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Reviews for Finding El Dorado Again

By : ayame28
  • From ANON - Ellie Vorse on January 13, 2014
    I LOVE this story! I really do! I saw where you said about more, so I looked, but there isn't.
    I REALLY hope that you write more of this, maybe even multiple chapters! :)
    I'd even like to help, if I could.
    Anything you wanted me to do, like Beta, or even write parts of it, or help you write parts of it!
    This story is great, and deserves more reviews then it has. Genius deserves attention! :)
    I LOVE how you did Chief Tanni's back story! It felt so real! Great Job!
    Miguel's was AMAZING as well! I could go on for ages about this, truly. :)
    If you wouldn't mind taking the time to e-mail me at least, that's be great! Thanks! :)
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  • From royceclaytonlives on January 01, 2008
    Well written for having little beginning knowledge and no beta! I found it refreshing to see that there were lingual misgivings and things like that in your story! So few people think about those kinds of things when it comes to writing a story. I was surprised at whom you chose to pair Miguel with, but thinking back to the movie it's very plausible. Way to go giving the big guy love too! So few people ever give big people a chance anymore...I enjoyed this immensely! Keep up the good work!

    ~Crys
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