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Reviews for A Memory Of Tortuga

By : coffeemuse
  • From bonnyblonde on January 02, 2009
    I have been terribly remiss in reviewing your story, CoffeeMuse. Thank you for this beautifully written piece. You stayed very true to character...we Barbossa writers KNOW how gallant Hector can truly be. :)
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  • From LoverOfEros on November 30, 2008
    You have his personality down pat. This made me so sad, but the sex was amazing. :) Well done! I love Barbossa/OC stories... *Sigh* I just LOVE his voice.
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  • From ANON - Meg on January 26, 2008
    Loved it! :)
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  • From ANON - rosey on January 07, 2008
    I really loved that!
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  • From faeriquene on January 01, 2008
    Well done! This was your first fanfic? Very nicely done indeed! I hope you continue to write, whether it be fanfic or something else that floats your boat!

    I love seeing gentleman Hector, who looks after a lady's honor, even when he doesn't know said lady from a hole in the wall, and one must use the word "lady" loosely. :-)

    “Missy, if that be the highlight of your year, you don’t get out much.”

    Aww, that's so cute. He downplays his heroism (and even if it wasn't a big deal to him, it certainly was to her!), but I can totally see him primping just a bit as he says it. He likes a woman who can stroke his ego a bit!

    I love that he considers her "pleasurable company" even knowing she's not a whore and he won't necessarily get any more out of her than a companionable meal. That's so Hector, ever the gentleman!

    I don’t bite, unless you ask nicely.

    Yum! So very Barbossa!

    He reached behind my head and cradled with one hand while simultaneously reaching down between us with the other.

    That's such a beautiful image! So tender - cradling like you would a child (and she is quite young, though not really for her time and environment), while touching in a way you would NOT do to a child. It's very right for this sexual awakening.

    The ending was quite lovely, and so sad! I wasn't sure what time period this was in - post AWE or pre CotBP. Poor Barbossa, not wanting to let a woman who truly cared for him see him at his worst, but for some reason, needing to see her one last time.

    Very nicely done, and I do hope you keep writing!
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  • From coffeemuse on January 01, 2008
    Thanks, Grace.
    This is actually my first attempt at ANY Fan-Fic, so I appreciate the reviews, and the 'advertising.' I have read "Captain's Cabin," twice.:)I also have been keeping up on "Chosen Path" which currently has me utterly enthralled.

    Thanks again,
    Heather
    Coffeemuse@aol.com
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  • From LaurenGraceJurious on January 01, 2008
    Wow! Was this your first Barbossabeth fic? I know you read mine, and I thank you very kindly for your time and the review, and so I was very excited to have the chance to return the favor to you! And, this was a wonderful story! You've really captured Barbossa, an reading him was so beautiful! One of the better sex scenes, too, very nicely done! I like a sex scene that shows and not just tells, it's a sensual thing, if you're not going to make the reader feel it and want to be the one doing or getting done, why bother to write a sex scene? So, great job! And the end of the story was so sad, and I loved feeling that too! The overall concept and telling of the tale was such a creative idea as well!

    If you're now getting a craving for Barbossabeth, you really should read "Captain's Cabin" if you haven't already! Faeriequeen is one of the best writers of Barbossabeth out there, and you won't be disappointed! I'll also go and make sure the Barbossabeth crew on Livejournal is aware that your story is posted here too! They'd love it!

    Thanks for reading my stuff and writing your stuff! If you ever want to talk more Barbossabeth, I'm reachable at dragonhorse18h@yahoo.com

    Grace
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