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By : Huronoryu

From ANON - Gray-Clouds on April 25, 2009
Another entertaining chapter, a job well done. I wonder what Megatrons and Optimus' relationship was like back in the day.

Don't mind people's critique. Your fic is wonderful and you are wonderful for sharing it with us. If it's something that you enjoy doing then don't let anyone hold you back from it. Its only good as long are you're having fun so try not to make it something that you will come to loathe. If those g oner's have a problem with OOC then they can go read another fic. it's not like someone is holding a gun to their head telling them to read. I started when there was only 43 chapters and got hooked. I love G1 and the movie and I love how your fic brings it all together. I can barely wait to read the next chapter once I've finished the latest. No one's prefect and they should be grateful that you get the chapters out to us so fast. If they can't deal with grammatical errors then they can shove it. If they think you're story is OOC then they should take a look back at the G1 series and realize that that series was full of crack. I tried watching and I kept laughing at the absurdity of it all. The portrayal of the characters hilarious and your plot is captivating. Good fics always die when there's a lack of reviews or flames. As long as your write there will always be an audience and you can't please everyone. Carry on with your head held high and your fans will continue to cheer you on.

P.s. I am dying for some misfirexstarscream cause of their current relationship D: I', a sucker for the kicked puppy and the brute relationships. You fic has gotten me hooked onto things that I thought I would never read. I previously despised the thought of a human x transformer but you've converted me. Thought I am a bit iffy on threesome but who knows, if it's written the write way it just may be able to convert anyone. Thanks for the daily chapters and have a nice day
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From ANON - Nacht Kind on April 25, 2009
So, I really like your story, BUT I think it's crap that people are trying to criticize your method of writing. Last I was aware, YOU were the author and thus wielded the almighty pen. Anyone who wants to nitpick can lick my nonexistent scrotum.

I love your characters, they're so relatable and endearing. The only one I feel bad for regularly is Optimus, who often seems to be heckled unmercifully, though it's never truly hurtful or mean and he takes it in stride and is (usually) agreeable about it. I love him so much, it's silly. I think it might be his voice in the movie, so solemn!

I adore this story so much and, dammit, you're a MACHINE for being able to update everyday. What the hell do a few typos really amount to?! I admit that I once submitted something to be brought to your attention, but that was an entirely different WORD with a COMPLETELY different meaning(one implied pleasure, the other deterioration and stripping loss of vitality) that I wasn't sure you'd intended.

Misfire needs some love, hardcore style. I'm so hopeful that SOMETHING will happen for the poor mech and he'll get some appreciation.....::mutter::possiblyaloveinterest....Cause you KNOW that'd be adorable, he's awkward enough NOW, and the bizarre fumbling of romance?! It's GOLD!

Keep on truckin'!!
Nacht
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From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2009
We love you!! ::gives cookies:: I agree with you if people cant understand that mistakes happen sometimes(especially with your schedual) then the back button is for them. I personally have seen people who go over things for a full month(school) and have a lot worse problems than any i haven't seen in yours. On the note of fluidity, i have seen the movie and animated, i see no problems with characterisation(sp?) at all. Things happen, you have to adapt to it. We are cheering for you ::waves paper fans:: YAY GO BDQ! WHOOT!
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From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2009
I do like your story, but I never expected an English professor to write it. Perhaps your critics are out of work English teachers looking for work? You do well enough for me. I look forward to a new chapter each day. The worst thing about your story is that eventually it'll be over.

Take care until next time!
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From Ficfan3484 on April 24, 2009
Noooooo!!!! Please don't stop writing because some people are super critical. Your story is one of the best I've ever read on a fanfiction site, it's actually kind of an epic story. Plus, if you stop writing, I'll never get to see the RTP's reaction when they find out what "Pregnant" means. As for this chapter.....Epps is awesome! I like how he though the whole situation was hilarious. Awwwe, Prowl is going to make a good dad, he's already worried about the sparkling. Bad Lambos, what were they doing in a pool? I loved that Uncle Ratchet will take care of any boo-boo ^_^ Wow, those sparklings will really be raised by a village of autobots.....YAY!!!!
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From ANON - Kattie on April 24, 2009
This story is, quite possibly, the best fanfic I�ve ever read. You show remarkable talent as an author with a unique writing style that allows the reader to become completely immersed in the story. The detailed ways in which you describe the situations in your story is amazing and you�ve managed to give each character a distinct personality that makes it almost impossible for the reader to not become attached. Not to mention how you�ve managed to incorporate humor into this story. I can�t tell you how many times I�ve almost fallen out of my chair laughing while reading this fic (which really isn�t a good thing seeing as I usually read it while I�m at work and my boss is starting to get suspicious ^__^). Also, in regards to all the negative reviews you�ve been getting, I would suggest ignoring them or disabling reviews if they�re bothering you that much. You can�t please everyone and if all they can do is nitpick details then why bother with them? You said that the reason you�re doing this story is because you enjoyed it and wanted to see where went. Well, I can guarantee you that there are plenty of others out there who are enjoying it and want to see where it goes at least as much as you do, myself being one of them. So please don�t let them discourage you from writing. You�ve got a good thing going here and I want to see where it ends up. So keep up the good work and update soon!
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From ANON - snapescelticgirl on April 24, 2009
You go girl!!
Takes all kinds of people to make the world go round and unfortunately we get stuck with the jackasses. Oops did I spell that right? I wonder if the grammer and spelling police will get me.
I think your story rocks. I have to be honest and say that most of the time I am so intent on the story that I never see grammer mistakes. And so what if there are. Fan fiction is for fun and not for some people to flaunt their supposed superiority over others. It would be different if every other word was spelled wrong, or you didn't know what a pronoun was, etc.
Do what I do when I get a flame or critcizing review. Print it out on paper and use it to wipe my butt.

