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Reviews for The Human Stain

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  • From tsbunnies94 on July 01, 2009
    Wow, that is a really well written story. I can't wait till you update it again. Hopefully it's soon :D
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  • From SimplyMarigold on August 09, 2008
    I hope you haven't abandoned this story. Please update soon,
    It's far too good to be unfinished.

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  • From WilkinsDragon on July 16, 2008
    I am beyond impressed by your story. I am brand new to trying my hand at a Tranformers fanfic (not here but @ fanfiction.net) and I by chance was curious as to what was out there in comparison to the "Same ole crap". I was MOST fortunate to come across your story and I anxiously await an update!

    Brilliant! Absolutely Brilliant!

    F.L.
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  • From akathetoad on June 19, 2008
    Oh I love this! It's so original and yet still holding with all the ambiance and characterization of the cannon setting. I hope you're still writing on it, as I eagerly await more. :-)

    Claire is a brilliantly flawed multidimensional character and Smokescreen is one yummy alien car. :-)
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  • From Lavonne on May 14, 2008
    I love it! -giggles- although I feel sorry for Claire... being stuck with an Ex-look-a-like that held the personalitly of the autobot she was falling for. -snickers- and what girl couldn't help falling for the mech that saved her life... I love the detal that you so lovinging put inot the story. And the President is one of them... sweet. Well the shit done hit the fan now. Waiting for the next chapter... Poor Smokescreen... All those naughty memories -wink-
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  • From on April 17, 2008
    Glad to see your back. Wow, this was a very nice chapter. Gonna be kinda rough on Smokescreen getting used to this new body, feelings, ect. Gonna be interesting to see how the others react to it. Chan't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From SimplyMarigold on April 13, 2008
    Wow way to leave on a cliffhanger! It seems almost cruel, though it was an excellent chapter.
    I am extremely curious to see what is going to happen next. Smokescreen does not seem to like
    humans as much as the other Autobots do. How is he going to like being one...
    Good luck on your move, a lovely House Warming gift (to us) would be a nice, long, new chapter... ^_^

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  • From on April 02, 2008
    Ch.15. Mid-April?!!!!!! Well, that's totally unacceptable!!!! (Grin, kidding). Wow, this chapter had me on the edge of my seat, loved it. Now I'm wondering, will Smokescreen get his body back? How will the other autobots react when they find out? Well, now that I think about it mid-April isn't really that far away. LOL. Good luck with your move.
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  • From on March 29, 2008
    Oh, man, this is looking good? Bad? (shrug) The president seems to have been taken over, I'd love to find out how they managed that. Claire's ex is toast, which we seen earlier. Now we have this huge fight on her street. I think Smokescreen's gonna be a little ticked if they get out of this, he warned her about what might happen and it did. Oh, to back up a little to where Claire was wondering if Smokescreen didn't enjoy arguing with her? I kinda think she enjoy's it too. LOL. Anyways as always I can't wait to see more. (Would a cookie bribe speed things along? (Grin)
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  • From SimplyMarigold on March 24, 2008
    Woo MIT!
    Great chapter, I loved how Smokescreen and Claire had that soft moment in the end.
    Makes me wish I had a large robot friend.
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  • From on March 24, 2008
    Awwwww, Smokescreen an Claire are getting along. I really like the feel fo this chapter, keep up the great work on it.
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  • From on March 19, 2008
    Personally, I'm enjoying the pace the story's going. I'm with Marigold about Bumble Bee/ Smokescreen.:). This was a very nice chapter, now if Smokescreen'd done the right thing with the soda machine instead of showing off it would've been a nice jesture on his part, but Claire pouring the soda on him didn't help matters either. But I'm just wondering if Smokescreen isn't masking his feelings with his attitude instead? Could be wrong, but that's what's starting to crop in in the back of my mind about these two. Antways can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From SimplyMarigold on March 18, 2008
    To answer your question (A.N. chapter 12.) I personally love extremely, long chapters.
    On the other hand, more updates are nice. In the end, it does not matter to
    me either way.
    I will be happy with just the update (hee hee).
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  • From SimplyMarigold on March 18, 2008
    Cheers to Bee! It seem both Smokescreen and Bee seem to have this rivalry going on, interesting.
    I absolutely love how they get under each other's "hoods" har har.... *Ahem*

    The soda scene was great, he acted like the 'cool guy' who chills by the vending machine all day, and
    helps you out by banging the side to help you get your snack… if you meet his fancy.
    Its nice to see that Smokescreen has a gentler side and does slightly care for Claire. However, I am looking
    forward to seeing how their relationship is going to plays out. Especially if he is the type of bot who
    enjoys a fresh helping of revenge.
    However, I do pity them for having to stay in that gross hotel room. Just thinking what may be living on
    the mattress and carpet gave me the jitters.
    In conclusion, I agree with Timberwolf, you have me hooked.


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  • From on March 16, 2008
    I really enjoyed how this cahpter went. I'm surprised . . well, I don't know if surprised is the right word or not, by Smokescreen at the end here, it seem as if he's trying to be nice. It's gonna be interesting to see how things pan out. As you can see, I'm pretty much hooked on your story here, keep up the great work.
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