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Reviews for Kayla's Revenge

By : ZenRose
  • From Lavonne on May 02, 2008
    this story is wonderfully written... it took me over 5 days to read all that you have written. i love all the detail that you've put into it. its almost lke watching it unfold on the tv screen. i feel so sorry for Ta’noj for he will be hurt by his mother's betrayal the most. actually when i was reading the 3 different endings i liked the one with Ne'el the most. -chuckles- i just really hate that everythign went so bad between her and Sh'lok. and i can not wait to find out why the Jafren are helping out Ta’noj... is really because of kayla or because of her son... -bounces in seat- i eagarily await the next chapter
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on April 30, 2008
    What? Are you kidding me? That can't be for real! Now you have to post the next chapter immediately!! I NEED to know what exactly is going on!!!

    Great work, keep it up and can't wait till next time. =D
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  • From DeathGodDist on April 30, 2008
    So, it is certain. Sh'lok and Kayla were never meant to be. That kind of makes it tough to re-read through the first two books now with the knowledge that all they went through would end up like this. Oh well, its still a grand story, and I suppose for this book, the offspring are the ones in the spotlight.

    So Kayla really was going to choose Ba'naj and allow him and Sh'lok to fight for her. I still can't imagine what on earth happened between the end of book 2 and this to make their relationship turn so sour. The Ban'aj/Kayla pairing does really work though, and I've said it before, they're sex scenes are just so very hot, though IMO, I kind of feel they're too short or they end too quickly in comparison to others, but maybe that's just me.

    Still so many questions I'm eager for answers to. Who killed Kayla of course is the first. Ba'naj clearly blames himself though no one who he confesses to believes it, and Sh'lok vehemently denied it to Shra'van, and I simply cannot think of another party who'd want Kayla dead. Also, I definitely want to know what the Jafren are really up to. They definitely want something badly that would make them come out and fight.

    Please keep on writing, is all I can say! This story is so awesome! :)
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on April 28, 2008
    Getting closer to the truth. So Kayla preferred Banaj? Ouch for poor Shlok. Then again he wasted no time when it came to Leena. Banaj mentioned Kayla's jealousy concerning Shlok, or was it her love denied? It is gripping. I will miss these characters of yours when this story comes to its end.
    So Jasmine will have a human looking son. Interesting. I'm not pushing, but that could be a whole other story itself. Great storytelling!
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  • From ANON - Mal'fan on April 28, 2008
    I have so much to say about this chapter!
    IT WAS FANTASTIC!!!
    It was touching to be reminded of the love between Kayla and Ga'gan. I forgot about the shells.

    I love the interactions with Kayla and Ba'naj. It moves the story along greatly. But I think the best line was (where do you wish to come today) WOOO HOO!! LOL

    Ptea needs an woman of the year award. Not only did he tell her of his indiscretions but he didn't feel bad about being with her! And she forgave him just like that.

    Jasmine is a breath of fresh air for that ship. She is somewhat stupid to the ways of how they live, but she's not trying to fit in, that's why I like her.

    The confession was written to make you want more. I want more! Why did he kill her and how! Don't stay away so long next time please.
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  • From ANON - Shortest_warrior on April 13, 2008
    I'm really glad Kavi'ta and Jasmine get on Circle. It's really awesome that you have them helping each other learn each others languages.

    Keep it up Circle. Looking forward to the next Chappie.
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  • From DeathGodDist on April 05, 2008
    Finally, I got a chance to sit down and give this new chapter the time it deserves.

    I'm afraid I'm going to have to start repeating myself, because I'm definitely running out of great things to say that haven't been said before (maybe I've even said this before too?). In any event, that was just an incredible chapter for character development and writing overall. The interactions between Jasmine and everyone else are so colorful and funny. Interesting idea to have Ta'noj use meditation to control his anger, hopefully that will help, because things will probably get nasty once Shloks ship arrives in a few months as was mentioned.

    I'm still kind of worried about Jasmine and her getting close to other males. It probably won't happen, but i could forsee a situation where something kind of like what happened to Kayla might happen to her.

    Oh well, this story is awesome, and I'll always been reading it for as long as it continues. :)
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  • From ANON - malfan on April 04, 2008
    when Zasahil (sp) was begging Kuja i wanted to melt. That scene was so heartfelt.If she doesn't want him I will take him! :?P
    Good chapter. Glad to see you're still around.
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on April 01, 2008
    Thanks for this. I like the character development.
    I hope Kuja makes a decison soon or will Zas find out the truth during the ritual?
    Will being around a human again heal or reopen Shloks wounds?
    I love your story.
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  • From DeathGodDist on March 30, 2008
    Once again I'm going to have to wholeheartedly echo the sentiments of those calling for more. It's only been a month and yet I feel kind of deprived. Heh, well, I guess these things don't write themselves now do they? I'm sure many authors would wish that were so.

    Oh well, still looking forward to the next parts. :)
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  • From ANON - Nahaujaret on March 30, 2008
    I really enjoy your story, I can't wait to find out who killed Kayla. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - malfan on March 24, 2008
    I need more! Come back, I know it haven't been that long, but I'm feening, lol
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  • From ANON - Shortest_warrior on March 08, 2008
    Two seriously awesome chappies Circle. That Ba'naj is soooo naughty. I hate to think of what Sh'lock will do when he finds out. I hope Jasmine will over come her staring problem. I'd hate to see her speared.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From DeathGodDist on March 03, 2008
    Yay! Another chapter filled to the brim with wholesome goodness!

    What I've always loved about you is your ability to come up with new situations to place the characters in for every other situation that is resolved. Now that we're past the point of getting Ta'noj and Jasmine safely home, we're getting into more issues between them. You continue to do a great job to show that Jasmine is NOT Kayla, though I'm wondering if history is about to repeat itself. Shra'van being given that coveted spot of being the mate if needed could cause issues, especially since it seems that Shra'van seems to like Jasmine.

    Very interesting though that the Jafren are having a ship built for Ta'noj, I really am wondering what their role is in all this? I wonder what Sutara wanted to talk to Ta'noj about? Will she be the one to tell him about Kayla?

    Man, so many things I want to know. I'm always eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Bravo again! :D
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on March 03, 2008
    Happy dance. Jasmine is so naive, and flippant about her responsibity, sadly. Tanoj deserves better from her. I am happy to know the Jafren believe in him, or is it Jasmine they seek? What does he know about Kayla and Banaj?

    Shravan likes her, obviously. Will
    Will Kuja give in and forgive?
    Can hardly wait to find out! Great storytelling.
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