Lots of love. Keep up this awesome story.
L
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From SingitSoftly on April 24, 2009
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Don't leave for good!!! I anticipate your chapters everyday! I f'ing love this story and how the characters are portrayed.... I actually prefer your version over their orginial personalities. lol Can't wait for the next one!! :)
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From ANON - Confuzzled_Neko on April 24, 2009
*gasps & pounces the author* no ending the story! I read this everyday after school, its sooo good *grins* plus, you know how rare it is to find mech/human relationship stories, specially ones of quality...and humor?
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From ANON - Sonia Bratton on April 24, 2009
i just thought you should know I absolutly love this story.
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From FieldsofHeather on April 24, 2009
*waves from her spot near Misfire's knee* First off, let me praise this chapter. I loved it, just like I've loved every chapter before it. Epps finding out about Megs, the twins in the fountain, Prowl's fears of being a daddy, even Megatron's dislike for Sam shortening his name to Meg were all wonderful. You are doing a great job and I truely appreciate all the work you've put into this story.

Now, onto a bit of a rant myself. *clears throat* Nitpicky people are a pain in the aft!! While I myself have not written in many years, not since the chat/roleplay group I belonged to when belly-up, I do still have to deal with nitpicky people. I've stood at the counter at work for 10 to 15 minutes while some lady compares two of the same figurine to see which one is "better looking." I feel like screaming, "THEY ARE IDENTICAL!! They Were Made From The Same Mold, Painted By The Same Person And Packed In The Same Type Of Box. PICK ONE ALREADY!!!" But I don't because then I'd get in trouble. *pouts* But anywho.... I've noticed spelling/grammer errors in your work, but you know what... I don't care!! With storytelling as good as yours, I can SO overlook a few mistakes because I'm enjoying myself too much. Somedays all I have to look forward to after work is dinner and this story right here. I've even found myself watching the clock, counting down until I get home and hopeing you've posted that days chapter already. Keep this in mind, nitpicky people are probably unhappy people with nothing to do but find faults in others and make them unhappy too.

Semi-rant #2... OOC-ness. Believe me, you're characters are much more in character then some stories I've read. I've seen some that have Megatron lay down his weapons, pick up a palet and paintbrush and spend the rest of his life traveling the backroads of the country painting landscapes. Ok... I've never seen that, but some are just as strange and OOC. Besides, from what I've seen from other stories and their reviews, there are some people who, if you're not going by the original series, think that you're a blasphemer and should be burned at the stake. I think you're doing a great job and everyone is very believable.

So, anyway, that's what I think and I think you should do what's right by you. Just know that I, and from what I've seen, several others here on AFF and on Live Journal are behind you 100%!!!

*gives BDQ a great, big HUG before turning to find.....*

"HEY, Get Back Here!!!"

*Misfire runs, jumps and flies away from his crazy fangirl*

*grumbles under her breath* "He has to come back some time!" *sits and waits*

P.S. No dought my review has some spelling errors, but you know what.... I don't really care. ;P *giggles*
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From ANON - Timberwolf on April 24, 2009
Please don't take those "mistake" reviews to heart, actually I find it kinda rude to do that to someone who put so much work into a great story. Personally, I'd be lost not to have this story to look forward too. Now for the review. What did the Twins think they were doing in the pool?LOL! Bad cars, bad cars!LOL. An Prowl should've know that the other Autobots would want to help when the Sparklings come along. Loved where Barricade an the othes tried to scatter when Epps showed up, poor Soundwave hasn't found out that theirs another "bat" to be worried about. :).
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From ANON - kaos child on April 24, 2009
NOOOO!!! Please! I love Cover Me! I think that it's awesome that you're actually updating everyday like you said you would and I love this story! Reading this is THE highlight of my day. I can always count on this to make me laugh like I'm crazy. If people keep on nagging you about mistakes then take out some book that's really popular and point out that it too has mistakes. Even though Harry Potter was crazy popular I found mistakes in it, so everyone makes them. I've been reading fanfiction for seven years now. I've very rarely found stories that I instantly loved and know I will remember for the rest of my life. This is definitely one of them. Cover Me makes the top 5 of my all time favorites. Thank you so much for creating this story and for going through all the *crazynaggingangstflamerpeople* stuff that comes with it. You took these characters and made them your own babies. Thank you! I like what you did to them!
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From ANON - Gray-Clouds on April 24, 2009
The twins in vegas would be awesome :D and I feel like going to SF now and looking for some autobots!
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From ANON - Timberwolf on April 23, 2009
Poor Optimus. He's gonna need a major vacation after this. Jazz, Bee, Barricade an the others at SanFrancisco? No good can come of this. LOL. Or worse yet Sideswipe an Sunny at Reno? Poor Ironhide an Prowl.
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