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Reviews for If it had missed

By : BlueBastard
  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2010
    Ooh i love this story! I hope you update soon i can't wait to see what happens next xD
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  • From RyuaAlba on April 17, 2010
    Ah, poor Obi Wan. He really should just give in... I'd quite cheerfully do so, anyway!
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  • From ANON - Elle on March 29, 2010
    *fans self* This is...indescribably hot. Honestly, I have never read much of Star Wars fanfiction, so I have never gotten into any pairings, but "If it had missed" has made me ship Maul/Obi-Wan. You do such an excellent job with characterization, descriptions, and DIALOGUE (good GOD, some of Maul's lines!). Please continue writing! I eagerly await all the delicious hatesex that Obi-Wan and Maul will have!
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  • From ANON - M on March 09, 2010
    Still waiting on the next chapter! Things are starting to look exciting on the ship, and talk about tension!
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  • From ANON - Toren on March 05, 2010
    Oh my goodness, please please keep updating this! I completely adore this story. You write wonderfully and I cannot wait to hear more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2010
    This is really good, please write more soon.
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  • From Melwyn on January 23, 2010
    Oh my god, this story is awesome. Ive never read a Star Wars story that wasn't 'canon' fanfiction (the books) and that was pre-New Wars. This though... I cannot wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - yuurimaoh on January 07, 2010
    You have no idea how happy I was to see that you've updated! I laughed so much when Obi-wan called Maul a sex fiend, but it's driving me about as crazy as Maul that Obi-wan keeps holding himself back and refuses to cooperate! For crying out loud, he'd get there faster if he just let Maul have his way with him!! Thanks so much for updating! My birthday's in a week, so this is the best birthday present ever! I'd take an update of If it Had Missed over cake and ice cream ANY time.
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  • From swordqueen on January 02, 2010
    woooooooof!!! I just stumbled across this story (not my usual fandom) and wow. This is HOT. I am in love. Lust. Something. Please keep this going!? (Serious: I'm begging you!)
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  • From ANON - Syn on January 01, 2010
    Beautifully. The plot is running very well and smooth and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
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  • From butterflies1974 on December 31, 2009
    I really like this story it is so good and I am wondering how connected they really are and I can't wait for you to explore that. Thank you for a great story.
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  • From ANON - M on December 30, 2009
    Hey... um so this is new for me. Don't really leave much feedback let alone on a slash story. Call me a closet slasher I guess. Anyway this is one hell of a HOT story! Out of all the pairings out there Maul/Obi is one of my all time favorites. Nice amount of frustration and an actual story. Is there any more to this or has this story been abandoned? Could you let me know if you continue or just never posted the rest? Please say there's more!
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  • From Spazzcake on December 23, 2009
    yeah I said before you introduced me to my OTP. and you need to update.
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  • From ANON - Darth Spazzcake on December 23, 2009
    You just invented my OTP for Star Wars.
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  • From RyuaAlba on November 22, 2009
    Ohhhhhh.... that was so awesome. Definately worth waiting for, that scene. I am SO glad you're still writing this... that was a ridiculously hot scene. One of the best I've ever read. I adore the tension you get when a Sith is so determined to break down a Jedi in the best possible way.
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