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Reviews for Your Eyes Can Be So Cruel

By : NeverEmbers
  • From ANON - Reih on June 30, 2008
    Oh my! This is one of the best Labyrinth fanfics that I've ever read and most certainly the best one that I've read lately. It's so hard to find a fic that has a good plot, well thought-out characters (Diddle!!), and an author who can actually write. I love the way you made Jareth throw Sarah into situations (just like he really would have done) but then you didn't linger for too long on one thing. You kept the story moving and kept us (the readers) excited and waiting for the next chapter. I was so sad to see that I had reached the last chapter! I hope you update this fanfic! It's going in my favorites!
    *A fan for life*
    Reih~
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  • From darkeuphoria on June 29, 2008
    you did an awesome job... i like the originality in your story and your trueness to character... well done
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  • From ANON - Cheeky_Wench on June 11, 2008
    Heya Hun

    I see you still havnt updated **CRIES** Please Please PLEase PLEASE UPDATE SOON,
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  • From ANON - amaria on May 27, 2008
    hi!I loved this story but since you havent updated for ages I'm not going to give up but I'm only going to check every other week now,lol!Please update!!
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  • From dweek on April 12, 2008
    I just finished reading your story so far and I have to say I love it. As a person who has been watching the Labyrinth since she was very young, and understood more and more of it as she got old, I have to say I think you have caught these characters very well. The layers with the brother and the other fey of the Underground are interesting and very believable to the world.

    On another note, just to tell someone I can see is a great fan of the movie, I wasn't sure if you knew or not but they have started to write a manga about what happens after the movie. It takes place several years later and involves mostly Toby. Though I think I am liking your version better. Please keep writing this story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2008
    HEHE Loving it so far. What are Feral's Plan surely she has some evil motive for helping Sarah.
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  • From Shalengreh on March 31, 2008
    cool

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  • From ANON - Faye on March 23, 2008
    Ack, how misunderstandings can be blown out of proportion....I love your story and I definitely hope you are able to update soon! =)
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on March 17, 2008
    Heya i was wondering when you are going to update next? i love this story and i only found it today. hehehe
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  • From Ryokitty on March 10, 2008
    Oh wow... I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is actually a good story. I like stories that aren't all fluff and romance. Things like this... yeah. Hope to see the next chapter soon
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  • From pandorarose2006 on March 09, 2008
    OMG i hope you continue. i am loving this story. as for those bitching about the BDSM um hello its in as one of your warnings kinda like if you don't like that kinda stuff DUH don't read the story you moron. Keep up the story omg i need more PLEASE
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  • From boguswoman on March 04, 2008
    After reading other people's reviews and their responses to what they assumed I had said, I feel that I must explain once more - even though I assumed that you probably have such dom/sub relationship in your life, I wasn't trying to insult your probable sexual preferences. I was only saying that if you have such a relationship in your own life, then there is no hope that you will write anything different in your story.

    I also feel that after my previous explanations it should have become clear that I wasn't aiming at dom/sub relationship as such in my review, but at the kind of abusive relationship where those things happen without consent from the abused person and where the one abusing them doesn't really care about the other and doesn't think about how the other feels and if she/he is not hurt too much in the process. It seemed to me that that's the way how Jareth was going to treat Sarah and when I wrote the review I was too upset about that to stop and really think what I was saying and how I was saying it. So it came out the wrong way.

    I also apologize for using the dom/sub label constantly instead of the right abbreviation. I admit that I don't really know what that abbreviation stands for, and probably that's why I never remember the right sequence of letters without looking it up.
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  • From amaria on March 03, 2008
    Hi, I'm sorry I havent reviewed in a while I'v been really buzy.
    I completly agree with you, I feel personally that a very stong and binding love can be easily found through BDSM so long as your open to the new experiences(or old ;-) )it brings with it.
    Having been in such relationships myself, which is the reason I read this type of story,(plus Jareth!)and also taking the time to review, I have come to notice that a lot of people find it fun to flame a good writter for a story which as far as the reviewer is concerned is sick and disturbing.
    Well I only have one real thing to say to these people and that is that I have read some truly disgusting things on this site, and I have never even considered leaving a flame, if I found the story to not be to my own taste then I would simply stop reading the story and would carry on looking for another one. I would never presume to insult a persons sexual preferance, as far as I'm concerened as long as it's two consenting adults anything goes,(whatever floats your boat as they say,lol.)and at the end of the day it's just a story, not real life, if you want to get really technical go read the real life section and leave good writters alone.
    NeverEmbers I hope that that makes you feel a little better.
    Amaria xx
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  • From petlover4life on March 02, 2008
    I liked it :) Please add more.

    And ignore people who don't like BDSM. Fantasies are fantasies for a reason, and the actual practice of BDSM revolves around the SSC concept - Safe, Sane, and Consensual.

    I love being beaten ;-)
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  • From ANON - Flowerchild on March 01, 2008
    Ooo, mean Jareth! I'm personally not a fan of guys doing things like than and getting away with it, so I hope Sarah makes it hard for him! I do really like your story so far though, and I can't wait to read more :)
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