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Reviews for Kayla's Revenge

By : ZenRose
  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on August 08, 2007
    I seriously do not like that Sou-sha. Can someone take her down a peg oo two please? Ba'naj maybe or Shra'van. Someone's gotta knock down, or knock her off Circle, they just gotta.

    Can't wait to see what over exciting twists you add in.

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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on August 08, 2007
    And the plot thickens! OOOO, it's getting to be so twisted and good. I can't wait to see what happens next. And no worries on how long it takes to update. I for one will always wait to get the next chapter! =D
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  • From Keen on August 08, 2007
    Yes it was worth the wait. This is becoming the best pred murder mystery ever.

    Kuja’s the best. The way she just calmly diffused that argument between Ta’noj and Mi’tra was just so smooth.

    “Will you allow me to please you this evening,”

    Jasmine’s response should have been: ‘hellz-2-the-yes’. Ta’noj is turning into one sexy bastard. It’s something like Urkel and Stefan. Once he was the obedient and dutiful prim and proper son and now he’s all dead sexy.

    I love the way you show the male’s attachment to Kalya by having them walk away from her screams behind the doors as she fights. The build up so far is flawless, I can’t wait to see how it call comes to a head in the end. Continue doin’ what cha do.

    Ps. Sou-sha needs her ass beat. Not now, but right now.

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  • From ANON - Stewie on August 08, 2007
    Hell yeah it was worth the wait!
    hot damnnnn. Ba'naj and Kayla, although I think he killed her. He come across kind of quick tempered. Jasmine is clueless, I like her quirky character. It keeps getting better....
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  • From ANON - Lina on August 01, 2007
    I love this story!!! Can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - stewie on July 28, 2007
    please update SOON!!!
    today perhaps?
    please????
    (Scratchin' like a crack head!)
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  • From ANON - Malfan on July 20, 2007
    How in the heck did you write a story in a story, lol thats awesome!
    Now I'm fascinated with Kayla's story and the present story. It's not even confusing, good job! Ba'naj is in way too deep. i think he has something to do with her death. Could he have been so jealous he killed her? I hope there is more Ba'naj/Kayla interactions.
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  • From Nahaujaret on July 20, 2007
    I love this chapter, you know exactly how to keep the reader in suspense. Please update soon. I want to know what happens next.
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  • From DeathGodDist on July 15, 2007
    This story is still keeping me hooked. Again, I've said it before, but it just shows how great you are when, even after the death of the main character, you can still keep the story going as strong as ever. Poor Tan'oj, it's been a long time since he's had any female company, he must be in agony. :)

    And I simply enjoy the tantalizing teasers of past happenings between Kayla and Ban'aj, can't wait to see how that develops. Please keep on writing, it's so enjoyable. :)
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on July 14, 2007
    Hello again. It's so nice to see an update. I love it. I can't wait to see more of it. I like the developments thus far. Till next time... =D
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on July 14, 2007
    Thankyou! I am sooooo loving this.

    Poor Kavita getting no love from her Tanoj. I hate the double standard. I could see Kayla being fed up with it, too being only human and all.

    Well I'm looking forward to more. Keep writing gems.
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  • From ZenRose on July 13, 2007
    Thanks Rosei!
    Lovy you ask such good questions, but I can assure you that this story explains everything. Yes one of them do confront Kayla. And there is no Kayla/Jafren offspring. (trying to keep mouth shut so I wont give much away... so.. hard.. to.. do.. lol)
    f/m/m was an accident. It should have been f/f/f/m lol. Ok I know thats a lot.
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on July 12, 2007
    Did Stephna and or Leena confront Kayla about Banaj? I think Stephna has been hiding her true feelings about Kayla and Kulvir for years. She was getting enough of Shlok maybe. One less mate more for her?

    Did one of Banaj's family do the crime? Was it a plot to start a war the Jafren spoke of?

    How will Shlok's and family react if they should they meet Kayla's Jafren offspring?

    Is the new human going to be the one to discover who did it. I saw the FMM pairing note, does that indicate love triangle or sharing a mate the clan way? I have tons of questions cause this story is addicting. Please udate soon.
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  • From Nahaujaret on July 08, 2007
    I love your fic so far. But what else can I expect from a such a great writer. I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to see what happens between Ta noj and Jasmine. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - stewie on July 07, 2007
    Ta'noj got that good and evil thing going on!
    I need an update!
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