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Reviews for A Union of Convenience (Formerly ‘Alone’)

By : Keen
  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on July 19, 2008
    NO!!! Isis can't be toast. She's gotta surprise Ali and kick his butt for not being there when she needed him. But... I do hope he makes Kai die, slowly, very slowly like he said. And he should put Yash'in over his knee for escaping yet hug him for setting off the alarm when he did.

    Can't wait to see what happens next.

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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on July 18, 2008
    If that is what you have planned for the end of this story this time around, then all I have to say is...'I hate it!' The previous ending was better by far. At least Isis was still alive in the last one. And I'm guessing that since you didn't put any notations at the end of this chapter that there is more. Are we going to see Kai drawn and quartered? I guess it really doesn't matter. I just want to read more of your wonderful writings. The ceremony made me cry. Good for you. Keep up the great work.
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  • From Cupidxx on July 18, 2008
    OMGGG D:
    that made me cry -wipes away tears-
    If only isis didn't die D: -huggles her body- She shoulda come back from the dead :/
    -nods-
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on July 18, 2008
    Isis gone! Say it ain't soooo! What about the sequel? What of my hope of a baby alshirisis? All dashed with her sad parting. Will he ever allow himself to love again? Great writing, and believable characters.
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  • From XXallthatjazzxX on July 16, 2008
    And to think for a moment there I was actually starting to feel sorry for Kai..
    That..that..that bitch!
    Uuugghh!
    I was jumping up and down in my seat throughout those two chapters.
    I think people where starting to worry. XD
    Anyways, I really can't wait for the next chapter, I can't wait to see what happens to Isis!!!
    ;-;
    Update soon please!

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  • From ANON - Ajestice on July 08, 2008
    Oh, I can't tell you how hard it is for me to restrain myself from calling you a very bad word at this moment. But that's just a testament to how good a writer you are, that I'm actually angry at you for doing this to Isis. I mean, really, is there no end to Kai's evil? I can't help but hope that Ali hunts her down and guts her like a pig. Or that Isis will do that, if she survives. Please please please pleease let her survive. She's awesome. And she hasn't been able to punch Ali'shir for his ignorance yet. She should at least be allowed that.

    Anyway, I wait with bated breath for the next chapter. And do please try to make it quick, or I'm likely to cry.

    Happy writing!
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  • From moonangeldragon on July 07, 2008
    OMG I love this story!!! Please hurry up and update!!!
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  • From speachestx on July 07, 2008
    I read this from start till now and all I can say is wow! I hope Isis is okay and Yasin pulling that alarm I am greatful to him but so hate Kai!
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  • From Shyann on July 05, 2008
    Noooooo she can't die...
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on July 05, 2008
    This chapter always makes me tear up. The picture is painted so well, you just can't help but feel despair at the whole situation. Now, though, I'm wondering if you are gonna change the ending? I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

    Oh, I did find one small mistake. I had to read it twice and I'm not sure if I got is right...
    "She took the blade in her hand and raised his head, aiming to slit her throat from ear to ear when something grabbed at the back of her head." It's a room full of females and you have "his" head being lifted. I am assuming that Kai is lifting Gi's head. Right? Other than that, it was perfect.

    And of course, I do so hate Kai. It would please me immensely if you would blow up her ship or something. Maybe have that 'pet' she took from Isis rip her limb from limb. That would only be fitting. Ok, I think I'm done rambling now. Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From Cupidxx on July 05, 2008
    NOOO
    DON'T KILL ISIS! ALI AND ISIS NEED TO HAVE LITTLE MINNY ALI'S AND ISIS'S RUNNING AROUND D:
    This got me choked up! I can't believe how much I love this story! its amazing, beautiful and breathtaking!
    Honestly, This is the best story I have read in a while. {and in no order, along with two other stories I love reading, but its one of the top three ^_^}
    AND BUDDY IS FREE! oh nos! this is bad news :0 I almost wish the little thing would kill Kai already. Really.
    stupid evil whore D
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on July 05, 2008
    Awesome Chappies Keenstuff. Have I told you how much I hate Kai? I hope her new 'pet' turns on her, bites her head off or sumthin'. I'm glad Yash'in at least had the decency to press the alarm before escaping. Can't wait for more.
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  • From Firesblood on July 04, 2008
    Oh no! You got tears in my eyes. Isis can't be dead! Please? Please?
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  • From midnighteyes on June 29, 2008
    I hate to hear this is going to end soon !!! You do such a wonderful job.. I hope your goind to do more of Predator.. I would love to see a female predator fall in love with a human male.. Thanks for sharing... Your doing an awesome job!!
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  • From XXallthatjazzxX on June 29, 2008
    Omfg, abbbouuuttt time. Good lord. And ..oh dear well I'm glad something good came from that confession.. except it did end rather.. sadly.. Jeez.. wow.. ;-; I can't wait to see what happens next!
    Please update soon.
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