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By : Huronoryu

From JeanMPat on June 02, 2009
well..... That was an interesting chapter. God I love this fic, must read more.... But unfortunately I have to go to work... -pouts-
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From ANON - catc10 on June 02, 2009
*bloodcurtling screaming*
HOlY SHIT I LOVE YOU!!!
I didn't think that...I was so...! I LOVE YOU!
I was SO SAD when you weren't updating! But now that you put seven up at once, I totally expect you to keep up one a day, and muliples when you miss. Sorry.
This last bit is the WORST place to leave off, btw. POOR BEE!!!
ME
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From ANON - Nacht Kind on June 01, 2009
Very well done battle with the seekers; the action flowed and contained enough detail to imagine what was happening but was was still comprehensible. Starscream is so crazy. I thought the moment where Megatron was fighting to reach Optimus was horribly sweet.

So, that whole "Linked" thing surprised me mightily and I imagine the Mechs are feeling even more severely blindsided. 'Cade for all his gruffness, seems like a mech that would be so dedicated and sincere to whomever he fell for. I have to say though, even for the adorable, if dramatically delivered considering the circumstances, turn of events, my heart is quaking for Bumblebee.....There really aren't words. I'm being completely sincere when I admit that my personal theme song for 'Bee and concerning whomever he hooks up with is "Sweet, Little Bumblebee" by Miss Papaya.

I wonder if Will and 'Hide are Linked? I know that the fact they'd CHOSEN one another was a deep and meaningful part of their coming together, but now that they know it's possible I'd think a part of them would desire it even if they are perfectly happy and know they don't need it. Perhaps at worst, I'd wonder rather worriedly why we WEREN'T Linked if it's possible...then again, it's Sam.

You're pretty damn fantastic.
Nacht
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From Nelleh on June 01, 2009
*Gah...!*
WOOOW! Oh, damn! You are GREAT! *hehehe* Those where some chapters, eh? Loved them! Keep writing me into bliss! :D
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From ANON - Djaly on May 31, 2009
That's like the most cruel cliff-hanger of all times!!!! Especially since I was rooting for Bee/Cade, since the Cybertronians really don't have that many options regarding partners, whereas Sam as a human can actually be chosy. But no, he goes for the giant alien robot. Or are you making it that Sam's into Cade, but Cade's into Bee (^^a fangirl's hope dies last^^) - well, I'll just have to write some stuff on my own, then, since this is your story and you're doing a great job so far....
still, hopefully, the next chapter that you're going to post is not with the team at the base - though, I really love Blaster, he's just too cute^^ I'm really curious, if Soundwave's gonna notice and like the change with the visor...he's so oblivous, simply great!

Please update soon,

Djaly
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From NearMiss76 on May 31, 2009
Hi, first I want to say I love your story and have been following it from the beginning, and I should apologise for never bothering to review before - put it down to the fact that I usually read each update at 2am when I'm barely able to string a coherant sentence together. Today however, I've been reading your mega update in the lovely sunshine so here I am.

I really love your characterisation, you've made even the most hostile Cons interesting and oddly appealing, and the Autobots are just adorable - I love what you've done with Red Alert in particular.

The whole story is just full of great humour, there's something to chuckle over in almost every chapter, and some I've laughed at til I cried - much to the amusement of my family.

These 7 chapters are just more of your usual brilliance. The Gremlins are great (and greatly in need of a stern, authority figure to administer some discipline ;) ), I love seeing what the Cons are up to (it's usually hilarious) and Misfire is a total star, I'm dying to know what's going on with Ravage because he seems to have become very attached to Sam (it becomes more clear everytime they interact), Megatron calling out for Orion was so sad, and that last line was heartbreaking.

Like some others I'm desperately hoping for eventual Bee/Sam/Cade because the only thing better than Bee/Sam or Cade/Sam in my opinion is Bee/Sam/Cade, but I love all your pairings and have a definite soft spot for Blaster and the incredibly oblivious Soundwave.

I can't wait now for the next update.

NearMiss
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From ANON - Timberwolf on May 31, 2009
Barricade an Sam are Linked?? How'd that happen? Poor Bee. I'm still gonna keep my fingers crossed for a Sam/Barricade/Bee hook up. Thought that was cute with Ravage sleeping at the foot of Sams bed.
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From ANON - Gray-Clouds on May 31, 2009
I was so happy when I saw that you had updated so much

I could not stop laughing when I rad the terraformers antics

I was happy to read up on the decepticons

my heart broke when Megatron cried out to Optimus

the only words I can say for optimus' last line are

"OH
MY
GOD"
Seriously, you rock

I should be sleeping I have work in the morning 8D
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From ANON - Nacht Kind on May 31, 2009
You know, I actually never laughed during "Dew Drop In". However, I think that's because it highlights the difficults of caring for the gremlins, which far outstrip those of the sparklings on the way. They're sparklings, but are old enough to have the equivalent impulsive and self-gratifying urges of toddlers....but with extreme intellegence, dexterity, and strength. The gremlins have no caretakers, were horribly abused, and have been left to fend for themselves for who knows precisely how long? The mechs, other than finding effective means of keeping them out of things, need to figure out ways to teach and discipline them. Seriously, all through the scene where they'd kidnapped the truck all I could think was "Oh, I would KILL them..." That's such a threat, for so many reasons. Risk of exposure, danger component, possible damage to base, etc. They need to figure out a place to keep them, even if they just kind of become the base-at-large's little group of wards. I think top on my list right after that would be discipline and acceptable behavior, because I sure as HELL would make it clear that such behavior was unacceptable and would not be tolerated.

