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By : Huronoryu

From FieldsofHeather on November 12, 2009
*Digs herself out from ubder the pile of Life dumped on her head* I finally made it!!

Awwwww....Gravelgrinder and Spindle, so cute!!! He missed his little buddy! *giggles*

And who is this? Is it.... Swindle maybe? Or someone else? Hmmmm

*curls up with the long-suffering Misfire* Mmmmm, who needs down pillows when you have a cute Seeker!! ^_^
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From Ficfan3484 on November 10, 2009
What's Rollerforce's idea?!!! Those poor gremlins. I want to see how Red and Mikaela suffer!!! And sadly, I understand Groundhog's complaint about being short *sob*
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From racheldr on November 10, 2009
I love this story, look forward to the next chapter every week; i just hope sam doesn't let 'cade and 'bee off the hook easily, they deserve a bit of pain.
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From jadecorby on November 05, 2009
I like long fics! When I read a good story its twice as great when it's nice and long. Keep up the good work, you have me intrigued, I check up on your fic for updates all the time =).
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From ANON - foxsonyablue on November 04, 2009
i have love eacch and every chapter you have posted . I espacially like the completely random ones like this b/c it keeps the story grounded. lol i look forward to every new chapter, and can't wait for the next one. thanks for posting this for us to be able to read! xoxo
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From KyuKoneko on November 03, 2009
The length of this Fic is amazing, honestly hope it never ends.
It gives me something to read and then reread,
that takes me time and I enjoy it as much as the time before.
So don't worry about others sayin' anything about that.
As you said, you write it for yourself first! That's how it should be.

Anyway, Blue and Motor are so cute.
Made me laugh when Motor was talkin' with Crikey.
Figures someone would wanna spy on them and awesome scene with Trent -- he deserves the freak out.

Yet I'm a little on the
"Nooo, still a cliffhanger -- wanna know whose dropping in and now another one!"
side on what's happenin' up in Alaska, Haha.

Great job! :3
Can't wait for the next chapter.

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From ANON - sacred legacies on November 03, 2009
*starts to laugh* Fugures Trent would flip out like that!
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From ANON - KiaOfTheSand on November 03, 2009
D: I LOVE the length of this fic! Heck, I don't care if it goes anywhere, as long as I get to read it... ^_^

:D Aww, how cute. They're going on a date?
^_^ The Terraformers causing trouble once again, eh? XD They seem to be the major form of entertainment over at the base right now.
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From ANON - Gray-Clouds on October 30, 2009
I come back to the fic after catching up on my school work and i find my self at a cliff hanger. How evil of you BDQ
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From swordqueen on October 29, 2009
I agree with Catc: this is going to be...a challenge to edit. Right now, if it were actually printed and bound, it would be well over 2,200 pages long (I used a very high words-per-page number to do the calc--it's actually probably higher), and that's apparently only 2/3 of it? So....this is longer than _Gone with the Wind_ and _War and Peace_ put together. Obviously you're doing something right to get people reading such a massive text, but...some chapters are a bit flabby--not much happens. Or we have the SAME argument over and over again (how many times are Bee and Cade going to argue over Sam while not bothering to notice or consider Sam's actual feelings?) where nothing gets resolved. I'm glad to see that in the last two chapters it seems things are finally moving again: I hope this means you've got a handle on the action and we're going to see rising conflict and story tension, not just interpersonal, as we build to what I certainly hope is an exciting climax!
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From ANON - catc10 on October 28, 2009
*bwahahaha-ing all OVER the place*

Awesome! God, I love this fic! More bots are falling down? Or wait...decepticons, maybe? I don't know! Now I'm all on-edge trying to figure out if it's a bunch of decepticons about to attack them or Autobots just headed to Optimus's potition (or even more accidentally crash-landing types!) Some Neutrals, maybe? also, can they fly home in the plane? It would be REALLY SWEET if the Energon could get mailed to them, and they could, you know, get back to the consulate. They have some (read: lots) of surprises waiting for them! Speaking of the consulate...we haven't seen anything from their end for a while. I'm forgetting what color Blaster is! And I miss the awkward BluestreakxMoterhead moments...is IS BluexMoter, right? It's been a *WHILE*.

