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Reviews for Kayla's Revenge

By : ZenRose
  • From ANON - tt on June 14, 2008
    i say that kayla just need someone to love her since sh'lock took another mate it isnt right she was probably forced into it and then thought she grew to love banja (so hate how this story is turning out its so sad)
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on June 13, 2008
    So, I'm guessing that is going to come to an end soon. As much as I hate to think of it, I am interested to see how it all goes down. Oh, and that little scene with Jasmine and Ta'noj was really hot. I think I may have to go and take a shower to cool down from that one. Keep up the great work and I can't wait till next time. =D
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  • From ANON - Shortest_warrior on June 13, 2008
    My bad. I have been in a 'read but not review' mood lately. Doesn't mean I haven't thorougly enjoyed my reading though XD

    Can I have a date like Jasmine's please? hehe

    I can see one serious fight scene coming up. Question is, will Sh'lok's rage be his downfall, or will Ba'naj's grief be his.

    Can't wait Circle


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  • From ANON - Kae'She on June 12, 2008
    i like the story i truely and hinestly do but i feel bad for kayla she felt unloved tell mekayla will atleast get a proper burial or a happy ending. even in death she still deserves something right......
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  • From ANON - Lina on May 29, 2008
    I love your story, this is SOOOOOO Amazing!!!!!! You are such a great writer, I hope one day that I will have the skills to write stories as you do!!!! Please UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on May 22, 2008
    It would seem that Kayla thought Banaj would win her from Shlok in the end. If he lost they couldn't have those secret meetings without further reprecussions. So sad, but this story is oh so good.
    I still have an ache for the love we thought Kayla and Shlok had, but maybe Banaj simply loved her more, and she must have needed that being only human and all.
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  • From DeathGodDist on May 17, 2008
    Wow, you still know how to just suprise everyone. Zas'hil being Ba'naj's son really threw me for a loop. I certainly didn't see that one coming at all.

    Hmm, so Shravan does want Jasmine eh? I wonder how that will work out. Ta'noj didn't seem to mind it, so maybe things won't turn out like how it did with Kayla.

    So Ta'noj's meditation is to help him deal with the eventualy reveal of Kayla and Ba'naj. I am definitely eager to see how he will take that, especially since he revered his mother more than anyone.

    Good times. I can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 14, 2008
    (damned buttons!)

    To finish my previous statement...

    AARRRGGG!!!

    So Frustrating! The twists and turns are just never ending. I love it and hate all at the same time. Keep up the great work and I can't wait till next time...maybe there will finally be some resolution.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 14, 2008
    AAARRRGGG!!!
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  • From ANON - malfan on May 14, 2008
    Ok I didn't see that one coming... zazahill is ba'naj son! Sorry for the misspelling.
    I had my own bet going on in my head. I didn't think she would show up. Very hot ritual!
    I still love Jasmin's innocents. She's not fitting in to save her life! (Literally)
    Yet another fine chapter! And quick too!
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  • From ZenRose on May 12, 2008
    thank you~!
    I'm glad you all like it...
    Sorry for the slow update, but I will start updating about once a week now.
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  • From ANON - Maxiewolf on May 11, 2008
    OK, Im doing sort of a 3 in one here since I have done nothing but read your stories for the past week... every day until I got this far. And I have to say it has been Years since a fiction has consumed my life so much. More than even the most addictive book I've ever read. I cant remember the last time I got so enthralled in a story and so attached to characters that are so real, deep and belivable. Seriously Ive cried in a couple of chapter something that usually reserved for the saddest movies.

    I cant really choose a favorite character, Besides Kayla... who has been the most amazingly written "round peg in the square hole" character Ive Come accross.. Its probably a tie between Maha'vin or Ban'aj at the moment. I almsot didnt want ot start reading this because I knew it wasnt finished and Id read my way though it and be left hanging!

    I have to say... with complete admiration.. that this is by far The BEST work of Fan Fiction (or any ficiton for that matter) that I have ever had the pleasure of reading out of all the universes I have read... Bravo! I look eagerly forward to more! - Maxiewolf


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  • From ANON - stewie on May 07, 2008
    I have to say that the interaction with Ba'naj has to be one of the best thought out writing styles ever. I thought her and Ne'el was my favorite, but now I don't know. I just love the flash backs between them. Very well written and thank you for updating!
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  • From Nahaujaret on May 05, 2008
    I'm really glad that you updated, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
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  • From Keen on May 02, 2008
    Look at this pot boil… More interesting to me now than whom killed Kayla or any other sub story, is what or who are the Jafren and what or who they want. I even wonder if they might play some part in bringing Kayla back. I started to think what we see now could be a vision, something that the Jafren showed her on the ship those many years ago to make her more compliant and understanding. I remember vaguely upon her return, she was told something to the effect that Shar’van was going to be a great leader while Ta’noj was going to be the 'bad-one.' Maybe they told her more than that? And whatever became of the tissues they extracted from her? Are there yet more children that belong to Kayla (half-breed Jafren) or were the samples intended for cloning/harvesting purposes? Talk about things that make you go, “Hmmm...”
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