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Reviews for Behold, my Beloved

By : 1synn
  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2011
    For the love of gawd, could people PLEASE stop writing Mary Sue OC fanfictions of their lame author avatar becoming the center of attention to the Lost Boys!? Star wasn't that annoying and trust me, your lame *** Mary Sue OCs are NO better.
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  • From ANON - Paul_Bitch on March 30, 2010
    That's hot.

    Update soon please!!!
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  • From jamason on March 28, 2009
    Oh and i forgot to ask...

    Kallee has been through all of this stuff before, which is fairly traumatic, shouldn't she be more resistint to it, not saying she should completely unfeeling. Every now and then you see glimpses in her character that recognises what is about to happen and then is overcome by hyseria, it would be cool to see some strength in her character.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From jamason on March 28, 2009
    Such a short chapter, but a chapter none the less!

    It was good but i'm looking forward to some plot and not just raw torture :s
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  • From jamason on February 26, 2009
    Hey! hey! hey!

    Nice to see you're back! I only check up on this site every once in awhile so forgive me for not reviewing sooner.
    I'm so happy you continued this and was very disappointed when i had already reached the end of the latest chapter.

    I thought the last chapter was pretty good and graphic enough too and i admit i wasn't expecting the boys to be so bloodthirsty, guess i was wrong but i still love it!

    Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Tiff on February 23, 2009
    I like.
    Tho you need to run it thru word pad to catch the typos..
    (I can say this coz we've known eachother for 20+ years..heh)

    I want to know more of her background tho...why she ended up w/ vamps
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  • From ANON - cat on February 19, 2009
    Omgggggg you have to keep going!!!!!don't stop now lovee im invested and I want see where this goes.=P
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  • From TheWinterWolf on February 18, 2009
    Definitly still with ya, lets get on with it!!! woowho!!
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  • From TheWinterWolf on October 04, 2007
    Oh please write more!! I'm inlove with this story!!
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  • From on October 03, 2007
    ooh nice update! i like this story it's interesting, a new take on knowing what the boys are without the classic "i've been sucked into Santa Carla" thing. Not that i am insulting that at all but i likies new things! *whacks bad karma with a stick* may the muse be with you and give us all more to enjoy! *grins*
    ~Merry~
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  • From CarolineAnderson on October 02, 2007
    Hey there hun glad you're updating again. I loved this chapter and eagerly await your next update. lol
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  • From jamason on August 09, 2007
    haha can't believe you left it on such a cliffhanger.

    Hope to see another chapter soon :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2007
    This is AMAZING! I love your writing, I can't wait to see what happens next, update soon please!
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  • From CarolineAnderson on July 11, 2007
    hey there i thought that i would let you know that i'm truly enjoying your story and can't wait to find out what happens next. lol
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  • From ANON - seapanda69 on July 02, 2007
    not bad i hope you update soon
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