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Reviews for Moments in the Life of Jack and Lizzie Sparrow

By : srkier
  • From LizzieSwan on May 20, 2011
    Thank you for the update! It's never too late they say... Waiting for the next chapter :)
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  • From Arraya on January 28, 2008
    I love all 3 chapters of this, Jack and Lizzie are wonderfully well-written, and in-character. great stuff!!!
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  • From TarnishedAngel on January 04, 2008
    Oh, goody!!! You posted another installment to the on going adventures of our favorite married pirate couple. This one was amusing from beginning to end. I LOVE Lizzie's "another sword" and how she reminded Jack of his "jar of dirt" ditty (heehee). Additional points are awarded for making him pout again. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From bitsodrama on January 04, 2008
    Loving it! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From TarnishedAngel on January 02, 2008
    Oh, what a cute fluffy chapter. I really like how it starts with Jack all cuddled up with Lizzie. What we fangirls wouldn't give to have that same experience. Ahem!! Back to the review. Jack declaring that he doesn't get sick and pouting about Lizzie taking over the Pearl for the day were great. I LOVE pouting Jack. I don't think there is anything more adorable on this earth than watching that character turn into a pouting child. Lizzie snatching his hat was perfect too. This was a short and very sweet chapter. I can't wait for the next installment, and I HOPE Jack is all better by then. Poor baby!!
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  • From TarnishedAngel on January 02, 2008
    I'm pleased to see that you've added some new vignettes to "Wobbly Legged Rum-Swilling Pirates". I reviewed that story under the name Lisa, but I now have an account here; so, my reviews will be under this name.

    Well, on with the review. Jack and Lizzie's first fight as a married couple is a humdinger probably because they are both so DARN stubborn. I wanted to throttle them both throughout most of this chapter for being too proud to apologize. I LOVE Lizzie throwing Jack's rum rather than the book (heehee). Jack DID deserve the slap for calling his wife by her maiden name, but I LOVE how she turns it around on him later by refusing to address him as "captain" (heehee). I like how astute Jack is in figuring out that Lizzie loves him more than the freedom that he can offer her, but it is good to hear her admit it later in the chapter. I LOVE when Jack grabs her before she can exit the longboat, and I really LOVE the "mine" discussion. I could have used more description in their sex scene. Their reunion was rushed, but that's my only complaint with this chapter. My favorite moments were when Jack and Lizzie debated her "standing with the crew", and they welcomed her back aboard, and Jack kicked the door shut on their cabin. As an aside, why is it so sexy when a man does that?!! Oh, well. This was a very nice addition to your fic.
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  • From Jancette on December 07, 2007
    Awwww, that was too cute :)


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  • From DesiringPirates on December 07, 2007
    AWW!! I hope Jack gets better!!
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  • From freelke on December 06, 2007
    I liked it very much, Very nice. I hop eyou poast again soon, I look forward to reading more
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  • From LizzieSwan on December 06, 2007
    Hi! I like it, but it's way too short! I need more soon..;)
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  • From LizzieSwan on November 22, 2007
    :DDD Good one, luv! I realy enjoid that one. So far, so good! Unfortunetly just one chappie, deary! I want more! Soon..
    PP: Ya have talent for writting(especially Jack & Lizzie). Keep the goods!
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  • From DesiringPirates on November 04, 2007
    Ooooooooh I like! Update soon!
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  • From wisenedwonders on November 01, 2007
    *Squeals* Aww! I LOVED it! It was amazing, and so beautiful! Oh so beautiful! Please, write more of these!
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  • From elovesjsparrow on October 29, 2007
    I don't think I ever reviewed the first... I loved that story. It was one of the first Sparrabeth fics I read. Love the start here.!
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  • From Jancette on October 29, 2007
    OMG! I love this story!! This is my first time here, so I haven't read your first story yet, but now I'm hooked. This chapter was awesome! I loved the way you set up the tension between Jack and Lizzie and kept building it, with neither one of them wanting to give in. I was screaming at them!! LOL!

    Can't wait until you update. I love reading stories that are set after Jack and Lizzie are married, but there just aren't that many out there :(

    Keep up the good work :)
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