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Reviews for The Fine Line Between Legends And Lies

By : Jacksfavoritewench
  • From cybercow on February 08, 2009
    AHHHHH ITS OVER OMG
    i would have liked it to go on longer only because i like this story alot but it would have goten boring because they are just at home you know im glad it ended so well
    your a realy good author keep doing what your doing
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  • From cybercow on February 08, 2009
    really good
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  • From cybercow on February 06, 2009
    wow this i sooo good thus far
    i couldn't review because normally i use Mozilla instead of explorer and Mozilla broke down until now so here i am
    i really love the plot and i really hate everyone getting in jack and Lizzy way epically norringtion he really pisses me off
    this is a great story i cant wait to finish it and see how it ends
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  • From cybercow on February 02, 2009
    WOAH WOAH WOAH
    what an amazing start and 50 chapters! you have to be KIDDING ME im sooo happy to read it
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on September 21, 2008
    Bravo, darlin'! Good job. I really enjoyed this story, but I think you chose to end it at the right time.

    Now I'm off to catch up on the other things you've written!

    ~Princess of the Pearl
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  • From on September 17, 2008
    Your best work yet, just enough story to support the sex, which was well done. !
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on September 15, 2008
    It's your story, so do with it what you please, but I do think that royalpinkdogs had a good idea.

    Anyways, great chapter, as always!
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  • From royalpinkdogs on September 12, 2008
    This might be a good place to let it end. Have the aunt and uncle be old and ill, and prevail upon Jack to stsy, take over the house and estate and become the Lord of the Manor. Of course, he'd still own the Pearl and they could travel, but it would give them stability and a place to be safe from all the threats that have plagued them!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on September 04, 2008
    Good chapter, as always!

    And your welcome for the reviews ;)
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on September 01, 2008
    Great chapter, as always! Keep up the good work!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on August 27, 2008
    Nice chapter! I think it's good that you allowed some time to pass before jumping into new things for the Sparrows. I hope Jack will learn to be a little more patient with his son, though!

    Good job. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on August 22, 2008
    That was sweet! In a really smutty, sweaty kind of way...

    Good job, keep it going!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on August 20, 2008
    Ahh! No! Don't stop there!

    Good chapter nonetheless, though. Nice to see Jack'n'Lizzie getting on better!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on August 19, 2008
    Oh, how sad! Maybe Governor Swann will call off this ridiculous pursuit of Jack now that Elizabeth has been hurt... *hint-hint, nudge-nudge* And poor Jack! Hopefully Lizzie was just speaking out of anger and doesn't really blame him. And maybe she didn't lose the baby after all! It is possible to spot during pregnancy... happened to my mum when she was pregnant with me and here I am. Hmm. Interesting. (Okay, I'll shut up now.)

    Good job! Keep it up, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Go Sparrabeth!
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  • From PrincessofthePearl on August 15, 2008
    Good work, keep it up!
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