you do the whole mailing list for updates thing, I'd love to get on it.
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  • From ANON - GorgonsGaze on May 21, 2008
    I love this story and its concept. Please for the love of everyhting holy, update!
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  • From alleycat88 on May 14, 2008
    OOOO! This sounds like its going to be soooo good! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Shippa on May 09, 2008
    YOu will update this. I just now can see the possiablity of this paring, ^_^ and I want more.
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