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Reviews for One Big Mistake

By : Atomica_Syndrome
  • From Popcornbandit on September 22, 2009
    love it, more please!!! D:

    ((Waiting for some Hess/Jo hookups)) =P
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  • From ANON - Cat on October 14, 2008
    Once again another great chapter that leaves us in suspense, so again I ask you to please keep updating.
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  • From ANON - aaa on July 17, 2008
    good plot, interesting, nicely written
    can't wait for the next part ;) hurry
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  • From ANON - aaa on July 10, 2008
    please write more :) this is interesting and plesant to read!
    congrats ;)
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  • From ANON - Cat on June 15, 2008
    I'm glad you updated again, and once again you have me desperately waiting for you to update to find out what is going on. Hope you keep going with this story and update soon to satisfy my curiosity.
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  • From ANON - Me, moi, et je on June 12, 2008

    I had thought that you had abandoned or lost interest in this story for the longest time but you proved me wrong. I'm very pleasantly surprised that you're abeit slowly but surely updating. Please continue to work on this fic, I'm enjoying it immensely.
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  • From ANON - Cat on April 27, 2008
    I'm so glad you updated as I spent ages wondering what had freaked Jodi out. Can't wait for you to update again, especially if our favourite Hessian horseman makes an apperance.
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  • From ANON - Cat on April 25, 2008
    I love your story!!! I was just quickly having a look in the Sleepy Hollow section and came across your story and now I'm completely hooked! Please up date soon!
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  • From reineSeele on January 04, 2008
    Omg, you have NO idea how much I love this story. It's beautifully written, fun-to-read, with a hint of subtle sexiness. In my opinion, this is probably the best story in this section (especially since it deals with the Hessian, whom I have oodles and oodles of love for). I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on January 03, 2008
    HA! Take that you British peice of Sh...i mean um good job..keep it up
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  • From LaurenGraceJurious on November 06, 2007
    Erin, this was great! I can't wait for the next chapter! Is the Hessian amongst the audience?

    The opening was fantastic! I just loved reading that! From really nice moments in there from Mme. Wimund checking out the Hessian, and him not fully understanding what the hell she's doing, to references such as "something that belonged to the night" and "caged animal" when it came to him being in a house, full of bourgeois types! Really shows us who he is, and again, you are doing suberbly with him! It was also very him to retreat to the stables, with the horses! Fine job through all of that! Really makes me want more of him!

    And your descriptiveness never fails to impress me! The dress was probably my favorite part of that, how it was "rustic" and likely an old dress that Mme. Wimund just never threw out. Perfect! I was afraid you'd go all frilly on us, but you didn't !

    So again, anxious to see what happens at the questioning! Looking forward to more of the Hessian, and still so very curious to find out how Jody and the Hessian end up together! This is truly quite a story you've got going here, and I'm so very hooked! Keep it up!

    Grace


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  • From ANON - GraceLee on October 24, 2007
    Okay, the morning after her first full night in the 18th century! It'll be interesting to see what the day holds, and even more interesting to see how she and the Hessian link up again!

    Once more I applaud your abilities to make this feel so very real and make us all see what is going on as it happens! I also love that Jo feels like her presence in the gown detracts from its value. I like the subtly of how she is regarding the objects in her surroundings as both antiques, but also as part of her new world. It's the first step in accepting where she is, and there won't be anything between she and the Hessian until she does at least that.

    I so can't wait until they see each other face to face again and hear what they have to say, if anything. I'm thinking though that any conversation they might have will be more telling in what is not said rather than what is, the Hessian's like that.:-)

    Good job again, as always, and looking forward to more! These chapters are always such a treat to read, so keep 'em coming!:-)

    Grace
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  • From LaurenGraceJurious on October 23, 2007
    I feel like such a bad person, I only just this evening saw that you'd updated, and two chapters no less! Wow! Thank you for the Halloween present!

    I just finished Chapter 9, will read Chapter 10 when I've more time to devote to it, but wanted to tell you what a wonderful job you continue to do with weaving this web of characters and scenery and the reality you put into this story! I love reading this because it's always like a walk through history!

    I love Jodi's two new friends! I said before that her reactions to things and people are outstanding and accurate, and you continue to blow me away with that! And her blowing her nose on her shirt was just the crowning, awful glory to such a despairing scene! The twisting of Jodi's fear and the slave's tale were perfect, I can see them bonding, and I love it!

    And the Hessian is always such a joy to see again! I love his reactions to the house, "useless finery," yes, that's a perfect attitude for him! (And you said you were having difficulty getting him and writing him! You're doing great!) I also love watching him interact with his superiors, tolerating their authority, but abhorring it and them at the same time. And I love that you've got him doing normal things for him that have such a sense of...well, sexuality attached to them, but I bet you don't yet realize you're doing it. What I mean is when he clicked his heels for the woman who answered the door--he didn't have to offer her that, but he did! Really made me swoon!:-)

    Can't wait to get to Chapter 10, and I'm sorry for not reading sooner than this! But, it was such a wonderful surprise to find this tonight, and I'm so glad you're posting again! Keep it up!

    Grace
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  • From Sel on September 16, 2007
    Wow. This is great but there should be more. I'm loving this! Keep writting!
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  • From Extraho on September 05, 2007
    i really like this story. does she ahve the hots for the horseman? please update soon *hopeful angelic smile and inocent eyes*
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