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By : Huronoryu
  • From ANON - Gray-Clouds on April 02, 2009
    Hahaha Jazz is a stinking liar. I bet Primus watches "All My Children"
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  • From FieldsofHeather on April 01, 2009
    *giggles* When Inferno made that comment about "bringing home stray 'Cons" I had this sudden image of 'Bee holding Ravage and looking up at Optimus saying, "He followed me home, can I keep him?" LMAO!!! Go Jazz!! I loved how he snatched the gun and took down Prowl all without breaking a sweat... that is if he could sweat. “If he kills us in our sleep, you can say a big ‘I told you so’.” GAH, Jazz is the best!! Frenzy was too cool, placeing bets with the Twins. OMG, I can hardly stop laughing at the orb with the bandaid, that poor thing.

    *laughs to herself as she waits for tommarow*
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  • From ANON - Timberwolf on April 01, 2009
    That's gonna be a real interesting talk between Barricade an Soundwave. :). I get a kick outta these visits to Primus, that was cute with the little firefly with the band-aid poor little guy.
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  • From ANON - Gray-Clouds on March 31, 2009
    Will is such a modest boy haha Another great chatpers BDQ
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  • From FieldsofHeather on March 31, 2009
    *chuckles* Poor Optimus, he can't even get a decent amount of rest before all hell brakes loose all over again. I hope he can calm Prowl down. And I wonder what's up with Frenzy.

    *ponders and waits for tommarow*
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  • From ANON - Nacht Kind on March 31, 2009
    Does anyone have a cigarette? 'Cause I am DAMN satisfied....

    So, I personally found all of your intimate scenes thus far incredibly sensual and enrapturing, but that was bone-melting hot. I loved how you were attentive in including both sides' sensations, given the different nature. The fact that the vibrator was camou green made me snort and giggle a little. Maybe it's just me, but once it got into the thick of things I went "HOLYSHIT!WILL'SASEXKITTEN!!#@$@%(Q@#R)DVZ J%($@!!!!!!!!!!!!" and promptly died. I'm betting he's going to be somewhat sore tomorrow, though, if the vibrator was "rather large" and am impressed by the fact that he and 'Hide managed to wait a fair bit of time while he both inserted and grew accustomed to it. I'm going to expand on something Confuzzled_Neko implied and suggest Will invest in some lubricant; though cooking oil can work in a pinch and has the added bonus of, because of the amount of oil one has to use due to the thinness of its consistency, it spreads around and makes just about everything slick. Woohoo, eroticism. Plus, the idea of the woman going in the kitchen and noticing one of the partially empty bottles gone missing cracks me up.

    Can't even believe I'm typing this, but 'Hide or Will could attach a strong magnet to the bottom so that it would be attracted to and attach to 'Hide's finger, who then would be able to better manipulate it and even actually thrust, instead of simply jostling it. Plus since it's a magnet, either could easily pull it off afterwards.

    Now, maybe it's just me, but I've been thrilled and delighted in all of the sex scenes thus far and am curious that we seem to be getting a little glimpse into every couple. Simultaneously, I've been hoping we might be blessed with viewing couples again as the story goes on, but I need to throw myself on your tender mercies and beg/pray/hope/grovel that we see these two again.

    My brain doesn't even know what to do with the orb disappearance, but kind of hopes, against ALL logic, that Will's the carrier for both the unmatched level of adorable and the never-ending shit Ironhide would get if he were with sparkling. Maybe Will can just nurture the spark or it can be tiny and grow after birth but be more along the size lines of Rumble or Frenzy. Then again, Cybertronions live a LONG time, so it's not like the spawn wouldn't have plenty of time to grow a few dozen feet. To save my brain, I'm just going to trust in Primus to use his godly mojo and work this noise out.

    My heart is STILL aflutter and I blame you.
    Nacht

    P.S.- The whole Blaster and Soundwave thing? Seems to have the potential to be unreasonably cute and hell-raising at the Autobot base.
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  • From ANON - Christi on March 31, 2009
    yay! Hide & Will are gonna be creators, right?

    Great chapter and great story!
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  • From ANON - Gray-Clouds on March 31, 2009
    Primus and the Orbs were really rather amusing :] Where did the other orb go? and that was wicked awesome with hide and will
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  • From Vally on March 31, 2009
    I think this may be in my top five chapters and not, surprisingly, because of the smut but because of the orbs and Primus!! They're just so awesomely funny and brighten my day every time they make an appearance!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Timberwolf on March 31, 2009
    Aww, Ironhide an Will finally . . ah. . errr got together. Love the bits with Primus an the orbs.
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  • From ANON - Confuzzled_Neko on March 30, 2009
    *le gasp* robot on human on vibrator sex! Hehe, nice to see how you explained it...and yes it was hot/touching...now for Sam!

    p.s. did Will have lube or just a really tiny vibe?
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  • From FieldsofHeather on March 30, 2009
    *twitches* Oh... my.... *has uncontrollable urge to squeal like the fangirl she is* That was too cool!!! I loved it, so wonderfully done. I kept wondering just how you were going to make this pair work out and I must say I'm very impressed. And the ending was too funny. I felt like shouting, "Run, Primus, run! The orbs are gonna get you!!!" I had to bite my lip when I read "Primus could hear what sounded like a garage door opening in the background. “Do I even have a garage?” *fights back laughter*

    Keep it up, I can't wait for more! *squeals over Will and 'Hide some more*
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  • From ANON - Aralaiqualasse on March 30, 2009
    SUE MEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!1

    My God!!!! That's is the most erotic scene I ever read in transformers.....Man, I wish I am Will right now, if I'm a man....hehehe..

    Btw, what abt Bee, Sam and Bcade? Will they become threesome...I can imgaine them together...my my...wonder if the sex scene will also ....mmmmm.....

    my exam next week...study week...I'l guess U'll wont be aroung for next 3 weeks,....I'll die if didnt read Cover Me.....it's my fav.....
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  • From ANON - Jamie on March 30, 2009
    *squeals like a crazy fangirl*
    Is Will pregnant?!
    'Hide will be a Daddy!
    Omg, omg, omg!
    I'm so excited to see how this turns out.
    :D
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  • From ANON - Gray-Clouds on March 30, 2009
    What happened in L.A.? o_O I'm very interested to whats going to happen between Blaster and Soundwave ;]
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