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By : BrethlessM
  • From freelke on August 23, 2007
    YAY thank you so much for the latest chaoter, I LOVED it so much. I really liked the rendevous between j/e. Truly great. Very sweet and romantic without being sappy. Great job!! Please write the next part very soon, Good luck with classes. I check for updates every morning before I go to class myself :)
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  • From phantomcupcake42 on August 23, 2007
    This story= Love!
    Its ammmmazing!!!
    please write as fast as you can and dont stop for any reason! lol
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on August 22, 2007
    WOW. I can't wait for you to update again! So very good. **happy sigh**
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  • From ANON - phantomcupcake on August 21, 2007
    Wow.
    I've been reading potc fanfics for years (a lottt of stories) and I must say this reaches somewhere within the top 3 favorites of mine maybe #1. Its really amazing. And you haven't even gotten them hooking up yet! Damn ur good.
    Please write as much as you can as fast as you can don't stop for any reason!

    P.s. As you asked about a trilogy n the such, deffinitly go for it. I'd like to see jack n liz together, I don't no about lil will I love him but he can't alllways be around maybe give him a playmate, I like the sparrows relationship together
    I like how in the first story jack lived with liz just to win her over and was all cunning and suggestive, just thought I'd add that lol
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  • From ANON - Jenn on August 16, 2007
    Wow, Im Blown Away...Ur Story is Amazing, Ive Enjoyed Both This 1 And The Flying Dutchman...U Are Truly Very Talented, U present The Characters so well and the storyline is so gripping!! well done!!! xx Jenn xx
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  • From angelnomiko on August 15, 2007
    wow ... i hope they can set things right ...please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Haley on August 15, 2007
    Ohhhhh such a good plot....I think that Jack should show some god powers or something in like a final fight ............. and elizabeth and jack getting 2gether while william is ...well not sure what
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  • From UndeadMonkey on August 15, 2007
    Awwh such a awesome chapter, Im glad Jack and Elizabeth had an argument - it helped get everything out in the open and have them sort their differences out. But I'm still not sure everything is sorted out between them, atleast not yet. Jack never questioned why she chose death over him (or did she? I might have missed it, I'll read it again in a sec) or is he just okay with that and understands her motive? Whatever, it was a brilliant chapter!

    I dont like Will at all but at the end it sounded like he was turning pure scary evil? I kinda would like to see him happy because if not he'll constantly be after Jack and Lizzie. Im sure you could get him happy somehow? I think Lizabeth needs to talk to him too, but without hurting Jack obviously. Is Jack going to stab the heart? or not? I know which way I'd prefer it to go but I'm sure you could make it work out brilliantly whichever way you took it! :)
    Im enjoying your story so much and cant wait for the next update!
    x x x x
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  • From angelnomiko on August 08, 2007
    yeah they made is back ok .. hmm that does she want now .. please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From UndeadMonkey on August 08, 2007
    Wheres the end of the sentence lol? Im quite confused.
    Great chapter, glad to see Jack and Elizabeth together though I can understand why Jacks being distant - Eliabeth did choose him over death after all...didnt she? Loved the touching moment between mother and son! So sweet.
    x x x x
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  • From freelke on August 08, 2007
    Please update again very soon. Good luck with school starting! My last emester strats next thursday as well. Hooray for almost graduating!I STILL love this story, every aspect of it so unique. It's really enjoyable to read!
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  • From SassySparrow on August 08, 2007
    OMG, Calypso is back!
    That chapter was sweet and I think I can imagine why Lizzie wanted Ina to leave the cabin that very moment.... perhaps a little pang of jealousy? ;o)
    Oh and Teague calling Jack "Jackie" is always wonderful - reminds me so much of the movie!
    Btw: I think in chapter seven and eight are the last parts missing! I checked your story over at ff.net and found the rest there. Perhaps something with the formatting went wrong? Anyway, I thought I'd let you know.
    Take care and please keep up your very outstanding Masterpiece! I love it all the way.
    Ta,
    ~Sassy~
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  • From ANON - Ruby Slippers on August 08, 2007
    So great to get an update! Glad Elizabeth has finally been rescued. Looking forward to how she sorts everything out with Jack.
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  • From angelnomiko on August 02, 2007
    wow i hope they find each other fast ... please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From UndeadMonkey on August 02, 2007
    Thank god they made it! I cannot wait for the reunion, is Jack going to be mad, or distant with Lizzie? I got the impression he would be from this:
    'Somewhere on this vast expanse of sand was the woman who’d chosen death over him.'

    Truly heartbreaking line, whether or not she picked death over Jack is debatable and something they will no doubt need to talk about and sort out. Cant wait for the next chapter, sorry about your busy schedule though
    *hugs*
    x x x x x
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