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By : BrethlessM
  • From freelke on August 02, 2007
    HOORAY! so good. I love it. I have to start school soon too, my last semester in college hopefully :) I love thist story and it still mkaes my day when you update. Your chapters are STILL so original and beautifully written!
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  • From angelnomiko on July 27, 2007
    wow im glad he could help and is going with them ... and now we know why he cut the end of the wood off... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From UndeadMonkey on July 27, 2007
    Such a sweet chapter. Poor Will, he's so brave and he's been through so much. He must be missing his mother so much, as must Jack. I wonder what will happen when they get her back....what about Will the whelp?
    Sigh, such a gripping story!
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  • From freelke on July 27, 2007
    So happy. I loved it. This story is so great. I can't wait for the next update. You're a really gifted writer and you have a especially unique way with words
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  • From Naira on July 26, 2007
    I love it, I love how you give Jack a history that seems logical, and fits his character... You work hard (or so it seems) to give great detail and background knowledge, just felt I should applaud that :p
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  • From angelnomiko on July 24, 2007
    wow .. that was great .. please please more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From freelke on July 24, 2007
    Wonderful. Great as always! I am glad you wrote another chapter. I can't wait to see that happens with Teague. I think he and william will get along better than himself and Jack, don't know why. Hope you update again tomorrow, but that's just being wishful :)
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  • From UndeadMonkey on July 24, 2007
    Yay! Finally, I feel we're one step closer to getting Lizzie back :] And I began to feel more sorry for Jack in this 'She chose death over love' Made me feel for Jack, I dont know why haha. Too hard to explain. Glad youre feeling better, cant wait for an update!
    x x x x
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  • From UndeadMonkey on July 21, 2007
    I loved this chapter and especially Jacks line about his and Williams bond being deeper than blood. And Tia's appeaance at the end...hmm....trouble afoot? :P Cant wait for the update, but I understand you have other things too. I would have replied earlier but I just read Harry Potter 7 in 12 hours, including cooking and shopping inbetween. Quite an amazing book, hope you enjoy it as much as I did.
    x x x x
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  • From angelnomiko on July 21, 2007
    wow ... tia dalma is his grandma wow ... please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From Naira on July 21, 2007
    Oooh change in plot! Love it :p

    Though...please say that in your version they weren't lovers :p would be awkward!
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  • From freelke on July 21, 2007
    I am so glad you wrote another chapter. I hope you feel better soon. I have a 1/2 day stomach virus so i feel your misery. I am also going to read deathly hallows too but I will still be anxious for your chapter 5. I think I will like your story much more than the last harry potter book ( DH is much more depressing) Feel better !!
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  • From ANON - Helbricarsar on July 20, 2007
    Great chapter! Hope you're feeling better soon, your meds didn't affect your fantastic (in a negative way, anyway) writing one bit. Curious to know more about Jack's place in the society he left.
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  • From angelnomiko on July 19, 2007
    wow .. that was awsome ... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From UndeadMonkey on July 19, 2007
    Yay! Im glad we're finally in Madagascar, it seems we're one step closer to rescuing Lizzie! Cant wait for the new update, hope you're better too!
    x x x x
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