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Reviews for The Flying Dutchman

By : BrethlessM
  • From Naira on July 06, 2007
    -dislikes Will to extremes- Jack would make the better daddy!!! -nodnodnodnod-
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  • From fortunesque on July 05, 2007
    Ooo! What a wicked ending to such an angsty chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, even if it turns out to be a really sad ending. :)
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  • From ANON - Jean on July 05, 2007
    This is an amazing story, you've played every character (their strengths and weaknesses) perfectly. The "family reunion" was horrible to read, but completely true to the situation...I couldn't help feeling sorry for all of them. I can't wait for Jack's return in the next chapter!
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  • From freelke on July 05, 2007
    Hooray! I loved it, I was so glad the chapter as up this morning. There was so much j/e undertones I hardly noticed Will was there! I loved it. It was so well written. I can't wait for the final chapter, and then onwards to the sequel!I really loved this chapter, even though you had me worried before I read it. Thank you for writing this story :)
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  • From Naira on July 03, 2007
    Now... that was just mean!

    -hugs my Jackiepoo- she doesn't deserve him pffffffft.
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  • From freelke on July 03, 2007
    YAY! Seeing the new chapter makes me so happy. but this chapter was SOO sad. I hope Jack changes his mind and turns around. I have no idea what you have in store for us, but I hope it doesn't end as badly as it seems in this chapter. I still love this story even though its gutwrenching. I can't wait until you poast again. I love this story so much! I'm already looking forward to the sequel.
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  • From freelke on July 02, 2007
    AHHH I cannot wait anymore (haha just kidding, I CAN wait) I'm in suspense. This story is so realistic!
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  • From fortunesque on July 01, 2007
    Uhoes. They're "sleeping" together. Hehe. Lets hope that little William doesn't find out...
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  • From freelke on June 30, 2007
    YAY! what a pleasant surprise to wake up to a new chapter. This is one of my favorites so far. w/e makes me want to gag a little so I am glad you've stayed j/e so far :) I know that might change but I stick with it anyway and close my eyes through those parts :)I look forward to the next chapter and I am very glad I found this story. By the way, my name is kimberly with "y". You write j/e so beautifully im already excited about your next story.
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  • From freelke on June 29, 2007
    YAY! I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. You add so much suspense its torturous. Now that I know it won't end like I hoped it would (sad) I am already awaiting the sequel/rewrite. I sincerely hope you write that story very soon after this one ends, and another one after that. Ive grown very attached to this story and don't want to see it come to an end.
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  • From fortunesque on June 23, 2007
    Hehe. Jack's wicked as usual. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - junkpuppet on June 23, 2007
    I love this story! Can't wait to see what Captian William Turner has to say about his wife's situation. Great job! Looking forward to more soon.
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  • From freelke on June 23, 2007
    AHHH its so great, I loved this chpter, and the story as a whole. You're great at descriptive writing. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you have another 20 chapters up your sleeve!
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  • From fortunesque on June 22, 2007
    I love this fic, totally and completely. Your characterization is right on the mark. I'm waiting excitedly for the next chapter!
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  • From freelke on June 21, 2007
    I really love this chapter, can't wait for the next one. I hope Will coming back doesn't ruin things terribly. you're a great writer!
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