Sorry, I got bitchy and lectured....It just struck me...I think I sometimes overthink these things and take them too personally.
Nacht
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From ANON - Timberwolf on May 31, 2009
I'd really love to know just what's going on between Ravage an Sam. It's interesting how it seems Sam an his great grandfather seem to have a connection to Primus.
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From ANON - Ficfan3484 on May 31, 2009
EH?!!!!!! O.O THEY'RE LINKED?!!! I didn't know that was possible. Thank you for the story overload ^_^ I couldn't get enough of it.
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From ANON - Chiaki Dark on May 30, 2009
BTW... The Ironhide/Will moments are wonderful and funny. And when Megatron screamed out for "Orion" I was choked up... *Sniffles* Still am....
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From ANON - Chiaki Dark on May 30, 2009
OMG! OMG! OMG!
That was an amazing chapter, dearest author!
And I have to say that it was very clever of you how you eventually dropped the "bombshell."
God...I was so hoping this was the kind of "bombshell" the title of the chapter was referring to, and I was right! Yes... but also nooo~! Poor 'Bee... I'm still rooting for the Cade/Sam/Bee triad though. Maybe 'Bee has feelings for both Sam and 'Cade? A girl can hope and pray.
I'm always looking forward to your updates.
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From FieldsofHeather on May 30, 2009
*twitches from awesomeness overload* Gah!! When I saw you had updated I was like, oh yeah!!!. Then I saw 140 chapters and I was like this... ?o_O? wasn't there 133 yesterday? Then I was like this... O_O OMG!!!!

134... I laughed at poor Will all red faced and this line was priceless... �You two go any further than that back there and I�ll scrap you myself, Soundwave be damned.� LOL!!! An aircraft carrier!! Now that's a ship!! I actually got to ride on an aircraft carrier once, the USS Eisenhower. My brother was asigned to it and they had a "Family Day" and my parents and I drove down to Norfolk. My mom was worried about seasickness but the thing was so big, I couldn't actually feel it moveing. Now we were just doing a couple laps around the Chesapeak Bay, so I don't know what it would be like out on the open water, so I'm not going to say you got it wrong with some of the mechs getting sick and dizzy. For all I know they could, also their systems could be sensitive enough to make them dizzy, who knows. Plus, Ratchet puking over the side was just too funny!!

135... Blaster is one of those characters I keep finding myself going "Awwww!" at. He's just that cute and add his worry about the visor and it's "awwww" times 2! �Just look at them!� �Look at what?� �Where�d they go?� This set of lines had me laughing hard and when you reveiled that the Gremlins had hijacked a Dew truck I just about hurt myself laughing. That little bit with Motorhead saving 'Blue and 'Blue then crying over him made me feel all warm and fuzzy!

136... LOL at them all almost tipping the ship over. I could so see everyone scrambling to get to the other side. Jazz on the ice and Sunny not getting to have fun with Sides was great.

137... *cheers at the return of her little sweetie* LOL those 'Con's are too much. Everyone's looking for someone and no one can find them. *snickers* And I just have to say, YES, You Tell'um Misfire!! Give'um Hell!! *latches onto her sweetie Seeker's leg and nearly purrs with joy*

138... It seems to me that Ravage is getting attached to Sam. It's so cute how he lays his head on Sam, like he's asking for a scratch behind the ear. *snickers*

139... �We haven�t even found any Energon yet.� �We found it!� �You were saying?� �Plan away,� GAH, LMAO!! They tryed to plan for everything, but never thought about having to dig for the energon. So funny. And who out there didn't love Ravage sleeping at Sam's feet?

140... O_O!!! Great chapter, absolutly wonderful. The action, the drama, the holy slag-ness of it!! Sam and 'Cade are linked! Poor 'Bee's gonns be so hurt. I almost teared up thinking about what must be going threw his mind. I'm sure Sam will be glad to know what he's feeling isn't just a crush but at the same time he's gonna be agonizing over 'Bee's feelings. OMG and you ended the update there!! You evil thing you! When I finished this chapter I was like... NO, don't stop there!!

All in all, this was a fantastic update and I can hardly wait for more. Until next time... *huggles*
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From ANON - music-is-luv on May 30, 2009
WHAT?!?!?! Oh my God!! Oh. My God. OH MY GOD, YESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I must do a little dance now. [[dance, dance]] YAYYY!!! I am very pleased. Pleased pleasy please pleased!!!
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