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By : BlueBastard
  • From blackash13 on November 04, 2008
    I Love this story i always liked this pairing the best in the Star Wars movies so good job ^_^ i also really like your writing style it feels like im really there. So ya i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!and i hope you continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Casmut on October 30, 2008
    omg! this is incredibly great! and not to mention sexy. ~grin~ i love it! please update soon!
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  • From IamGrey on October 29, 2008
    write more please
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  • From RyuaAlba on October 07, 2008
    Oh, I am so ecstatically glad you've done another chapter! Very hot. Lots of delicious tension.... Oooooooh, I like this story.
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  • From ANON - anonymous_fan on October 07, 2008
    wow. this pairing is very interesting. I think its the first of its kind i've seen.
    Also this story is very well set out too :-) I am looking forward to seeing where your heading with it :-P
    Lemme know when u have an update pl0x???? with sugar-coated cherries on vanilla icecream ???
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  • From GoldenVendetta on October 07, 2008
    Very nice. Very hot. I like the interplay between them. I hope there's more somewhere. I'd love to see how it all comes together.
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  • From ANON - calileane on October 06, 2008
    i was surprised as how good this pairing seems. It's the first ever slash i read on star wars. As it is my favorite movie i didn't want anything other than the original in my head. As it is i found your story and the summary made me curious. So here i am.

    I loved those three chapters. The idea is really original.
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  • From ANON - ChaosProphet on October 05, 2008
    win, win, and more win! ive been anticipating an update to this story, and i wasnt disappointed. the back and forth between kenobi and maul was great, both in the dialogue and the power dynamic. i dont like fics where obi-wan gives in without a fight, or maul becomes a jedi. these two seem to me to be very closely matched, which makes the stories much more fun. the dream link is a cool angle and im looking forward to see how you build on it, as well as how maul makes kenobi 'his'.

    my only dislike/nitpick was some grammar and spelling errors. if you are working on a word processor, please use spell check. if you are working on a notepad-type program, please use a dictionary or get a friend to proof/beta for you. i mean this only as constructive criticism, as both a reader and an author. having the words spelled right and the sentences put together properly makes for better flow, better comprehension, and a much more enjoyable read. cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From blackash13 on October 04, 2008
    Ya I love this pairing there is so passion. I'll love to see obe wan give into the passion! Cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From KagetsuAsame on September 18, 2008
    Very interesting start, I look forward to the next part, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - mgpem on September 11, 2008
    This pairing always makes my slash-sense tingle! Great chapters thus far and I love that you started from "the end" of epI. and changed the all too crappy "lets kill the coolest character after Vader right away!"-finish. I can't wait for an update. I sincerely hope there will be one soon! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Charm_Kun on September 04, 2008
    What an interesting Jedi indeed. It was cool, I've never seen that idea before. More please!
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  • From ANON - anonymous_fan on August 04, 2008
    wow. this is actually a very interesting piece of work. I am very much curious as to where this will go
    :-) i havent seen many obi-wan/Maul pairings. its very very interesting :-)
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  • From ANON - gia on July 12, 2008
    AWESOME START! I love how you portray them both! *shiny eyes* Please update soon?
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  • From ANON - RyuaAlba on June 11, 2008
    Well... this is looking absolutely delightful! I'm very interested to see where this leads. Nice description, and everything is plesant and easy to read.
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