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By : Huronoryu

From FieldsofHeather on May 12, 2009
*snort* *snicker* Poor, poor Inferno. If it isn't one thing it's another and another and another. �Well, he did bite you already. Maybe he doesn�t think you�re much of a threat.� LMAO!!! As for the last chapter.... �-I just think that Prowl could use some� relaxation.-� �-Damn it Jazz, TMI!-� *falls off her chair laughing* OMG, that ranks up there as some of your best lines. I think Ironhide might have been mentally scared by that.

I look forward to more!!!!

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From ANON - Gray-Clouds on May 12, 2009
Sides was adorable. Can't wait for some Will and Hide WAFF. I am totally dying for some more of the pairing but cant find any D:
I really ab wondering though that if Will has been staying in Hide's hanger, where has he been sleeping?
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From Ficfan3484 on May 12, 2009
Yay! Epps figured it out, I don't think it's such a big secret as Will would like. Interesting how Barricade isn't willing to pull the trailer. The TMI bit was funny. Why is Optimus so chipper? As Barricade said, it the trip from hell. ^_^ I think you did a good job with the chapter.
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From ANON - Timberwolf on May 12, 2009
I love Ironhide an his having to shoot anything that's not symmetrical.
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From ANON - Nacht Kind on May 11, 2009
So, how incoherent was my last review, eh? That's why I shouldn't be allowed to rant at four in the morning.

Anyway, awkward and smitten Sam is unbelievably adorable and I want to pet his curly hair. Of all the mechs to fall for, he picks one of the least sentimental and unromantic of the bunch. Mind you, that's only what we've SEEN, but I imagine it holds true to a point. He'd probably be ultra awkward and discomfited, at least initially. Particularly considering who the interest would be. I'm curious as to if, when, and how Sam will divulge his love for the deliberately combative commander.

Will's still with child and I'm still going gaga over it. What the hell might he crave? Watermelon for iron? XD

Will and 'Hide can't catch a break, can they? But since Epps is such a sensitive and respectful soul who's NEVER prone to heckling or relentless prying, it shouldn't be too dramatic or uncomfortable for the pair, right? Yeah, s'what I thought.... It's sad that Ironhide and Will can't really have "alone time" other than the companionable stretches of road where Epps is in another vehicle, it'd be highly suspect. And no, that wasn't JUST my inner-perv lamenting opportunities lost. I would certainly feel a certain loneliness sleeping away from my loved one right after I'd committed to them and had begun staying with them regularly..... Tell me there's a late-night sneak out and rendezvous.

Oh, Optimus, taking your shots where you can find them, huh? I love that mech. Ironnox may be my OTP, but Prime is sex on sixteen wheels.

Happiness is knowing that I'll come home tomorrow and have more to read.
Nacht
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From ANON - Nacht Kind on May 11, 2009
See, now AFF's decided to hate me.

First off, I�m going to apologize for how much of a BULK post this is going to be. My computer is a temperamental princess and prone to going �OMG, I DON�T WANT TO LET YOU TYPE OR DO ANYTHING AT ALL ANYMORE!!!1!!!eleven!! D8 � right in the middle or after I�ve nearly finished a fairly lengthy review. At which point I scream �GRAWDAMMIT!! DX� and am, I feel understandably, infuriated, disheartened, and unwilling to go through the process of attempting to recreate it with the knowledge that my baby could bitch out in the middle again. Even as I type this, my computer�s frozen twice and I only have Word Documents to thank for my continuance in this endeavor.
First off, I�m fascinated by the development in the SBB corner, especially the time you�ve taken to discuss how Sam felt conflicted over it and startled by his ultimate feelings. The knowledge of how this may hurt �Bee is very realistic and poignant, especially considering how very close and dear �Bee is to him; he even mentioned that he similarly liked �Bee, his apparent attraction to �Cade was just both deeper and that ever so influential slightly different. A threesome certainly wouldn�t hurt my feelings, and I think some of the people crying out in denial of one are being terribly close-minded. Polyamorous relationships can be beautiful and work if done correctly, as I�ve stated before. Now, not having a preference for them is fine, I actually tend to favor and subscribe to the monogamous/one-to-one/OTP/para-relationship track, but being so vehemently, unquestionably AGAINST them smacks of an obstinate prejudice and intolerance that I find both ironic, given the subject matter, and disturbing. You�re a fantastic and astoundingly meticulous writer, the fact that some reviewers are being so petty in demands about YOUR story makes me wanna crack skulls. I mean, I�ve gone �hmmmm�� about a few things here and there, and even come out and remarked upon one in particular, but I didn�t DEMAND you stop it, I simply explained why it bothered me and followed that up with an intense and sincere statement about how I wasn�t trying to flame you and apologized if I came off as a harpy. God DAMN, where has all the common courtesy gone?!......Back on track though, I�ve got faith in you and am certain you won�t leave �Bee alone in the cold if it doesn�t turn out to be a three-for-all.

