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By : Keen
  • From ANON - Steve on January 20, 2013
    Well written but OC is really, really Mary Sue. You claim it's not but if it wasn't you would have made her attractive and no one would want to sleep with her, but be forced to. But you didn't. So, Mary Sue.
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  • From on September 29, 2009
    Wow... I have been waiting for Liz and Doctor Knight to ... wow. HOT!
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  • From pinkhare on March 24, 2009
    awesome ,wonderful,sweet ,sexy sad story . I love it . You are one amazing writer !
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2009
    Nooooo! I can't believe she's dead even though I had a feeling that would happen. It made me so sad! Poor abe! I love this story and I always review what I read just cuz I know authors like to know their work is appreciated(sp?). Hopefully their be another chapter or 10 (lol) to wrap everything up
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2009
    I love this story. I like how you have an actual story instead of pure smut, but the smut is good too. Lol. As someone who reads a LOT of fanfics, I seriously think yours is in my top 5. I want this story to end well but I don't want it to end yet! Good job
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  • From pinkhare on February 26, 2009
    Woohhooo ! I'm still keeping my fingers crossed for a happy ending . Really i just want to see Abe happy the poor guy never seems to get any in the comic or movies .
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  • From Attitudinal on February 25, 2009
    Yay! I went on vacation with some friends, and was very upset when internet was not accessible to me. Imagine my happiness when I came back and found two glorious new chapters! Whoo hoo! Keep up the good work, I eagerly await updates!
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  • From ANON - gemberling on February 17, 2009
    i usually hate abe/ofc, but this is very well written and really hot. :D and this is coming from a lesbian :D i need you to finish this please don't leave us hanging like other writers do!!
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  • From pinkhare on February 15, 2009
    I love this story. Please please have a happy sex filled ending !
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2009
    Another awesome chapter. This story is much better the second time around. It makes more sense and its better written. I like how you go deeper into their charactors and desribe the scenes with great imaginery. Im glad you pretty much kept the dialouge and situations the same but put in a few extra things to make it funnier, sexier, and more vivid. I think my favorite thing in this chapter is when hellboy catchs them and says, "we're close, but not that close." Im sooooo glad u kept it! You even added him turnin his back to him and sayin, "-so ill listen to you like this if u don't mind. " cute brother moment between them.
    Hopefully abe and tamara can be together because even though I liked the hellboy movies, I rather have them live happily ever after, along with hellboy and liz. I can't wait for the new chapters and the brand new stuff.
    Don't forget about Union of Convenience II now. I check every now and then for that stuff too. I said it before and ill continue to say it, your a great writer and keep up the good work!

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  • From Attitudinal on February 10, 2009
    Again, I must say: Awesome. Characterization is spot on, and I love your takes on History and such. You have got to be one of my favorite people here, haha. You know, I read the Hellboy comics, and didn't really enjoy them, I saw the movies, and didn't really enjoy them. But I must say, your fic has opened a new admiration for me and this fandom! Bravo, another great installment!
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  • From LaurenGraceJurious on February 09, 2009
    Fantastic new chapter! I don't think you need to worry about living up to any expectations, other than your own!:-) You continue to do a masterful job of blending sex into the plot instead of only having it there on the side as a matter of interest. It was very clever of you to have Abe and Tamara begin using the entity's own weapon against it, I liked that a lot! And I like being able to watch the development of two relationships at the same time; Abe and Tamara are quite involved, with a third party in their way that is in the form of an elemental (and WoW, again with the research!) and on the other side we have Liz and HB whose relationship is still in its infancy, but still has a third party in their way, only for them its the usual fear of rejection/being hurt. I love that the whole "possession" thing and the fear of being hurt thing are being juxtaposed, because both of them can cause or stop a lot of things from happening between the characters involved, just for different reasons. I'm eager to see where the relationship between Abe and Tamara ultimately ends up...not sure if you're going to follow the movies or not, but if you are, it's really going to hurt if Abe and Tamara can't get this thing of their worked out!

    Great chapter, filled with all the stuff it needed and more! Thanks for sharing, and for the wonderful note at the bottom of the page! I'm glad you appreciate the comments as much as I appreciate your story!:-)

    Grace

    P.S.
    I've got 2 broken fingers taped together, so sorry if my typing is a little off in places and I seem a litte unorganized in my thoughts...I hate "hunt & peck!" Looking forward to more to review, though nonetheless!:-)
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  • From SonfotheAtomicBiscuithead on February 08, 2009
    It's great to see Abe getting some much needed attention. He's a sexy being and you've settled on a great way to express that without sacrificing who Abe is. Tamara is genuinely likable. Far as the rest- egyptology is a hobby of mine, so a lot of your stuff has made for entertainment beyond just story purposes. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Keshley on February 05, 2009
    I'm sorry I haven't stayed caught up! My life has been SO busy lately! I finally got a chance to read all the chapters you posted. All I can say is: AWESOME!!! I still can't believe Abe got grounded...but I agree with Professor Broom. Very well written, and I can't wait until the next chapter! I'll try and stay caught up now... hehe
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  • From LaurenGraceJurious on February 05, 2009
    I've been reading your wonderful story over the last few weeks and now that I have caught up, wanted to tell you how magnificent it is and what a talented writer you are! I'd seriously put this storyline on the level of the two Hellboy movies themselves, and in certain instances it even surpasses them! I'm not very familiar with the graphic novel itself, but I love that you've written Red as more like the comic book version that has been placed in the storyline provided by the movies. And in doing that, you've still managed to make him sexy even while describing him as having cloven hooves!:-)

    I'm more impressed with your selection and success in focusing on Abe in the way you have! He's never been presented as being very passionate or reckless, and what's so great about him in your story is that you've shown him being just that, but without sacrificing the elegant, aspiring and consciously aware being that he is! It's fantastic to see him getting that kind of attention from a writer and even more fantastic to read!

    And your OC's are amazing! The time and thought and detailed research you've obviously done to concoct the character of Tamara makes me giddy when I think about it!:-) I love it when a writer puts themselves out like that, because showing me that you care enough to research the stuff you are writing makes me care so much more about what you are writing! Truly you have done a marvelous job with this story, and I can't wait for more!


    Grace Lee
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