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Reviews for Kayla's Revenge

By : ZenRose
  • From ANON - LovyDovy on December 10, 2007
    Thanks...wow! Stehna's sons. Interesting. Leena twenty babies? It has been centuries since Kayla passed. Is Banaj training from coping or for confronting Kayla's killer? What is jasmine thinking> She is so ...weak in the head. I hope her condition improves. I want Shlok!
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  • From DeathGodDist on December 09, 2007
    Damn, what a hot and suspensful chapter. Your writing never ceases to amaze me. Things are coming to a head it looks like and the tension in the air is one could drink it all in. I cannot wait to see where you will go from here with this immediate issue of Stephna's sons.

    Bravo as usual.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on December 09, 2007
    Man oh Man!! I just know that the shit is gonna go down. Hard and fast. I can't wait! Glad to see you are still putting around. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ZenRose on December 08, 2007
    Happy holidays!
    LilTinyBee - no I never published anything. I just enjoy writing on aff!
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  • From Nahaujaret on November 29, 2007
    Thank you so much for updating. I've been waiting on pins and needles for this chapter. It's an awesome story and the plot is amazing as well. Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - LilTinyBee on November 25, 2007
    I haven't reviewed for KR yet, but have done so for your previous stories. I read stories in a number of different fandoms, but your series has to be my favorite out of all of them. I'd love to know if you've ever had anything published because you certainly could! Your plotting and skills in weaving an complicated and engaging story are very impressive.

    About KR: Like everyone else, I'm very sad that Kayla is gone. We're still getting to see plenty of her, but it's still a great loss to all of us. When you started giving us the back story of Kayla and Ba'naj's romance, I didn't quite know how to feel. It seemed like you were making Kayla do something so out of character. Her character has been vilified, but I keep telling myself that Circle has a plan and a reason for everything! The romance is very sweet and tragic at this point. Shra'van's development is wonderful. I used to absolutely hate him! Ta'noj and Jasmine's courtship and relationship is very well written as well.

    Thanks and keep up the excellent work!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on November 21, 2007
    Awesome Circle. If there was one male that could combine a kill with some sex it's good ole' Ba'naj. I can't wait to see what happens when Kavi'ta learns about Jasmine, or about what happens when Jasmine finds out she's preggas. OOOO interesting time ahead.
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  • From DeathGodDist on November 19, 2007
    Well it is certainly wonderful to hear that you'll be sticking with this story to the end. And who knows how long that may be because from where I'm reading, it would seem that this story could go on for quite a while, and yet still be as fresh and incredibly well written as ever. Also because there are so many things that could be written now due to all the detail and various intertwining stories within. Boy I can't wait for the next chapters. :)
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  • From ANON - Taraqwen on November 19, 2007
    Please continue this story!
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  • From ZenRose on November 16, 2007
    Sorry about the delay. Don't worry I will be around until my last chapter says the end...
    I hate uncompleted stories too!
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  • From DeathGodDist on November 16, 2007
    Wow, now that was a chapter that I'd been waiting for a long time. Even got worried that you may have abandoned it like so many authors have done to their stories here. Thankfully, you're still alive and kicking and writing some very kickass scenes. So not only does Ta'noj smooth things over with Jasmine, he even gives her a "gift" as well. :) Also nice to finally hear him own up to killing Ro'shan, it will be interesting to see how Steph'na treats him when he returns.

    Ba'naj truly is one hardcore badass. Killing a guy and banging Kayla at the same time. Now I'm still wondering what more Pahel is hiding from everyone. My guess would be illegitimate children (Wajeeh?) with Kayla and the like. That will certainly complicate things in terms of the siblings trying to kill him. I'm still torn on whether Ba'naj killed Kayla or not. Clearly he can become crazy and a berserker when angry, and he does carry tons of guilt around him, but still, something seems off.

    Oh well, just goes to show how great your writing is that you can keep us all in attention and wanting more. Hopefully more will come quicker this time. :)
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on November 15, 2007
    Wow! Freaky Banaj. Mordecai and Linka was sexy. Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - stewie on November 15, 2007
    Really good!
    So Ba'naj did do it? Perhaps. The only person who really knows is Pahel. So you keep us guessing yet again. Cool!
    Also I do like how Kayla is not all innocent. She is wrong to have an affair. After all she is human (ooman) and Ba'naj don't strike me as the one who would say no. In the flashback, she seem to be somewhat faithful to Sh'lok. She will not say no if he wanted some, but she don't seem to say no to Ba'naj as well.
    Ta'noj is a freak, lol
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  • From CLTexas84 on November 15, 2007
    i just dont know what to think of kayla anymore....i dont get how she couldve kept doing these things behind shlok's back..im also scared to think that banaj couldve killed her, but maybe shlok did if he found out about her and banaj?! my mind is going crazy!!!! update soonnnn!!!!
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on November 15, 2007
    Woot. Glad to see you back. I am still undecided about this one. I have absolutely NO idea who did; but I guess that is the plan, right? Anywayz, keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next installment. =)
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