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Reviews for A Union of Convenience (Formerly ‘Alone’)

By : Keen
  • From midnighteyes on May 28, 2008
    I've finally read all the chapters and i am caught up !!! Bravo !!! Bravo !!! You defiently have me hooked.. Your writting is just awesome.. I feel like i'm actually there watching everything... And of course love all the sexual tension... Bravo !! Bravo !!! Keep it coming !!!
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  • From midnighteyes on May 28, 2008
    I've finally read all the chapters and i am caught up !!! Bravo !!! Bravo !!! You defiently have me hooked.. Your writting is just awesome.. I feel like i'm actually there watching everything... And of course love all the sexual tension... Bravo !! Bravo !!! Keep it coming !!!
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on May 28, 2008
    Nothing feels old about your revision of this story. It has been rejuvenated, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Ajestice on May 18, 2008
    I'm having to forcefully keep myself from gushing, and I'm finding it difficult - all I want to do is repeat my undying love for this fic in capital letters with hearts and smileyfaces and so on and so forth. But I'm controlling myself.

    This is one of the best stories I've ever read. The character development is so real, and the pacing is flawless. I love Isis, she's formidable without being tiresome and Ali is absolutely delectable. And I love them together. And I love how Ali made that name mistake a second time. Poor guy...

    And I want a little Yautja baby!!!

    Okay, I let my control slip for a second, but I'm better now. No more gushing.

    I just read the entire thing straight through; I couldn't put it down (or rather, leave my computer screen). And I can't wait for an update. Happy writing.
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  • From midnighteyes on May 17, 2008
    wow!!! i just found this story and its awesome.. I'm only on chapter four and i am already hooked... Your writting makes me feel like i'm there viewing it all!! Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.. Update soon i hope!!!
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  • From ANON - Gillia on May 08, 2008
    can i just say I LOVE this story and I look daily to see when you've updated? Yeah, I'm a bit of a geek, but this is really one of the best Predator fanfics I've read in forever. Excellent work, awesome character development: I can't wait to see what comes up next. Keep up the wonderful work.

    ~G
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  • From DasGrauen on May 08, 2008
    That was great! I was bursting to know what was behind that mask, and now I think he should trow it in the garbage, he seem to look good after all XD
    Please Update soon, I can't get enough of this fic.
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  • From XXallthatjazzxX on May 08, 2008
    AH HA!
    Take that Kai!
    ^^ Started to read your story, and then could /not/ stop. It is very compelling! I looovvee Isis! She's great.. Ali'shir.. is more wishy washy. >> Back and forth with Isis and Kai, but he's still a great character :3 That last chapter was just a icing on top of the Ali'shir cake. Woonnddeerrrfffuulll. :3
    Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on May 08, 2008
    URST!! Gotta love it. And if I'm not mistaken, this is where the fic starts to get really heated. Great revisions. Love it and want more of it!!!
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  • From Lavonne on April 30, 2008
    O_O wow... -purrs and fans self- Poor Isis has herself in a tight spot -chuckles- And Ali is no better.. of course we all know what he want -wink wink nudge nudge- Darlink this is a wonderful fic.. you've got me on the edge of my seat waitin for more...
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on April 26, 2008
    Things are getting even hotter and better. The deed hasn't even been done and I have melted into a puddle on the floor already. Can't wait for more.
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  • From DasGrauen on April 25, 2008
    'So much fun!' LOL Poor Isis... Ali will tear Joi'ens head off if he learns about their little encounter! You're evil! But definitly a hot chapter! You manage to hold the suspense for such a long time that I really burst to know what will happen next! Please update ASAP
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  • From ANON - Shortest_warrior on April 13, 2008
    I love the way he went in to hhhum, 'releave his own tension' by thinking of Kai, but ended up thinking of Isis instead. LOL

    Now, he wasn't a pussy tease this time. He was his own prick tease.

    Love it Keen. Keep going
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on April 12, 2008
    Well, well, well...that was all new. I think...prolly not, but at this point I can't remember anymore. Great to see an update and I can't wait to see the next one! =D
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  • From ANON - Jennie on April 12, 2008
    I'm in love with this story, though I didn't read it before it was rewritten.
    I can't help but get angry when I read a chapter and discovers that there aren't any more. I hope you can bear with me, since I really love your story.
    Anyway, I'm bookmarking this, so I can check all the time.
    Keep up your wonderful work!
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