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Reviews for The Fine Line Between Legends And Lies

By : Jacksfavoritewench
  • From PrincessofthePearl on August 06, 2008
    That's it. I'm jumping into your story and beating Governor Swann with his wig.

    Please don't kill Jack! Pretty please? Pretty pretty please?
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on August 04, 2008
    Oh my! Governor Swann better not lay a hand on Jack (or have someone do it for him)! If he does, I'm going to jump in your story and steal his wig and then beat him with it! Argh!

    Now that I've gotten that out of my system, great chapter! Do update soon!
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  • From missjennifermarie on July 28, 2008
    Ok. I like the story. But I think there are some things you really need to work on. First off it appears that everyone is wearing Taffeta. Though that may have been true for the dresses, I don't think everyone wore it. Especially not as night clothes. The timeline is also a bit wishy washy. Perhaps you got confused as to what you were writing? And also, I honestly don't think that Elizabeth would have been on her feet that soon after her pregnancy. And especially not having sex. I still like it. Just needs a bit of a fix.
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on July 27, 2008
    Great chapter! I really like how the story is progressing so far. Can't wait for another little Sparrabeth baby to be born! Keep up the good work!
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  • From LizzieSwan on July 27, 2008
    Sorry I couldn't review, but I couldn't read also, because I was province-sorry!
    Well you're going great! I realy like to where this fic is going to. I like that Lizzie is pregnant Again, and that her father gave full pardon to Jack(I'm still not very certain about he truth in it)! Keep writing pleace! Nice job!
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  • From royalpinkdogs on July 18, 2008
    I love the story, but I'm slightly confused by the timing--while a woman breastfeeds she is making prolactin, which has the biofeedback effect of inhibiting FSH, and therefore the release of eggs from the ovaries--supposedly. I am well aware that there are many exceptions to these rules, but that's the textbook version.

    Also, traveling from India to the Carribean in less than a week on an 17th/18th century sailing ship isn't likely. It would have taken much longer.

    Again, I love the story, but I question the timeline. Royalpinkdogs--retired high school anatomy and physiology teacher
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on July 14, 2008
    Oh my gosh, yay! This is exactly the chapter I've been waiting for. Norrington and Gov. Swann won't be trying to ruin things for Lizzie and Jack anymore! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From royalpinkdogs on June 19, 2008
    I love the story and the adventures and that Will as a wishy-washy as he has always been.

    One comment though, TAFFETA? All the things you have people wearing isof taffeta. It's fine for a prom dress or formal, but it's not nightgown or shirt fabric. Maybe it ought to be linen or linsey-woolsey-an old fabric that people wore back then. I'm afraid taffeta is too fussy and dressy for their situations!!
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  • From royalpinkdogs on June 10, 2008
    love it!! I'm enjoying each new chapter, and can't wait for more!
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  • From AddictedToJack on May 24, 2008
    Hi! This review is for your first chapter .I've just read it and I loved it!
    Especially Lizzie's :
    “If we are in fact going to die here, then I don’t want to die a virgin. So Captain Sparrow, if you would be so kind?”
    OMG,it made me laugh ^^ And Jack couldn't say no,of course ^^ A gentleman!

    Love the story so far, and I'll keep reading!!!

    BTW,thanks so much for reviewing my fic!!! It means a lot to me!!!
    Big hugs
    Addicted_to_Jack
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  • From coffeemuse on May 22, 2008
    I've been following your story for the last few weeks and I enjoy it.

    Just a brief bit of con/crit: You really should put a N/C or rape disclaimer in the summary. There are some people that have a problem with that sneaking up on them...

    Otherwise, it's really good.
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  • From sirius4ever1 on May 12, 2008
    go on m'Dear, don't think Will or Norrington or Lizzie's father have given up already, have they?
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  • From sirius4ever1 on May 11, 2008
    hmmm, what an interesting twist, keep writing, love
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  • From sirius4ever1 on May 10, 2008
    that's a very interesting approach. Hope you're going to continue the story!
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  • From freelke on May 06, 2008
    fantastic!! I can't wait for the next chapter. This is really a great story. Please continue :)
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