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By : Huronoryu

From ANON - Timberwolf on March 18, 2009
I love Barricade's way of waking Sam. LOL.This should be interesting to see just how helpful Simmons' going to be, but I just hope they'll get Frenzy before anything happens to him. Love this story, a perfect way for me to wind down after work.
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From FieldsofHeather on March 17, 2009
*falls over laughing* You gotta love those 'Cons. �So where are we going?� �To get painted,� And I loved Jazz and Blue trying to hide from Ratchet. I wonder how they'll get Simmons to help out.

*ponders and waits for tommarow*
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From ANON - Timberwolf on March 17, 2009
Just gotta post another review. I hope I don't scare off any plot bunnies, but after reading this I thought back to the movie to the part where part where Optimus ripped the roof off the SUV and Optimus stating that they didn't seem "surprised". How did sector 7 know there would be more coming? Now with this hidden base with the cages an that room that scared Bee. I think we're in for a lot of edge of the seat reading. I'm thinking Sector 13 bit off more then they could chew now that they have a PO'd Barricade, I just hope Sam an the others can keep him from doing anything rash. Oh, man, I looooooove this story.
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From ANON - Timberwolf on March 16, 2009
Wow, just Wow. They have Frenzy. Now this is gonna be an intresting turn in events. Will Sam an Bee be able to calm Barricade down when he flips out over this? Sector 13's in trouble now.
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From ANON - Gray-Clouds on March 16, 2009
BOO D: The cages for the Cybertronions sound awful frightening
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From FieldsofHeather on March 16, 2009
*O_O* Oh my..... talk about a curveball! Cade is p*ssed and I can't blame him. Even though Frenzy was a bad guy I always liked him, he was funny. Those thirteen guys are going to find out why you do NOT tick of a Con.

*hunkers down and waits for the fireworks*
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From ANON - Nacht Kind on March 16, 2009
I think Timberwolf may be on to something with the whole ordering in of food stuffs.

I've gotta say, Sector Thirteen can't possibly know where the base is, or they'd try to follow and intercept the Autobots on their way back or do some sort of stealth mission to infiltrate/invade and kidnap. Not to mention the Autobots are damn careful about others seeing them. Add to that the lack of subtlety of armored SUVs, or any vehicle really, out in the desert, where there is nigh on no traffic at all, and no cover against a highly advanced species that has recently been at war for a fair bit and are aware of the present threat of humans, and not being noticed would be pretty much impossible. That being said, they have some of the most astounding response time EVER if they got to the store that quickly after Trent contacted them following his near collision with Sam in the parking lot. And WHAT are the odds of him being there at the same time as they arrived, really? Bad luck, that.

Trent is a money grubbing pansy ass and lame.

Dr. Burgen......You can SMELL the crazy on him.

So, I'm totally ready to see Prowl be pissed off and protective.
Nacht
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From ANON - Timberwolf on March 15, 2009
Oh, man, I sooo want to beat the (blank) outta Trent, and that Dr. Burgen. Think if they want any food now, they'll have to have it brought in, till they can get those clows from sector 13 off their backs. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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From FieldsofHeather on March 15, 2009
*hides under the covers* That Dr. Burgen scares me. He seems to be a Grade A nut job!! Bee and Cade are going to flip when they find out, not to mention Prowl when he hears about what happened to his newly alive hubby. Nice driveing by Jazz and Blue by the way.

*peeks out from under the covers to hit the review button* Keep up the great work!!
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From ANON - Nacht Kind on March 15, 2009
Don't take this as any kind of actual criticism, but I think you're updating almost TOO frequently. I just never manage to review the day that I read they chapters and thus am confined to bulk reviews.

Loving it with a fiery intensity that just isn't safe.

