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Reviews for Demons

By : LadyRain
  • From megf212 on July 15, 2007
    OOoo! More! More lovely Barbossa sex! lol. I love the roughness. I've always imagined he'd be...well, not gentle man. Mmm...Love it!
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  • From GeorgieFain on June 11, 2007
    urg. do you want some helpful critique? I don't like to do that, because people usually take it the wrong way. but, I love this story. it's so dark, I am in love...but, at the same time, there's something missing. mmmm. maybe some deeper characterization? I feel like the characters are very one-dimensional. if you can dig into the character's reasons/rationales, it would make this story so spicy. make the reader become part of the story through caring why this is going down.


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  • From purefoysgirl on June 10, 2007
    What a great story! It's so nice to see other people exploring the darker side of sexuality, makes me feel less alone! And you managed to maintain the integrity of the characters, so good job!
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  • From Jags on June 10, 2007
    OH HOLY HELL! BUGGERIN BLEEDIN HELL! ~goes silent, speechless~ keep up the good work
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  • From Jags on June 08, 2007
    THAT WAS SO GOOD! More please! More angst more sex more! ...pretty please?
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