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Reviews for The Human Stain

By : Subtext
  • From on March 14, 2008
    First, I gotta agree with Marigold, it really makes my day to see a new chapter to this story and as Marigold says, now all the parts are starting to come together nicely. I remembered watching Transformers growing up and when I heard about the movie I thought for sure they'd screw it up, instead I freaking love it and can't wait for the second movie to come out. As far as personalities of Smokescreen and Claire you could ask for a better match up. LOL. Also funny was BumbleBee putting Smokescreen in his place(Grin), that'll teach the old grouch LOL. Again, keep up the good work.
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  • From SimplyMarigold on March 12, 2008
    First, I love coming online and checking this story and seeing that it is updated ^_^ it really makes my day.
    Second, Smokescreen has such a great personality. He and Claire have wonderful chemistry.
    I love how your story is getting to the stage were all plots are starting to unravel.
    I like Transformers (mostly the movie) but unfortunately, I do not know much about them (sorry).
    However, you explain everything so nicely in the story that I can understand no problem.
    Especially in, the *actual* story and your ending notes.
    This is turning out to be such a fantastic story. I hope you don't deiced to give up on it.
    Keep chuggin' on.

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  • From on March 12, 2008
    I'd rather read the TV Guide. Kidding, kidding. I'm sorry to hear your loosing steam on this, at least to me this seem to be going great. Long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading, keep up the good work.
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  • From on March 11, 2008
    Love this story, it's gonna be interesting to see where this goes with Claire and Smokescreen. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From SimplyMarigold on March 09, 2008
    I love this! When I checked to see if you updated and saw all the new chapters, I was ecstatic.
    Your doing a great job and I look forward to reading more. Keep up the great writing.

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  • From supersheep1019 on March 04, 2008
    Very interesting; a better fanfic than what's normally posted on this site.
    I definitely want to know what happens next!
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  • From lbjackson on March 04, 2008
    OMG! I can't believe you are using a 79 Datsun Fairlady Z. That is my favorite car. My husband has 79 280ZX Fairlady and it is a light blue with a red interior. I learned how to drive stick in that car. We take our daughter for drives in that car. You got me hooked on this story. I hope Claire dosen't freak out to much when she see the steering wheel on the right side of the car. All Fairlady Z are imported from Japan and they drive on the right hand side over there. Great story so far. Update ASAP!
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  • From SimplyMarigold on March 03, 2008
    Very intresting start.. I wonder where you are going with this..
    I think you need to continue though.. chapter 2 please ^_^
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