About a comment you made on ch22 of "Never Did Run Smooth" (man, I was excited to see you were a fan of that, too,), we aren't about to kill you for your writing style. We love you, we love this, and DAMN if we're going to stop now! BUT, your editing will cause some serious headaches if you do it as extensively as you need to. The way I see it, some of the stuff you have in each chapter is very relevant, but a lot of conversations seem redundant or pointless, leading to extensive wordage without much gain. Some chapters seem to have been written without much in the way of a chapter plot, and more of a chapter situation, which could have been a LOT shorter or even DELETED to the status of throw-away line, and merged with the non-plot-important and plot-imporant bits of the preceeding or anteceding chapters.

I figure that this isn't a problem for someone reading the chapters as they come out so much as a problem for anyone starting from the beginning, because if you read them as they come out the pace feels like it matches. We spent ten-thirty minutes reading a new peice to something we haven't seen in a week, but anyone new will spent 7-8 DAYS slogging through the accumulated events that are so closely tied into one another that the wealth of TOO MUCH INFORMATION will kill their interest in very little time flat.

This is FURTHER complicated in that usually, the problems don't get SOLVED. Emotional tangles are TAKING over, and while it's GREAT to read, bdq, eventually they have to start coming together, or the end will be cheesy when it all comes down at once. Who has figured out their problems? Ironhide and Will, Ratchet and Wheeljack, and Jazz is not dead anymore. That's about it. And even then, they have more around the corner. Mikaela has no one new (the suggestion that Miles likes her is great, but MAN, do I NOT want to see it happen. Miles is great, and so is Mikaela, but not together. Mikaela would get with one of the visiting AirForce guys before she got with Miles, and Miles would LOVE explaining movies and nerdy things to her, but she wouldn't enjoy it. Engines and Make-up and sarcastic daytime soaps are more her thing, I think.) and The whole Autobots linked to Decepticons thing isn't worked out, Blaster hardly even TALKS to Soundwave anymore, The Earth-born 'bots aren't common knowledge to the expidition crew, the expidition crew doesn't know about the Race Track Patrol being at base, Ironhide and Will don't know about their kid, Optimus doesn't know about Megatron or their link, in fact, there are a LOT of people NOT in that loop, Megs still has no body, just WHAT is to happen with Bee's feelings in all this?, none of the carrying bots know what to do when they deliver, know one knows HOW they're going to deliver, WILL'S got to deliver, Decepticons and Starscream are up to no good, but who knows what 'cause they're never talked about, hardly, and I'm not even LOOKING at the main pairing in question for this fic!

All in all, this is a story well-continued, and excellently written, but hard to get into now that's started. You're adding new mechs now, which means that even MORE problems will be introduced, and you still have SO MANY still to work from! I have faith that you can knock it all out, you're very dedicated to the fic and it shows, anyone who puts 700,000 words into ANYTHING is nothing BUT dedicated!

I really do love the fic, and I've been reading since forever. I just want some PROBLEMS TO GET SOLVED!! THE ENDLESS DRAMA IS MAKING ME FROTH AT THE MOUTH WITH NEEDY, UNFUFILLED WISHES!!!
ME
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From ANON - sacred legacies on October 26, 2009
*busts out laughing* GO SAM! *snickers* anyone wonder how long it'll be before Bee and Cade figure out Sam's ignoring them on purpose? lol.

I sooooooo loved the very last part. *snickers* wonder who's landing THIS time?
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From FieldsofHeather on October 26, 2009
*bounces with glee* Oh boy, new arrivals!!! I wonder who... with that big honking plane there, might one of them be.... Skyfire? That would be so cool! And way to go Sam, give those aft-heads something to think about. Hide is so much fun...

�Man, ever since we got wheels you have been stuck on that �roll� bit haven�t you?� �Shut up.�

*snickers* Some of my favorate moments this chapter... Soundwave hands over his power cores, Prowl starts to walk away only for 'Wave to pull out more. Also... "Sunny didn�t even know what a toaster even did exactly but he wasn�t about to chance it." Smart move Sunny!!

*watches some scary movies with the 'Cons. munching on some candy, she pats Misfire's leg*

Me: Don't worry cutie, Michael Myers isn't going to hunt you down.

Misfire: *peeks from between his fingers* Are you sure?"

Me: Yes, sweetie. Besides you're big enough, you could just squish him if he came after you.

Misfire: *keeps his hands over his face* If you say so.
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From ANON - PancakesM on October 26, 2009
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue!
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From mapleflavored on October 26, 2009
Oh, you evil, EVIL author! That has got to be one of the worst cliffhangers in this whole fic! Are they 'cons or 'bots? This is going to drive me crazy!!! I have to wait a WHOLE WEEk to find out! *wonders off seeking distractions*
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