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By : BlueBastard
  • From ANON - SheriLyn on November 22, 2009
    best star wars pairing...love the story cant wait for update. :)
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  • From ANON - impure0purest on October 27, 2009
    This story is AMAZING!
    You're not finished it yet are you?? I want moooore!! XD

    The feelings of the two, combined with how they react to the subtly described settings, and eachother.. it's just GAH!
    I love this pairing too much for words... Or maybe it's just Maul that I love... Whatever.. But you make it so perfect...

    The plot diffrences, like how Maul's not dead.. RAD! Thanks for that!! >_< but I mean it, really, having Qui-Gon barely alive is cool, and how you made Maul the Sith Lord, by killing Palpatine (though I'd like to see that scene... O_o) as opposed to the more submissive 'Apprentice' is fantastic. It makes it easier for him to dominate Obi-Wan.
    Speaking of... I LOVE how you describe his mental fights against the Sith... it's adorable, and endearing, and as much as I'm cheering for the Dark SIde, and Maul's intentions etc etc, I'm happy he's still struggling. ^_^

    Anyway... you own for writing this, it's HOT!, and amazing, and it sucks that you haven't updated since forever ago.. I hope you're still alive, so you can finish it..
    Best wishes!
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  • From ANON - MissNuthin on October 19, 2009
    Aww, I finished reading this last night and I just noticed it hasn't been updated since July! Sad! I suppose this is my own writing karma for not finishing my own fic's even though i get reveiws asking for more.
    I do hope this fic is continued! I like the dynamics in this pairing A LOT! Plus Darth Maul is HOT anyway!
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  • From shikiblade on October 18, 2009
    I must commend this story so far. When I read the blurb, I thought 'na-ah', but after reading the first chapter, it is looking alright. You might want to go through your story and make sure it is grammatically correct, there are a few errors. I will entertain the idea of this story and see if I like where it goes. Will let you know.
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  • From Aisuru on September 27, 2009
    This is a really great srory! Keep up the wonderful work.
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  • From MichiTheThird on September 13, 2009
    Damn, but this is one of the hottest fics I have EVER read. *fans self* I have always been an Obi-Wan/Anakin fan myself, but this story...jeez, but I can never EVER see The Phantom Menace the same way again. The possessiveness! And the fact that Obi-Wan keeps fighting his reactions so badly...I'll be the first to admit that Darth Maul has completely seduced me to the Dark Side with this story. I mean damn, I'm ALL for him claiming Obi-Wan.

    “Now, you are going to tell me exactly WHY you decided to drug what BELONGS to me…” -...I could almost die happy.

    I'll be checking almost every day for your next update.
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  • From ANON - TurnBlue on September 04, 2009
    More please!
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  • From ANON - B. on August 27, 2009
    Amazing story, you're a great writer! I'm in love with it, please continue. :]
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  • From yaminoyume on August 22, 2009
    Hey, this is the same yaminoyume that commented earlier. I just wanted to let you know that your story inspired some fanart. XD Hope this link works... http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/592582/

    If you don't have an account on y!gallery, I can upload it onto photobucket too, or e-mail it. :)

    Thanks for the wonderful story and inspiration! I hope my interpretation of that scene is close to what you had in mind. XD
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  • From ANON - yaminoyume on August 22, 2009
    That was SO hot. Absolutely loved it. XD I can't wait to see more!
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  • From nekogirl1 on August 10, 2009
    Oooh, love the updated chapter!!!
    Curious too as why Obi-wan was drugged, sexy possesvive Maul will find out though,hey?
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  • From Vex on August 08, 2009
    Wheee! This is great!! I can not wait to read more. Everytime I wonder back there is a new chapter, that is awesome. =]
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  • From hircineshound on July 13, 2009
    This is a pairing that never occurred to me and you've written it wonderfully. Please continue, I'm really enjoying this one.
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  • From on July 09, 2009
    OMG!!!!! YOU FREAKING UPDATED!!!!!YAY@!!!
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  • From ANON - Julia on July 04, 2009
    OH MY GOD I LOVE IT!!!!!! i love these kind of stories and Damn! you do a fine job!! =^_^=
    Can't wait 4 more!!
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