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Reviews for Little Pieces of the Nothing That Fall

By : deniedheaven
  • From iloveMP2yea on June 15, 2008
    Will you marry me? That was perhaps the most emotionally-calling piece of writing upon which I have ever set my eyes. It calls up so much to read what's going on in Tyler's mind, what's happening, and I absolutely love how you have involved Reid in the plot. I especially enjoyed the way in which Aaron stole "baby boy".

    My only suggestion would be to be a bit more fluid between section charges. I mean, between some, it was amazingly fluid; however, between others, I had trouble. There were also a few paragraphs that I had to re-read a couple of times before I understood the meaning fully.

    BUT, I absolutely loved every second of it! It racked me. ^_^

    ~Bradly~
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  • From theworstwitch on March 15, 2008
    that story was amazing.
    superbly written. I am a little stunned you haven't had more reviews. I suspect it has more to do with peoples comfort with the theme, than your abilities. I actually joined specifically to review. Bravo.
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