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Reviews for Kayla's Revenge

By : ZenRose
  • From Rosei on July 02, 2007
    Chapters 1-2

    Thank you for returning!
    Love the update on Kayla's
    family. Ta'noj was such a loving
    kid. When you ended Human Hunter 2
    all I could say was "WOW!" What an ending!
    This is a great begining,
    thanks,
    R
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on June 29, 2007
    I am so curious how Shlok is living with Leena and Stephna. How is he fairing with the lack of emotions of his mates now that Kayla is gone? Did they have any kids together?

    Is Mitra Banaj's daughter or just unsure of herself? I don't know enogh of Jasmine to like her or dislike her. So far she hasn't done anything for me to think she is worthy to be any warrior's mate, nevertheless our misguided Tanoj. More.
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  • From ANON - Mal'fan on June 28, 2007
    This is so exciting! Kuja do remind me of Kayla.
    And Mitra is a little on edge like Kul'vir (hmm maybe his daughter?) What surprised me the most is Shra'van is the nice one and Ta'noj is the bad one! You really flipped it.
    Another ooman ... Jasmine? Can't wait to see what happens. I really like how the flashbacks is telling the story as well. It's like two stories in one! wtg
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  • From DeathGodDist on June 27, 2007
    Still loving it immensely.

    I think I'm noticing how much Kayla's children take after their mother in different ways. Again, it shows how great a writer you are, when you can go and kill off the main character and have the former "secondary" characters so easily come in and take the spotlight and not feel like things are confusing or whatnot.

    Looks like Ta'noj has found his own pet Ooman. I wonder if she'll be able to calm him down.
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  • From StrawberryFusion on June 27, 2007
    I'm liking it so far, keep up the great work.
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  • From MuseofScrolls on June 25, 2007
    Ah, a new human in the mix, hmmm, Circle? Very interesting, and I already like Jasmine. Apparently, Ta'noj does, too. XD It's definitely interesting seeing more of Kayla's children in this story. Keep at it, and I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on June 25, 2007
    Woot!! Oh, how I do so love your fics. I am glad to see more. I can't wait to see what happens next! =)
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on June 25, 2007
    Can I put my order in for a body massager like that one? Please.

    Ta'noj, pushing a human away! I didn't think I'd see that happen but oh well.

    You know me, love it, would like more when you get the chance to put it up.
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  • From ANON - stewie on June 21, 2007
    How in the H. E. double hockey sticks could you kill Kayla!
    Now I'm curious how the story will unfold without the primary character from the last two. Like others here I'm a little sad over it.
    BUT
    I can't wait to see how you pull it off! So exciting! Hope to see more written about her children, or maybe they will tell more about Kayla.
    Good to see you not fleeing with your tail tucked in between your legs from a few diminishing words. Carry on!
    And thank you for not putting that damn sign in thing for the reviews!
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  • From Nahaujaret on June 20, 2007
    I'm so glad that you decided to continue the series. I am a sad that Kayla is dead since she was the main character. But I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
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  • From Kalar on June 11, 2007
    I like this story very much. I have been a big fan of this series. Please continue, more chapters soon?
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  • From JulieL on June 11, 2007
    You're baaaack. HHmmmm, Ba'naj no longer the rude, crude Yautja dude. I wonder. You know me, can't wait for more.

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  • From ZenRose on June 10, 2007
    I'm glad you guys like it so far! I have many more chapters to go... :)
    Sorry for the long wait.
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  • From prairiefire on June 10, 2007
    OH YEAH!!!

    I am so sad that Kayla is dead, and that Tan'oj might die too. My two favorite characters.


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  • From ANON - lovydovy on June 09, 2007
    Oh yeah! Its finally here. (weeping)Thankyou!!!

    Was it banaj or maybe one of or all of his mates? Will the Kayla's fate be Leena's? Will shlok met Kayla's children of the Jafren? Afeterall they took her eggs.

    It was great reading! I'm looking forward to reading more.
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