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By : Huronoryu
  • From FieldsofHeather on April 15, 2009
    *giggles* I loved Optimus' reaction to the trailer and the Twins bursting into song was priceless!! Keller's reaction to Soundwave's alt form was great too. I can hardly wait for this trip, it's going to be so much fun!!

    *Misfire eyes up the strange human, who has moved from hugging his shin to his thigh, "Go away please!"*
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  • From FieldsofHeather on April 14, 2009
    *snickers* Poor Optimus, he's getting that trailer weather he wants it or not! Blaster is so cute, all shy and flustered. I can hardly wait for this road trip. These guys SO do not know what they are getting into.

    *returns to hugging Misfire, who by the way is totally freaked out by the strange human attatched to his leg, "Help!!"*
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  • From ANON - Timberwolf on April 14, 2009
    LOL. Poor Optimus, he's gonna get that trailer after all. (snicker). Any bets on Keller wanting to go? :). Love Bee's an Barricade's reactions to the snow an ice. LOL. Can't say I blame them, can't stand it either.
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  • From ANON - Gray-Clouds on April 14, 2009
    poor misfire :[ How are they planning to get to the energon?
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  • From FieldsofHeather on April 13, 2009
    *giggles* "Too late! The travel plans have made, the seats are all booked up! No room! Better luck next time.” Gotta love Perceptor, he finally got everyone's attention. LOL at Optimus shaking Perceptor like a ragdoll. Poor Misfire! *sniffles* He needs a hug!!!

    Sorry about your computer, I hope you get it fixed soon.
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  • From ANON - Timberwolf on April 13, 2009
    So sorry to hear about your computer. Poor Misfire, he's got news and he can't tell anyone. What are we gonna do with Perceptor, he's never gonna let them forget his news, poor Optimus is finally gonna get his trailer.
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  • From FieldsofHeather on April 12, 2009
    *cheers* Go Perceptor!!! That was too funny, the poor guy get's his big news out at last. I felt so bad for him when everyone walked out and he was left in the dark. I wonder what Megs ment by forgeting something. Don't tell me he knew about the Energon!! I loved Rumble's reaction to the news about "no sex." LOL!!

    *munches on a chocolate bunny while waiting for tomarrow* Mmmmm, bunny ears! Happy Easter!!
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  • From ANON - Gray-Clouds on April 12, 2009
    Primus is insane :D And I wonder who the injured spark is D: It makes me sad. Can't wait to see what the next chapter hold. I find it fascinating that You have Misfire seem like an idiot one chapter, a real person in another, and then back to a clumsy off again. He's ever so amusing. Will we ever know what happened in LA with groundhogs team? The world may never know DUN DUN DUUUUUN
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  • From ANON - Timberwolf on April 11, 2009
    LOL. I'm starting to feel sorry for Starscream. That was cute the spark/firefly carrying a dart :), poor little guy with the broken wing. An shame on Primus for sending Sam back before he's finish. LOL.
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  • From ANON - Nacht Kind on April 11, 2009
    I wanted to thank you for the explanation provided in the author’s note, especially as you’ve taken such care not to reveal the plot prematurely, and as it had been something that was sincerely rubbing me the wrong way, I appreciate the consideration you showed enormously.

    The chapter was, as per usual, highly entertaining. It’s a wonder the Autobots are able to explain anything, given how prone they are to chaos and general communication breakdown. Prowl made me giggle, as I knew he would.
    I’m also curious as to the method of Primus choosing the carrier verses the sire. Very interesting. I also notice that Ratchet failed to check either himself or ‘Jack. XD

    ……Skywarp was adorable. He seems like such a fun time of crazy, the “I will cause mayhem and raise a bit of hell and make little sense” crazy verses Starscream’s “HOLYSHIT I HAVE CONTROL ISSUES AND WILL DESTROY THEM ALL BWAHAHAHAHA” crazy.

    Woot,
    Nacht

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  • From ANON - Gray-Clouds on April 11, 2009
    Ack! What a twist at the end. I have faith in you and your work! Don't give up, nothing sucks more than in incomplete fic. Sunny is such a dork in this chapter
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  • From FieldsofHeather on April 10, 2009
    *squeals some more* Oh my gosh, is Skywarp pregers too?? That's sooooo cool!! Starscream's gonna freak when he finds out. I loved Ron's tidbit about Prowl's fast work. LOL!! There's so much about this chapter that was great it's hard to pick out anything else. It's that wonderful!! Keep up the fantastic work!!

    *eyes light up* Ooooo, are they gonna have a baby shower???
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  • From ANON - Gray-Clouds on April 10, 2009
    I died at the end when Jazz stood up and yelled for prowl. Try not to make Judy a know-it-all. We love her, but she shouldn't be all knowing. That's Primus' job(sort of) :) Excellent story. I'm in it for the long haul! and LOL when Sunny thought he was infected.
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  • From ANON - Nacht Kind on April 10, 2009
    Great chapter, wonderful execution, flowed well, HOWEVER I am now knocking the "I-know-everything-ever-because-I'm-a-woman-and-a-mother" Hat OFF of Judy's head. I mean, it's moved from hilarious and possible to exasperating and absurd. Her giving out sage advice wily nily? Absolutely, she's got experience and life lessons. Noticing the OBVIOUS attraction between 'Hide and Will? Hell yes, she wasn't the only one. Figuring out that a robotic alien species has spontaneously been given the ability to naturally procreate based on some moody behavior on the part of ONE of the 'bots who she didn't even know that well to begin with? Something's gotta give.

    Don't get me wrong, I adore this story and like Judy plenty. I ALSO love it when one or the other party/person/sex can see and notice something that the opposing side doesn't due to experience/knowledge/expertise/instinct/what-have-you, but not at the expense of the other side regularly looking like oblivious dunderheads. Now, I'm probably being a bit picky because I'm so sensitive to all the instances of it, but that seems to be what's been happening repeatedly through this story.

    Now, I'm going to apologize, as I truly don't mean this as an attack. This has simply been bothering me and I felt a critique to express my opinion wouldn't be unreasonable. I'm especially sorry if I came off as surly or rude; you're a wonderful author and I love this story, this has simply been a repeating motif of dubious function and waning charm that has stepped from the realm of amusing running gag into ludicrous disbelief.

    I sound like a CRAZY bitch, and I'm sorry for that.

    Can't wait for tomorrow(betting money someone's gonna shut down with the news).
    Nacht

    Side Note: What the HELL would Cybertronions' use as contraception?!
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  • From ANON - Timberwolf on April 10, 2009
    Pregnant!!?? I think Prowl's gonna pass out when he gets the news. :). Wow, this was quite a surprise, though I had a feeling something was in the air for them to survive. So . . who's gonna get the baby Megatron? LOL.
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