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Reviews for Kayla's Revenge

By : ZenRose
  • From Nahaujaret on February 09, 2008
    I'm so glad you decided to upadate. I can't to find out who killed Kayla. Keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - mal'fan on February 04, 2008
    Damn, that was super good!
    I have to say that was the best Ba'naj/Kayla moment yet. It was erotic and playful. It showed that despite her cheating ways, she respected Sh'lok enough to not talk about him. I loved it so much I had to go back and read it again.
    Kavita reaction to Jasmine was very surprising. She seam to love and understand Ta'noj but I guess it was a form of disrespect,by not asking her permission. Hopefully she will come around.
    Great work again Circle!
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on February 04, 2008
    Yeah!!! Updates O' regular...sweet.
    Kayla seemed to be rejecting Shlok in this chapter where it seemed the opposite in the other. I am confused as to which it truly was.

    What happened to Shlok is he just in denial? Did Tanoj fight with him over his potentially losing Kayla to another male if he didn't get his act together? He did notice Kaylas heart racing seeing Banaj.

    Maybe Leena didn't like sharing Kayla's affections any more than Shlok? Can't wait to find out. Great writing.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on February 04, 2008
    Day-um!! Wow, that flashback was HOT!!! Great to see an update. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great work and hopefully, I'll be able to figure this whole thing out...
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  • From DeathGodDist on February 04, 2008
    Ah man, It is just so enjoyable when there is an update from you. More wonderful writing. I just really enjoy these characters a lot, and I know I've said that before, but it is so true. This chapter was, like all the others, so well done. The interactions between the siblings and Jasmine is so well thought out and fresh. It's a twist to see how Ka'vita reacted to Jasmine, where it had been stated by others that she would welcome her with open arms, that was quite far from the reality. It will be interesting to see how this little drama plays out.

    And of course, even though I don't like her much anymore, I cannot deny the chemistry that Kayla has with Ba'naj, the dialogue between them is just so perfect. I know you've written a couple, but I still want more scenes with these two because it is always such a thrill. This chapter for me kind of solidified that Kayla and Sh'lok no longer cared about one another. Again, it's such a shame that the ending of Book 2 wasn't truly real, and the so-called "healing" that took place between them was just a small "band-aid fix". But hey, it makes for good drama. :)

    As usual, I cannot wait to see what more you will come up with.
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  • From ZenRose on February 03, 2008
    thank you,I'll be updating again soon!
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  • From Nahaujaret on February 03, 2008
    I am so glad that you've updated once again. I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - zerousy on February 01, 2008
    Dude, I read all three stories at once and I was like, whoa, I missed stuff the first time I read the first story then I was like, Whoot! But then I was like, WTF? Who the hell killed Kayla???? Plus, I was always wondering what an extened version with Ne'el and Maha'vin would be like, or sequals to those two.
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on January 26, 2008
    Finally some insight into Shlok, but there must be more. He took Kayla for granted, but I wonder if she tried to break things off with Banaj eventually.
    I suspect she was carrying a child when she died. I do not like how she is run by her privates. It makes her seem slutty.
    Will seeing another human female with his son enlighten him on the differences he chose not to give Kayla a right to or credit for? She is ultimately a human with human needs, so sad an ending to something that could have been beautiful.
    Shlok was crushing on Leena before he mated her remember? Kayla's request was stupid, and she did not follow through when he chose her. I wonder if Stehna played a role, but I guess I am really reaching. I just don't like her.
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  • From Arshes13 on January 22, 2008
    Hey, Circle,

    First off, I love your fics! I just read all 3 in succession and the character development is wonderful and the twists and turns you've introduced from the children's point of view is outstanding! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    BTW-Has anyone done any fanart for your fics? I would love to see any if someone's got it!

    Arshes13
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  • From DeathGodDist on January 20, 2008
    Ah, finally I'm able to give this chapter the time and attention it so rightly deserves.

    I gotta say, I'm starting not to like Kayla anymore. The way she is coming across to me as written is someone who is very tempermental and annoying. I can kind of see why Sh'lok was losing interest in her. And again, I can't help but think back to the fact that this whole thing could have been avoided if Kayla had never had asked for Leena to become another mate. I'm still wondering what Kulvir thought of the whole thing, but I think as of this chapter's flashbacks, he's already dead since Stef'na is now a mate as well.

    On the other hand, I'm still really amused by Kayla's children and how they all have aspects of her. Kuja definitely has Kayla's stubborness no doubt about it. Jasmine is actually a beath of fresh air because she isn't Kayla and has a completely different personality with a lot of innocence about her. Now that we've gotten the conflict of the siblings out of the way, I can't wait to see what happens once they get back to the home ships and have to tell Tan'oj the truth about Kayla and Ba'naj.

    I don't care how long I have to wait, I'll wait as long as it takes for the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - stewie on January 17, 2008
    Ok I can see the challenge. A four way? WOW
    After I took A shower I decided to come write a review. You did a good job. You also gave us more clues. It was without a doubt, Ba'naj, but why. I love how you are now showing a different side to everyone. We see how Sh'lok was able to handle his three mates and the problems he and Kayla still had, also the closeness between Ba'naj and his brother. What I don't understand is Sh'lok had the clues (easy opening, her arousal when they were arguing, which I'm assuming it was because she was with Ba'naj before she went to her quarters to confront Sh'lok) why didn't he put it all together. Kayla was cheating on him! Ohhhhhh the drama
    It's so much going on in this chapter I had to read it twice. Each time it was damn good! Thank you so much for updating.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on January 17, 2008
    You know... it's too bad that they don't have a smiley system on this forum. Cause right now, i would be using the one of the smiley beating her head against the wall! I still cannot figure this one out. Glad to see an update and of course, I cannot wait to see what happens next! =D
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  • From ANON - mal'fan on December 20, 2007
    What I really enjoy the most about this chapter ( and your writing in general ) .... the children have some of the personalities of the parents. Now I don't know if you strategically put that together, but wow it is great!. Ku'mar reminds me so much of Kul'vir when he was angry. Kuja is a lot like Kayla and Shra'van is his green eyed father. Su'ram reminds me of how Sh'lok used to be when he met Kayla. Mi'tra has way too much testosterone in her blood LOL.... Poor Jasmine need to get some backbone before someone tries to really kill her. She is weak, but if Ta'noj only wants her as a breeder then I guess she will do.

    Your story telling is excellent. You greatly pulled off going in the past to tell a story of the present without confusing the reader. I sit and wait in anticipation for the next chapter.
    Feliz Navidad!!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on December 13, 2007
    Good one Circle. I hope Stef'na's sons leave before they really find Ta'noj. Next Chappie please. XD
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