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Reviews for A Union of Convenience (Formerly ‘Alone’)

By : Keen
  • From Cupidxx on June 28, 2008
    WOOOOT!
    at last! some ACTION :D
    Your stories are beautiful, I need to review them more often so you can know how much I love this story haha.
    Its amazing. I love Ali and Isis :3

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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on June 28, 2008
    So hot. I love this fic!
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  • From XXallthatjazzxX on June 24, 2008
    ..Nice.. very very nice.. Too bad Ali'shir couldn't kill him though.. that would have been Aaammazzinnggg.. Of course, then there would be no real problem in the story.. except for Kaian.. I was ready for Isis to skewer her too.. Of course, that was put to a stop too.. Damn XD Lol anyways, I loved the chapter, can't wait till you update again! :3
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on June 23, 2008
    Well, that was very good. I did notice quite a few changes from the original in this chapter. Especially the new title of 'Enforcer' (paying homage to Musey?) But, either way, I very much enjoyed the action. And yes, the title change is for the better, I think. And I'm hoping (but I won't get my hopes up too high) that when the story ends this time, I won't be left wanting more... Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next one! XD
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  • From midnighteyes on June 14, 2008
    I just love the sexual build up and its driving me crazy.... I also love how you have others interested in her.. Its just an amazing story.. You have a great talent of us wanting more and more... I want more!!!! Thanks again for sharing...
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  • From XXallthatjazzxX on June 13, 2008
    Oh they are SO fucked!!
    X.x I knew as soon as I read the chapter name that something like this would happen.. Although I am so glad that it is just hunting instead of the Joi'en deal X.x That still makes me jittery XD lol anyways, please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

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  • From ANON - Tambourine on June 12, 2008
    Ah, Keen. If there is a fault with this fanfic it lies in your ability to make me care about the characters so damn much. I love the interaction between Ali and Isis; it's sweet, it's realistic, and it's priceless. I always say Thug's characters come to life through action; yours come alive in conversation.
    And sex.
    We can't forget sex.
    In my book, ma'am, you rank equal with Solain Rhyo in this fandom. Your shit is THAT bananas. And I'm not saying that just because I rape you repeatedly and make you ashamed of existing.
    I love you, Keen Who's Mean to Tambourine.
    Much Love,
    Tammaramalambadamn
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on June 11, 2008
    Ah, another great revising. I just love the way that they have started to get along. Even though, it's really even close to how they should be getting along. Can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work! =D
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  • From ANON - AllSpark on June 10, 2008
    Busted! I really hate cliff-hangers so can't you please update ASAP? Anyway, great chapter, I'm looking forward for the next one to roll
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  • From sagikamikazi on June 05, 2008
    About chapter 11......AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Well, guess there goes another perfectly good keyboard......
    Will be reading chapters 12 and 13 tommorrow...PLEASE LET THERE BE RELIEF!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - AllSpark on May 31, 2008
    Fantastic chapter just like the rest of the story. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Ajestice on May 30, 2008
    Well done! The way your characters interact with each other is so real and easy to visualize. I have to say again that I just love how Isis and Ali act together. And again that Ali-shir is adorable in his own gruff, indignant way.

    I never got to read this story before you began editing it, so I have no way of measuring how you have changed the characters. But I assure you that whatever you've done, you've done it well and good. You have a cast of funny, interesting, bitchy and awesome Yautja (and Vae).

    And I really cannot WAIT to see Ali-shir kick Joi'en's ass.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on May 28, 2008
    Yay, a bitch fight. Isis actually got to lunch on that beitch's a....hair lol. Kai deserved that and more. Excellent chappie Keenstuff.

    *Shorty taps Keen on the shoulder. Keen turns and sees her friend grinning. Shorty then leans into Keen and whispers before running off giggling* Ali'shir's a pussy tease.

    P.s Isis is a prick tease too. hehe
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  • From XXallthatjazzxX on May 28, 2008
    Omg. I have to say that I loved the chapter :3 Although I wish Isis could have finished kicking Kai's ass >>
    Anyways, omfg, the whole Joi'en and Isis thing just makes you on edge the whole time XD I kept biting my knuckles thinking that someone was gonna slip or something was going to happen X.x It was very nerve wracking :3 Good job
    Yeah, I know he's a work in progress.. he can be so irritating one moment, and then 'Yay!' worthy the next XD But that's why we all love him XDXD
    Anyways, yay for the update and can't wait for the next!!
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 28, 2008
    Another awesome chapter. I kinda feel like Isis, all hot and bothered under the collar. But I loved it anywayz. I did see a few typos, tho. I believe they started out on the couch and in the next paragraph they are on the bed. I might have missed the move, but I really don't think so. Other than that, it was breathtaking as usual. Keep up the great work and I cant' wait for the next one. =)
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