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Reviews for Enter the Yautja

By : sagikamikazi
  • From ANON - chancelor22 on December 16, 2007
    Seems that things are moving right along. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens next... =D
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  • From aquamum on December 16, 2007
    Hi

    I've just finished all chapters posted so far (to 15) and had to let you know I love your story.

    Your spelling and grammar have improved alot - well done.

    I like your style of writing and your characters - bring on more HMS.
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  • From thelunatic on December 15, 2007
    love the story! who will she end up with? all three? and maybe you should throw in some competition, make it more exciting! like enter a bad guy who wants to have her, though the lord and his brothers will object ;) and maybe kill him? hugs!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on December 13, 2007
    Good one. I found myself chuckling at lots of points in this story. Well Done!!! I can't wait until your next chapter.

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  • From thelunatic on December 13, 2007
    love this story! keep it going! =) I hope she will be alright with that big fella ;P
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on December 13, 2007
    poor girl! i wonder how many brothers/friends he has LOLOL maybe garag is one of them, she seemed to like him - and he her too. one thing irritates me: you said she needs to get pregnant the first month after transformation, but now she is already more than a month yautja... but you will make her get pregnant, right?!
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on December 11, 2007
    You're very welcome. No, I didn't know that you were french. Very nice. And as for the last chapter...OUCH!! Can't wait to see what happens next... =D
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on December 10, 2007
    Ah, you have learned that one trick all authors have that I can't stand. Cliffhangers. I hate them. But don't take it personally. Oh and I did notice something, that to me, sticks out like a sore thumb. Sprawling court? Do you mean sparring courts? As in where one would go practice fighting? As in to spar with someone? If I've totally missed my mark, I think that is what you mean, if I am wrong, just tell me to shut up and mind my own business. It is after all, your story! Keep up the great work! =D
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  • From Shyann on December 10, 2007
    This is a great story can't wait for more soon.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on December 09, 2007
    Glad to help! =D And this chapter was much easier to read and understand. I can't wait for the next chapter. And do get some sleep!
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  • From Shyann on December 08, 2007
    Wow this is a FANTASTIC story and I can't wait for more..................
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on December 08, 2007
    Well Hello and Welcome! It's nice to see a new face here at AFF. I am thoroughly enjoying the story so far and cannot wait to see what you do with it. I do ask that for the sake of understanding on our part...please, could you use the enter key? Starting a new paragraph when ever someone new talks or thinks would be so much easier to read. And also, is it Garak or Ganak? I don't mind spelling errors, but using two names for the same character is a bit hard to follow. Other than those little things, this story is great and I can't wait to see the next chapter! =D
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on December 08, 2007
    WoW! i really like your story, especially her determination to join the yautja. umami is really between a rock and a hard place ;-) I wonder what she�ll have to do to prove herself worthy...
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