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Reviews for A Union of Convenience (Formerly ‘Alone’)

By : Keen
  • From DeathGodDist on February 10, 2008
    Ah, re-reading this one has been a treat as it reminds me why I enjoyed the original so much. It has been a while though since I read it so I am unable to compare and contrast the differences that much. IIRC, the introduction has completely changed because in the original, the story started off with Isis getting captured and A'rah and Ali'Shir saving her, where as now, the story begins after A'rah's death and Ali'Shir having to take her on as his charge.

    I'm a bit confused when I try to picture Ali'Shir in terms of what he looks like though, and I had a problem with that in the original too. In one of the chapters here, it seems to imply that he's quite physically out of shape and weak, yet he seems to have no trouble taking on an Elder though. Also I haven't read yet how much different he is from a normal Yautja because he is half human (and I don't remember if Isis knows this yet or not).

    Oh well, I still am greatly liking reading through this one again, and I cannot wait to see how it will end up differently than the original. :)
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on February 10, 2008
    LOL. Keenage! We only bitched and knashed our teeth because it was such an awesome fic that we fell in love with the characters. That and we wanted to know what happened next. But we are greedy bee-otches like that! And as for how it is now. I still like it. And of course, can't wait to see the rest of it!
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on February 10, 2008
    Yes! It was good! Just hope Isis will lady it up a little sooner. Bad taste in attire is one thing, but dirty is another. I like her character just the same though.
    Since Isis has been bedded recently will she fall to Jo'ien's charms so easily? Hope not.
    Reluctant mates makes room for some fun I think. I could see Alshir or Isis teasing the other. Can't wait!
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  • From aquamum on February 02, 2008
    Loved this chapter - look forward to your next posting.
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  • From sagikamikazi on January 30, 2008
    Ahh yes! The story goes on...
    I love it!!!I have a feeling this is going to be sooooooo good!
    Keep up the good work honey, you've got me drooling for more!
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on January 28, 2008
    I was just kidding. I really don't care when you post new chapters. I completely understand that RL comes first. And that sometimes you just don't want to deal with an ongoing project. I have many of those. But, none the less, I do enjoy the story. I am however, wondering if perhaps those that have not read the story the first time around, might be a little lost...or maybe I'm just screwed up thinking that there was more back story before...OH and one thing I did notice is that the flash back wasn't offset by anything. I almost didn't realize that it was what happened in the past. But again, that is just me. Can't wait to see the rest of it! =D
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on January 28, 2008
    Each chapter is visually even more tangible and polished than before. Looking forward to more. Will there be alternate endings or a sequel?
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  • From ANON - Shortest_warrior on January 28, 2008
    Good one Keen. Loved the first one, and am loving this one too. Can't wait to see where you will take it.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 27, 2008
    Nice. I have not read the first story but will look for it tomorrow. Please e-mail me when you update. Please? talene02002@yahoo.com
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  • From Kalar on January 22, 2008
    Hi Cam. I love this story. Isis is so strong and brave, I hope things will become better for her. More chapters? Soon I hope.
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  • From ANON - bluecatdevil on January 17, 2008
    Cool story, I want to read more please keep updating. Cheers blue.
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  • From aquamum on January 17, 2008
    I like this your rewrite
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on January 17, 2008
    Wow! I love where your taking this version, too. More soon please.
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  • From sagikamikazi on January 13, 2008
    You do intend to update soon right? RIGHT????!!!!!Because I very much like what I've read so far and can't wait for the rest!
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  • From ANON - Jennie on January 13, 2008
    I like this story. A lot. (Despite the only chapter for now XD)
    I'm glad that it takes place in Yautja culture, so you can get a look into their world.
    I hope you update soon and make us all happy :'D
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