I actually love your representation of Cybertronion intimacy, especially as I'd been wondering if it was going to be something you left to never really be discovered and just tried to gloss around it. The attention to detail makes the experience tactile and creates a more vivid picture. I found both encounters incredibly sensuous and sweet. The fact that you apparently intend to write, and have written, more than just Jazz and Prowl's reuniting scene is fantastic. I'd worried that their interlude might have been included only to give an idea of how Cybertronions went about it, and my not-so-inner dirty perv was thrilled at its appearance and depressed that I might not get additional scenes with them or various couples. Then came the beautiful time that was Ratchet and Wheeljack, which was so nervously earnest and yearning it made my jaw ache with the force of holding in my happy noises. Long story short: wasn't sure we'd get a sex scene, got one and was thrilled but didn't expect more, can now apparently expect more and am BESIDE MYSELF.

I've never really remarked on it, but I, for one, am both impressed by and appreciative of your care and precision to finding and applying relatable words/terms/phrases to Cybertronion action and experience, such as Jazz's wiring being sensitive, the optics blacking out, the sparks and jolts of electricity for arousal and sensation. There are plenty more, but those stuck out given the most recent chapters.

So, I love Judy, but if she's going to bust out with how she'd suspected/knew the Autobots were pregnant when they're an alien species with a robotic makeup and thus such an idea is, while awesome, not something one typically arrives at, especially for her who is by no means an authority on their physiology, I'm going to have to call Bull and knock the I-Know-Everything Hat from her head.

Speaking of pregnancy...Sweet Lord, those mood swings are wreaking hell on Sunny, and by association Sides, aren't they?

So much fun.
Nacht
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From ANON - Gray-Clouds on March 14, 2009
I'm dying from the suspense, what is it? D:
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From FieldsofHeather on March 14, 2009
Ooooo!!! *eyes the hole* I wonder what they found? I couldn't help but laugh at the Twins. Poor Sides keeps getting on the bad side of his brother. *snickers and counts down till tommarow*
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From ANON - Timberwolf on March 14, 2009
Loved it. Optimus buttering up Barricade then Ironhide steps in an blows it. LOL. Then I half expected Ironhide to pull some kind of prank on Barricade to get even for the paint job. Now, I'm wondering what they found. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - Loren on March 14, 2009
Shit, my other review got deleted so I have to type it all over again!! And my stupid computer won't let me freaking review, so I'm going to try this one last time. And if three thousand reviews turn up saying the same crap, sorry my bad. Just delete 'em. Anywayssss.

Firstly, it trips me out how Judy knows everything for, like, no frickin' reason. So LOL for that. And I've been following you story for a while(although I haven't been on the computer for a while so I had like ten chaps to read just now) and this stuff had me ROLLIN'!!! Funny stuff, dude. "Well, I can't just say 'hey, stupid!'. Then all the Autobots would look!" LOLs for that.

So I'm guessing that 'Cade is going to get with either 'Bee or Sam, but I'm betting on 'Bee because, ya know, they're the same species. Which brings me to Will and 'Hide! How is that even going to happen??? Are the going to make wild, passionate luuuuuurve the normal way or does Will just like, feel on his spark or something?? 0_____o Which brings me to the alien robot secks. WOWWW. 'Cause I was thinking about how, if I were in your shoes, how I would make that work and I got NOTHINGGG!!! You understand me?? NOTHINGGGG!!! So I was just like, WHOA!!! So random kudos and awesomology points for that. That was boss.

Also, I guess Sam is now getting some Cybertronic traits and it's about to Link to someone??? It makes sense!! And that'd be kinda cooool. And Miles and Makeala??? Working on it, hmmm???

I also just adore how you have like five hundred characters and haven't used OCs!!!! Well, except that Secter Thirteen guy, but there's really no way around that one is there??

I LOVE MISFIRE WITH ALL MY HEART, SOUL, BODY, AND BEING!!! Yeah!!! Love that kidd!! Also, I think Optimus Prime needs a boyfriend!!! I do, I do!!! He needs to get laid, fer sure!!! Anyways, AM-AYE-SING story!!! And answer my questions!!! The e-mail is right there!!!
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From Vally on March 14, 2009
Well, the title of the next chapter has me curious. It carries many a hidden meaning possibility. I am much looking forward to tomorrow!! A new chapter will be much loved after a long day at work and I would offer up the carrots my boyfriend is trying to grow to your plot bunnies but I'm not entirely sure they're even still alive much less edible... My boy hasn't much of a green thumb on him I'm afraid.
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