Will being pregnant= Unmatched and equally unholy GLEE. I love this couple so much, it isn�t right and the concept of them having babies is the jimmies on my OTP �HidexWill ice-cream cone. I�m going to be smug, with absolutely no cause mind you, and say I KNEW IT as soon as you had the scene where Ironhide was worried about his persistent fatigue and Will assured him it was because of the trip. Seriously, nothing I type can fully express my fangirlish joy and elation.
Can�t wait to see how the happy couple reacts; I�m hoping for surprised as all HELL but ultimately sweet and disbelievingly joyful. My WAFF beast is demanding feeding��.Oh, sweet Primus, what are the others going to SAY when they find out?!?!?! 8D First, the shock, then the HELL Ironhide�s going to get because �Oppy�(poor �Bot, no respect) and the crew were right, then the knowledge the Judy probably won�t leave Will alone(hopefully I�m wrong and she won�t shadow), then who knows what? My happiness just reached a new high and I�m about to combust, but will people *cough*JazztheTwinspossiblyRatchet*cough* be heckling/calling/teasing for a wedding? �Cause srsly, I�ll die from amusement and delight overload. Then again, that means they get a wedding night/honeymoon and as I�m an unrepentant pervert who loves any and all opportunities for chronicled intimacy, these two especially, I fully support that.

I�ve taken up enough space. Yay, for tomorrow!
Nacht

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From ANON - Nacht Kind on May 11, 2009
First off, I�m going to apologize for how much of a BULK post this is going to be. My computer is a temperamental princess and prone to going �OMG, I DON�T WANT TO LET YOU TYPE OR DO ANYTHING AT ALL ANYMORE!!!1!!!eleven!! D8 � right in the middle or after I�ve nearly finished a fairly lengthy review. At which point I scream �GRAWDAMMIT!! D:
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From ANON - Gray-Clouds on May 11, 2009
Oh snap! I get the feeling that this fic is going to be longer than 200 chapters . Can't wait to see Hide's reaction
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From ANON - Storm on May 10, 2009
Again I must say that I love this story. Honestly I can't wait to see how Will takes the news and what the baby will be like, Sparkling or more humanoid? And I can't wait until if or when Sam gets preggers, I'm sure that will be entirely entertaining. Keep up the great work.
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From Ficfan3484 on May 10, 2009
Poor Will, doesn't have a clue what's happening to him. Those poor agents that have to check them when they pass through the border. Poor Sunny and Jazz, they're being a bit overprotective of those two. Has poor Misfire gotten any love yet? What is going on with the Decepticons? There hasn't been any word on them lately.
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From ANON - Timberwolf on May 10, 2009
For Ch.121: Looks like Red has a pet X-box :). Now for this chapter. I'm curious about Will, wonder what's up? The mighty Megatron with a coloring book? That's so cute. LOL. I see Soundwave hasn't caught on the Blaster has a thing for him.
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From fanboy69 on May 10, 2009
this is such a great story.I prefer SamXBee, but SamXBarricade is nice as well. Keep writing and posting, please! I have one question that you don't have to awnser if you want. The question is: Will Sam and Will be able to get prego? and Is Will already Prego?
I.D
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From ANON - Gray-Clouds on May 10, 2009
The steering wheel reminded me of Head Crabs from the game DOOM D: My those mechs are adorable. Interesting that their optics are green but turn red when angered. eagerly awaiting what happens next.
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From ANON - poppyhigh on May 09, 2009
Amazing!!!!!!!!!! I just finish the new chapter right now! and couldn't wait for read more. I would like to know what's happen next with Sam/Bee/Cade. I hope it gonna be sad story to three of them. And for more explanation for little each mech, I think it'll have a nice result. Ahhhhh...can't wait for next chapter. Supporting you ^^
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From ANON - Gray-Clouds on May 09, 2009
Where can the Escalade possibly be hiding?!?!?! I wonder what other symptoms Red and the other will go through while carrying their sparklings, the whole static thing kind of confused me as to how he could see that was connected to his sparkling. Always a pleasure to read
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