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Reviews for The Akeh

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  • From ANON - Sarah on April 23, 2008
    Thank you ! I can't wait for more !
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  • From ANON - noneyowax on April 15, 2008
    Very nice, update soon.
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  • From ANON - sarah on April 15, 2008
    I'm dying for more !
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  • From Lum on April 12, 2008
    Yay! I'm glad that you decided to update. I can relate to being hesitant about updating, especially when you get so many hits but so few reviews. It can be frustrating, not knowing if people want you to continue with the story. I like the interaction between her and Abe. The long interval between chapters one and two (story time not posting time) was a little frustrating though. I would have like to read about what happened in that year. As long as you slow it down though it should fit enough to still be a great story. Just don't skip another year and make us guess about all of the wonderful scenes there would have been! :) And I hope he gives in soon, although I understand that he doesn't want to 'take advantage of her'. But honestly, those emotions she's feelings are just as real as if they were originally hers, and as long as it's not rape who cares if it was the entity's idea for them to shag rather than hers or his? Can't wait for more,
    Lum
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  • From ANON - Malicia on April 10, 2008
    I am LOVING this! Usually I can't stand Abe/OFC fics, but you, my dear, are creating something very delicious indeed. Abe deserves some lovin'. I can't wait to read more. :D
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  • From Lum on April 05, 2008
    This was AWESOME! I really hope that you post more very soon. I love the idea behind the story and your writing is sinfully delicious. Can't wait for chapter 2.
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  • From Unolai on March 31, 2008
    *pouts* I want to read the rest of it....There IS more right? Right?! *showers you in cookies*
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  • From ANON - noneyohwax on March 25, 2008
    I like it, hope you keep going withit.
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