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Reviews for Veritas

By : CGH
  • From yaoifangrl on October 26, 2009
    You've gotten me teary-eyed with this one... So wonderfully bittersweet, and I love how Bumblebee heard the story and completely understands why Optimus did what he did. *sniffle* Amazing!
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  • From FieldsofHeather on February 03, 2009
    *searches for a hanky* That was wonderful. I had to stop at one point cause I couldn't see the screen anymore. Great job!!
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  • From ANON - Yukkie on October 26, 2008
    Awwwww!!!!

    I cried! That was so sad. I'd want to kill myself if I was in Optimus' position when watching the seven Sector dudes taking Bee!! Awwwwww!!!!!

    -sniffs- -crying-
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  • From AkiraYamamura on March 02, 2008
    That was really, REALLY touching. Very sad, too, though. . .
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  • From spoon10488 on February 15, 2008
    Awwwwe! that was so cute.
    =)
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  • From Breech_Loader on February 05, 2008
    I like it. That's a good way of a robot being pregnant and going into labour. No stupid womb or anything like that. If you don't mind, I'm going to copy your method - but not your story, honest!
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  • From Firestrom on January 27, 2008
    Well done i moved it made me cry please write some more it would be nice to see how everyone see's bumblebee the son of Optimus prime. keep it up it's cool.
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  • From agentAK on January 22, 2008
    That's so beautiful.... and so sad. Wonderful! I hate all mpreg stories, so I wasn't going to read this one. Then I saw it was by you so I knew I had to at least give it a chance (you are FANTASTIC) and it was amazing. It made scence, it was moving and felt so... real. I hope you never stop writing.




    it wasn't adult in the slightest but I don't care.
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  • From ANON - Tab on January 03, 2008
    Mpreg usually gives me the heebies, but I tossed it aside for this. They're alien creatures, and my personal feeling on gender means nothing in comparison. I'm glad I did. I got a little misty eyed, back there. Good read.
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  • From ANON - Blue Viper on December 22, 2007
    I can't even put words to how moving this story was. Thank you so much!
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  • From ANON - Timberwolf on December 22, 2007
    Awww, what a nice story, I hope to see more.
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