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Reviews for Savarna

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  • From Emeraldfires on September 24, 2007
    Very hot scene with the bath!
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  • From UndeadMonkey on September 24, 2007
    I loved it! What more is there to say? I loved it!
    Cant wait for the update and hope school is treatiing you well!
    xx x x
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  • From Emeraldfires on September 17, 2007
    I can't wait to read more! You've really spun a beautiful fic!
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  • From UndeadMonkey on September 17, 2007
    Oooh good stuff. Im very grateful you stayed up to update, I hope schools okay? Loved the chapter, for some reason I like sparrabeth stories where Jack and Elizabeth decide to wait until the right time to have sex. Dont ask me why :P
    Very interesting about Savarna...
    Cant wait for the next chapter, want to know what happens to Will. And I dont care how long it's getting. Its all good ;)
    x x x x
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on September 16, 2007
    So happy to see an update from you! **dances** Wonder just what it is that Calypso is up to...interesting. LOVE young William in this - just so you know. And the J/E interaction - perfect.
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  • From freelke on September 11, 2007
    Hi, is there anyway you could post another chapter tonight? PLEASE! I have 3 tests tomorrow, prokaryotic genetics, Physics 2, and Undergrad seminar. I need a distraction. I woul dbe so grateful if you could give me a distraction :) PLEASE, I want to read more, study less!
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  • From UndeadMonkey on September 10, 2007
    Yay for updates! Im glad you're settling into school okay and Im glad you updated. I hope nothing happens to Jack though!
    Update soon!
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  • From freelke on September 09, 2007
    Please dont make me wait that long for the next chaoter, I can't take it! This chapter was very nice, not as action packed or romanitc as the others but very nice to real nonetheless. great job
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  • From DesiringPirates on September 08, 2007
    Hey!

    Your story, 'The Flying Dutchman' has been nominated for best tears over at sparrabeth_sea; also, 'Sarvana' has been nominated for Best incomplete fic!!!

    http://community. livejournal.com/ sparrabeth_sea/
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  • From ANON - Illyrian_Wench on September 04, 2007
    I finally found your follow up to the Flying Dutchman over here. I am really enjoying the mystical aspects you have incorporated into the story. I can't wait to see what happens between Jack, Elizabeth and Calypso.


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  • From freelke on August 29, 2007
    SO sweet!! Please write more as soon as you get the chance. I have to read more. I can;t wait for the next part. You're a great writer and I loved this chapter so much! more romance would be good too :)
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  • From UndeadMonkey on August 29, 2007
    Congratulations on the new chapter. Glad to see an update =D I loved this, especially about the wagers haha. And the sleeping arrangements ;) Very interesting...
    Cant wait for an update
    x x x x
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  • From Emeraldfires on August 28, 2007
    I love this story! It just gets better and better!
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  • From Emeraldfires on August 27, 2007
    This is still one of the best POTC stories I've read to date!
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  • From UndeadMonkey on August 23, 2007
    Awwh lol. Loved that chapter, especially Elizabeth and Teague together with Jack coming in,
    "He’s old enough to be your grandfather, you know.” Haha it made me laugh, then the part with Ina "Are you jealous of me and your father?" "No...should I be?" "Should I be jealous of you and Ina?" "Are you?"
    Haha this chapter was sweet and funny, and glad Jack and Elizabeth finally admitted their feelings to each other. And that kiss, loved it! Hot, passionate kisses are good but I love soft, sweet ones too; they really show the love between the two, not just the desire and passion.
    Cant wait for the update!
    x x x x
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